Dou Po: Undercover Xiao Yan

You have to bow to the ancestor of the Danta Pagoda Xiao Yan: Xiao Yaochen, come on, call the ancestor to come and listen.

I personally prefer antiques with a little more drama.

Just write some disgusting plots. How can a villain say that he wants Xiao Yan's woman to do this? Why do you just beat him to death so that they can finish what they say? Don't you feel disgusted? You lead your own woman to dance in front of the villain all day long, and then let others insult your own woman. Are you a cuckold? Can't you just interrupt or kill the other party before saying this kind of thing? You have to disgust yourself.

I don't understand. The protagonist is obviously a time traveler and has watched Dou Po. However, in many places in the article, the protagonist behaves like a complete native and has no idea about the plot.

Don't add Aunt Yun and Nalan Puxin to the heroine. The other female characters are all helpful to the protagonist. These two losers keep asking people to pour money into them.

The two chapters about rescuing the little medical fairy are really a novice's novel. Why do you want the other party to talk so much nonsense? A few words of appropriate dialogue are enough.

The author, Gu Er Medusa, has two female protagonists. After all, the Dou Po fanfics you wrote before were all harem novels. This one has two female protagonists. I think it's pretty good.

Don't read it. This book cannot be updated due to the author's work problems. Although the book is good, there is no follow-up. Damn it.

After all, you are a fan, and some of the plots are exactly the same as the original. It is better to subscribe to the chapters. You have to know how to be detailed. For example, there is no need to be so detailed in the chapters about taking the pharmacist's certificate. And why does Xiao Yan have so many inner dramas? He even considered hunting for the soul of the alchemist present. Isn't that right? It's just to highlight the style of the Soul Palace and distort the protagonist's character. You must know that I won't offend others unless they offend me. They didn't offend you. If you want someone else's life, now it's the main hall of the Soul Palace. And how dare Yao Lao cooperate with you like this?

The main character is so stupid and the character interactions are so stupid.

The protagonist of this book, Xiao Hun, lost to the original owner Xiao Yan and died in Chapter 3. From then on, Xiao Hun no longer exists, but Xiao Yan will live forever.

There are only a few Dou Po books that feature Xiao Yan as the protagonist. The other Dou Po books don't have Xiao Yan as the main character, so I can't stand them. This one is pretty good, keep writing.

The author's heroines are Ziyan and Xun'er, Medusa didn't think they were that good.

The last few chapters of yours are simply heavy-handed and perfunctory. You can tell what the content is just by looking at the title. You just have to write that this is a copy of the original work. Everyone is watching the fandom to see what new things you can do, not to review the past. The scenes of Hai Bodong, Qing Lin and the two brothers can be skipped quickly, but it took more than a week to scrape them together. Everyone wants to see new and good things, not the old lady's footcloth😅

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Dou Qi Continent is so big, don't you want to try it? If you have any characters you want, you can write the setting in the book review, and I will add it in time according to the plot The format is as follows: Name: Gender: Character characteristics: Special fighting skills: Background plot setting: Come and design a character that belongs to you

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