Starting from the Tomb Zong World: Golden Crow Yao Shi

The previous Tomb Robbery was okay, but after reaching the end of the sky, it felt like the number of words was too low. More than half of a chapter was about introducing and analyzing the content of the original book. If this is the case, it is better to read the original book.

There is only one heroine who is not even as good as the main character Ye Fan. Look at there are at least 2 Ye Fans

I feel like the protagonist is quite cheap. You can travel through time and have a mythical bloodline. Others call it a divine object. Why are you dumbfounded in the world of cultivation and so on?

Even if you have a golden finger, you still act like a dog. Ability to grab directly. Have you ever seen who traveled through time to rob tombs and who went to lick the Yin family? He even threatened to have the ability to kill him directly. As the saying goes, don't be afraid of wearing shoes if you are barefoot.

The protagonist is extremely talented, with such an IQ, and a mace as a weapon, there are many typos, and the plot is draggy and watery!

This book is useless. What I wanted to read was about tomb robbing, but you ended up pulling the coffin in Kowloon.

The thoughts of primary school students are more naive than naive

It is recommended to teach the protagonist a lesson, let him receive a profound lesson, and then change his character; the current protagonist is naive, has no ability, has a low IQ, and is not strict with his mouth, which makes him look stupid.

Just write it blindly. How come after you went there, everything turned into trouble, and bad things turned into bad things. You buried two children, and the children gave you things to show that they were not bad. Why did you turn into a corpse and attack people after you went there? ? ? Just to show off the ability of your Golden Crow bloodline. If you put tomb robbing and ghost blowing lamps together, the currency system will collapse.

Tell others about your differences. Has the protagonist forgotten that the Zhang family has been studied in various ways? Also, Yin Nanfeng thought that the protagonist had golden eyes and told the protagonist that the previous golden pupil was blinded due to casual use. The protagonist actually wanted to give Yin Nanfeng a big showdown! Are you thinking like a normal person?

It takes too long to introduce abilities and integration. You should go straight to the theme of tomb robbing and then slowly lay the groundwork. Don't be surprised. Even if you have one, you should write an inner monologue so that strangers can't see your cards. You must know that the world of tomb robbing is not a treat. Sometimes the most terrifying thing is not the mechanisms and zombies in the tomb, but the human heart.

The protagonist's expression changes drastically at every turn. From this, it can be seen that the author is either a new author, or he only cares about eating and not fighting. Why do you write this kind of plot if you are good at writing? How much do you think readers like this kind of protagonist who is surprised at every turn? Writing this kind of plot is to show off how good you are at describing your expressions, right?

It feels okay, don't give up, come on, author

The plot is really drawn out. Can you write 7 chapters of one bloodline? ? Genuine cowhide

I want a refund. Author, please give me a refund. I don't want to read it. The more I write, the worse it gets. I have filed a complaint.

I just read Chapter 11, which is a little bit toxic. I feel that the protagonist is a novice who has just left school and has no social experience. Talk to people you just met. But I can still read it so far. I don't know how the author will write later.

The blind date is more disgusting than the idol TV series

I'm speechless. The protagonist himself has the bloodline of the Three-Legged Golden Crow, can gather yang, and has magical powers. If he has something similar to a magic weapon, his worldview will collapse. Only if he has these things in mythical stories, his worldview will not collapse, but if others have it, his worldview will collapse.

It's so long-winded, I can write a chapter just for a cup of tea! Awesome

What kind of tomb can you rob if you don't have the space to carry it with you? ? ?

I wrote about the ghost emerging from the light, and I wrote in the tomb robbing notes, "Marry a wife!" ! ? ? ? ? ?

There hasn't been an update for a month! Is the author a eunuch?

I have always had a question: What is the function of Dongjun's secret code? Before Jiulong pulled the coffin, I didn't understand the function of this secret code! It seems that the protagonist's cultivation relies on sunbathing and luck points to improve his bloodline. The role of the secret book is to attract the attention of the Yin family?

Just play your part as usual. I just listened. It's okay.

What happened to the author? He won't degenerate into a weekly monster, will he?

You, a tomb robber, just jump to cover the sky, but you are also talking about a suture monster like the prehistoric world, and it is even more nonsense that Taiyi can escape under the nose of the saint in the prehistoric world. The world in the third part is clearly created by a weird old man. The Great Luo Immortal Emperor can only cripple the world of the heavens and cannot destroy the logical closed loop. Anyone who tries to make the suture monster the center of the world here can only jump

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Goldfinger is good, it can also be written about tomb robbers, and the fusion of Zhetian is also interesting, but the mastermind behind the scenes, Honghuang, started in a small world and almost died from poison.

Does the author still update? , I hope it doesn't end badly, it looks okay

Is there a demon emperor named Xue Yueqing covering the sky?