Log into the Wild World 10,000 Years in Advance

The author still doesn't know how to write about players. The reason why players are called the fourth natural disaster is not just because they can be resurrected infinitely. Greed is their nature, treachery is synonymous with them, and deception and betrayal are commonplace. Also, before the protagonist comes to this world, players can learn the techniques. Why can players only learn from the protagonist after he arrives? In short, a lot of things are not written well. No matter how long the novel is, once you finish it, a lot of people will read it.

Dihua, but Dihua is too silly and too forceful. 😅

It's confusing, the plot line is very confusing, and it suddenly jumps into a small plot that has little to do with the main plot, with forcible foreshadowing and explanation. There are some paragraphs where I don't know who the protagonist is. I'd better write it for the public to see. The author may know the outline himself, and only after writing it can understand the meaning. Readers don't know, it's very confusing, and the fighting power at the end is a bit fierce, and the classification is not very clear. I hope the author can keep up the good work. I read it a bit confusing, so I'll say it slowly.

This book gave me the feeling that the words were messy, the plot was messy, and the characters were messy. Players should not be written about. I felt that players were redundant!

Why do so many people talk about developing technology? Technology is not such a simple thing. It has bottlenecks. After reaching a certain level, it is difficult to continue to make breakthroughs. Just talk about how long it will take for a nuclear fusion technology to break through. But if you want to develop from 0 to a mature extraordinary system, the time required is unimaginable.

Stop talking about raising books! Let's talk about purple sand! It's not easy to be an author. Give me a chance and support me! You all have books, and I have no motivation to update them! Please, stop talking about raising books!

Read to chapter one hundred and thirty-eight. The male protagonist has not looked good since the second era. The author puts too many constraints on the male protagonist. I originally read the article for fun, but you are obviously interfering in the outside world to suppress the plot. I'm not looking forward to the rest of the story at all.

The first 30 chapters are comfortable to read and I think they are good food. Chapter 30-142 are getting more and more boring and boring. Chapter 143 makes me want to abandon the book. Originally, your description of the wild world in the early stage was quite good, but now it becomes the four continents. Isn't it disgusting? Of course, it's not that I think the Four Continents are bad, but that you don't look like you. Can you write something of your own?

Shen Nong tasted hundreds of herbs and made money without dying

The front part is okay, but the back part is very messy, and the plot randomly pops up some unmentioned things. For example, this "Central Domain Stone Stele!" And that strange feeling came from under the stone tablet! However… Su Mu used all his strength, but still couldn't shake the stone tablet at all. Tried for a day. Su Mu quietly retreated to the battlefield. Beyond the realm. The stone monument that reaches the sky is under Su Mu's pressure. After resisting for a moment, with a soft sound, the barrier disappeared. " Where did your barrier come from? ? ? The increase in combat power is also explosive, and you have been in seclusion for thousands of years - invincible Author, if you have an outline, ideas, and plot, at least mention it, don't pop it up out of nowhere.

I've said that I often visit forums, and pig-footed people are stupid, right? Others can see it, but he can't. Your explanation is feeble. No one is discussing it, right? The thinking and logic are not good. Which popular book now has normal thinking and logic? Still outstanding

Not to mention that the protagonist is a modern person, he can lead the tribesmen to develop "technology", but he may not be able to do it himself. Let the tribesmen research and develop it on their own, ten thousand years is not bad.

The protagonist's behavior and brain are not normal, and he doesn't think like a modern person.

Let's just say that the length of the game before it was launched should be reduced a bit, it's already a bit boring now. And one thing I don't understand is that the protagonist has a very big problem, and he has been practicing in a mysterious space for 800 years. After coming out, there are people who are better than him. I really can't understand this.

Until now, I have only seen that players can only purchase skills to increase attributes through experience. I really want to give experience to the protagonist. I have removed the setting that players can become stronger by touching corpses, and I am still playing a game. It is just a one-person game.

Very good, but the protagonist's brain is not normal

I just want to ask the protagonist when he knew that his tribe was the Fire Tribe... Now that I have read Chapter 16, I just want to ask what my tribe is called, and I have to live a life of escape...

Except for Wenzhao Gong, who wrote about immortality and survived by changing copies, the other authors are now being criticized for suppressing their power.

I had a question in the first chapter. I already have the concept of a room, but I'm still using a bone knife? No stone tools appeared, so where did the house come from?

Most longevity essays are like this. You are immortal. As a modern person, what you should think about is not cultivation, but the development of science and technology. Under the leadership of an immortal modern man, technology is definitely advancing by leaps and bounds. Is it still a thing for players to arrive five thousand years later? Once players arrive, take control. Whether you are doing research or something else, the player is the perfect guinea pig.

It is indeed a very good book, one that I am willing to read more among so many books I have read.

See if I am happy

I don't keep books, but you have to know what to do. Don't force the tenth update, there should always be the fifth update!

The writing is excellent (so far), keep writing, it doesn't matter if you write less, you must maintain the quality.

After reading so many chapters, I am very curious whether it is "Xihe Niuzhou" or "Xihe Niuzhou"

This book is very well written and I'm looking forward to the rest of it.

See if I am happy

Refining

Just tell me whether it's faster or not

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