The Heavens Begin with Mo Yangchen

I was very happy when I first saw that it was a "Snow Eagle Lord" fanfic. Chapter 70 arranged for the protagonist to become a disciple of the Master of Time and Space Island (agree with the 4th floor view). The reason for abandoning the book was to let the protagonist seize the chance of Dong Bo Snow Eagle (making the protagonist become the master of Red Stone Mountain)

The pace of Zhutianwen is faster than that of the original work. Don't be too fast or it will collapse. You need to add the world view, background, and characters of the original text through interspersing, etc., So that people can understand it better, and newcomers can also read it, but don't be too verbose, because there are really very few fans of Lord Snow Eagle, which means that as long as it is not too vicious, readers who like Snow Eagle will support you, come on ^0＾~

The author gives you a suggestion: don't suppress the realm of the protagonist, and don't wander around in this world all the time. The title of your book seems to be about time travel. It's not good to suppress it like this. I don't think you can write more than 2 million words.

There is no way out if you update once a day. To put it bluntly, if a daily update does not have 4,000 words, unless you are a great person and have regular fans, you will definitely fail.

The plot is incoherent, focusing on a sense of division, right? 😅 It creates no sense of immersion

The greater the hope, the greater the disappointment. If you want to read a Snow Eagle Lord fanfic, don't read it as soon as possible. The harder it is to watch from a distance There are so many things written in Chaoren. This is not a waste material. If you can write something original like this, why don't you write something original? What kind of fanfic do you write?

Why was it that it was okay if Mo Yangchen didn't bring Mo Yangyu back, but when he came to the protagonist, there were so many problems? If you use the taunting halo, you must give the protagonist a whole lot of enemies.

At the end of the book, the protagonist let his sister go, fell out with his family, and got a very unattractive golden finger (I couldn't remember what the golden finger was just after I finished reading). The other content is not interesting. I feel that there are more than 60 chapters, and it would be better to condense it into 3 chapters.

It's so long-winded, the upgrades are so slow, there are all kinds of deliberate conflicts, passive responses, dozens of chapters are about to be released, and I'm still grinding away before transcendence, let's take a look at the upgrade rhythm of the original work.

It seems that he is going to join the Temple of Time and Space.

Author, you write about astronomy! The progress is so slow, does it take a thousand chapters to change the world?

I remember that in Lord Snow Eagle, the Great Demon God and the Witch God did not reach an agreement at the beginning. Later, Snow Eagle probably re-signed the contract after destroying the Great Demon God's body!

There are so many Lord Snow Eagle fans, come on

When I saw Chapter 43, it was too messy, the character presentation was too awkward, and there was basically no image building. The protagonist, a mixed-race male succubus servant who is very good at drawing scrolls, and a talented broken bird...

The protagonist is simply the Holy Lord. He practices this path, controls his beliefs, and controls his destiny. He is a proper villain.

No heroine? Is it necessary to raise two nephews as sons? It's better to just raise two sons. Xue Ying, it doesn't matter if he has talent, Qing Shi, why are you so nice to him? Forget about throwing it away. In the original novel, Xue Ying didn't pay much attention to this younger brother. At the critical moment, he fished a handful out of the river and chatted with him for a while without having to kick him back.

The writing is quite good, there is no obvious poison, but there are a few updates, and the writing style is okay.

I would like to give you some advice. It is better to be the Erlang God in the Lotus Lantern than to be a licking dog. Why did Dongbo Snow Eagle become stronger in the early stage? It was to save his parents. He was born in sorrow and died in happiness 😂😂 Do you understand what I mean? That's it 😅

I haven't watched much of Lord Snow Eagle, and I would like to ask, is the Mo family really that bad? 😓