Zhetian: the Immortal Phoenix Falls from the Sky, I Will Become the Immortal Emperor!

I looked at it and couldn't stand it at all. In the original book, there is only one Phoenix elixir in the immortal world. I now have a Wutong elixir, and the Immortal Emperor will be more powerful than in the original work. The most difficult thing for the Red Dust Immortal is the third life. Generally, after the third life, most people will continue to transform, and the danger will be much reduced in the following times. Also, I felt particularly uncomfortable watching the Immortal Emperor making love to the Holy Maiden from the Yao Pond. The Immortal Emperor can even defeat Emperor Hu west, and even become the father of Wu Shi.

The writing is outrageous. Originally, I came in because the Emperor of Death was the main character. But it turns out that the Emperor of Death has no original flavor at all. You said that he was a time traveler who traveled to the childhood of the Emperor of Death. However, it turns out that it took millions of years from the end of mythology to the post-wild ancient era to meet a Yaochi Saint. You have lived these millions of years in vain. The Emperor of Death is respected by all races. What kind of woman has not been seen during his reign? For such a long time, the mind is like that of a person who has not graduated from elementary school. The original Immortal Emperor was the sixth child in the top 3 of Zhetian. Which one of Taiyang, Douzhan, Taihuang, and Wushi has not been tricked by him. But when it comes to you, the protagonist is a little white sheep wearing a phoenix skin. He must be domineering, but not domineering, and sinister, but not sinister. Is he still the Immortal Emperor? What about his courage when he attacked Emperor Zun and the Eternal Emperor? What have you become? The Immortal Emperor in our minds is not like this. Author, if you really want to achieve good results, please change some of the bloody plots in the front. Don't turn fantasy fans into romance fans. After all, there are a few people writing about the Immortal Emperor at the beginning. I don't want this book to be abandoned so early. It's a pity (I may be a bit rude about what I said before)

The female protagonist breaks the male protagonist's way and becomes the emperor. . Is the Immortal Emperor so weak? Ye Fan can't break through ten thousand ways when the Immortal Emperor is on the throne, right?

Another one who read a bunch of fanfics. I just got excited and started writing about the guy who covers the sky.

Really, if you can't write it, don't be so fussy. What kind of Yaochi saint will you meet in the future? Be smart and find the Western Emperor. Be Wu Shi's father and suppress him a few times while he is young. Then you travel to Shi Hao's period. The reason is the energy of the great formation. If you travel through time and space and go back to the past, the quasi-immortal emperor can only fight. You can still live there, so just start the game. The golden finger plug-in means that you can travel through time and space, otherwise how can you explain this? How can Perfect Covering the Sky have this ability? You have to put a plug-in to explain it. It is better to write about traveling through time and space in the future. It is better to meet some great emperors. For example, if you are awesome at the Demon Emperor and let him become emperor when you come back, you will find that your home has been stolen, or you will have fun with the one who is in the way of human desire, and you will do such a bad thing.

The organization is not clear, the writing is too bad, and sometimes it is embarrassing. The Immortal Emperor is a waste!

You can really write a book about anything and become an author.

Come on, Shen Nong, tell me, what do you think of this book? ? ?

The writing was too messy and I couldn't stand it, so I ran away

I can't stand it. It's such a mess. I'm dizzy. This plot is haha.

I just can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 4, it's so confusing.

What rubbish? What is this first chapter about? Is this a fan of Zhetian?

It's very well written, I suggest you don't write it again

Come on, can you recommend anything like this?

This introduction is really hard to describe.

The three golden chapters are extremely poisonous, so poisonous that the corpses of dead people will turn to pus and pus.

From the Immortal Emperor to Feng Linghong, this is changing from a god to a human being. You no longer have the majesty of the Immortal Emperor.

How do I remember that when I can't afford the medicine and embark on the path of a monk, I no longer want the elixir?

Very well written, keep it up. 👍

What happened in the era of the Third Master of the Bronze Coffin? The real master should have succeeded in becoming a realm above the transcendent realm. After the realm became unstable and was counterattacked by the power of the real taboo, something weird and unknown happened. Or maybe several strong men of the same level from outside the world united together to not want the real master to truly grow, so they launched a curse on the real master?

It's poisonous, you can take a look at those who are bad.

That's not true, okay?

Want to know more about the burial pit of the Emperor of Heaven? ? ?

Child, go to sleep, you are not suitable

It made me laugh. The elixir was actually the Immortal Emperor. I took it. Do you know what the Immortal Emperor is?

Good guy, the heroine's name is actually Fang Xuanling? ?

Your subject matter is similar to what I think, why not write about the Immortal Emperor?

The writing is very good. Please don't write it again. I would like to ask what the score was on the essay test.

Author, come on, stick to yourself