Go Crazy! You Call This a Little Monster

Watching Journey to the West is about watching the passion. Your writing is as tender as water. You were beaten by others, but you still cared about the person who beat you like a warm man. The author may have written the wrong subject, you should go for romance.

The biggest disadvantage of fan fiction nowadays is that the protagonists written by authors take themselves too seriously.

I can't stand seeing the Peacock Princess anymore, how horny I am, to accept such a thing as the heroine? To put it bluntly, it's just a handsome dog chasing a bald head and not getting it. He immediately switches sides when the protagonist looks handsome! To put it bluntly, if a handsome guy comes along one day, the protagonist will become a cuckold in no time. . .

I feel that the protagonist's position is strange. He is a demon, and he actually talks about killing people to pay for their lives. What about humans killing demons? Don't you want to become a demon king and rule all demons? I just want to feel like the leader of the race has rebelled.

The protagonist is now a demon, not from the demon's point of view but from the human perspective. One demon kills people, and the other demon righteously asks you to kill people to pay for it with your life. Strange scar

Talking about Xiao Zhuanfeng, he may be a weasel that becomes a spirit, he may be a yellow-haired dog that becomes a spirit, but he will definitely not be a fox that becomes a spirit😁

Haha, let me explain here, there will be some elements of Journey to the West in the front, but not in the back. Please be patient with the newcomers, thank you! ! !

The 800-mile Lion Camel Ridge is definitely the scariest place in the original work. But it was said that Sun Dasheng entered the cave entrance and watched from both sides. I saw—— The skeletons are like mountains and the bones are like forests. People's hair became like felt pieces, and their skin and flesh rotted into mud. People's tendons are wrapped around the trees, and their branches are burnt and shiny like silver. It was really a mountain of corpses and a sea of ​​blood, and the stench was really unpleasant. The little demons in the east took and chopped up the flesh of living people; the demons in the west cooked the human flesh freshly. If the Monkey King had not been so heroic and courageous, no other mortal would be able to enter his door. Those who say this is a mountain of corpses and a sea of ​​blood underestimate them. Sun Wukong was also frightened. "More than four hundred miles into the west, he suddenly saw a city approaching. The great sage raised an iron rod and was only one mile away from the sedan. The sight of the city frightened him and made him fall." These are descriptions in the original work, and they really are not according to the 1986 edition of "Journey to the West". In the 1986 version of "Journey to the West", there was beautiful scenery, but here there was a mountain of corpses and a sea of ​​blood.

Let's just say it! It just smells of embarrassment, just that awkward. In fact, if I want to say that the writing of this article is okay, I mean the writing style, but the plot is just awkward.

Thank you "Moon and Symphony" for voting 2 monthly votes, it is very powerful😊

I'm really curious about the format of this book? Is the author a studio writer?

What is the difference between this and copying TV series? He doesn't even change his lines. He's really mentally retarded, right?

Xiao Zhuanfeng... Shouldn't look like this

It's poisonous. After reading the first 3 chapters, I feel overconfident. Where does the confidence come from?

It's not a problem to keep writing the name Xiao Zuanfeng. There is not even a name, and there is no sense of substitution. Anyway, the protagonist won't just stay in one instance. It is recommended that you have at least a name when you say goodbye, at least a real person's name to remember. It will come back as the strength improves. After all, when fighting, women will only affect the speed of drawing the sword. . . .

Is this Journey to the West or the Wilderness? Wearing the cover of Journey to the West again, can you authors take a good look at the original work of "Journey to the West"?

I really like the relationship between Xiao Zhuanfeng and Princess Peacock, it's pure and beautiful, and it's enviable

Xiao Zhuanfeng is a tiger. Not a fox

The plot is getting better and better, becoming more and more exciting!

Isn't the follow-up order too high? It feels like it's below 5.

It's a bit miserable to follow up 😚

It's really good. It's a pity that I discovered it too late because it's such a good book.

The collection has been updated, and the author will update more frequently.

March is indeed the beginning of spring, why is February the beginning of spring? February is winter

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It was really fun to watch before it was put on the shelves, very comfortable.