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It seems that the label is that there is no heroine, but in my opinion, the heroine will be Gardevoir sooner or later 😏

The writing is good, but there is a problem. I think this is a darker genre. You write a little too much about the emotions expressed by elves. In fact, I think if you want to write a bond genre, it is more promising to write an elf novel with a light and humorous style. I have read all the latest ten chapters, and I feel that you should have no problem with that style. Chirulian is quite fun in some places. Nowadays, there is really no audience for dark literature, so I opened a new book and changed the style to stop the loss immediately. Don't write bad things in your next book. You'll be very angry when you write it, and you'll be very angry when readers read it. Naturally, it won't be well-received. If it goes on for a long time, it will be torture.

Although I don't like dark elf novels, the author's writing style is really good, and the elf has great character. I hope that the follow-up works will be more relaxed and humorous.

I didn't want to open it at first, but now it doesn't matter. The quality after it is put on the shelves will generally be higher than before it is put on the shelves. It is worth subscribing in terms of ideas and practical information.

Well written, don't be a eunuch

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Overall, it's a good book. Please read it boldly. But for me personally, the reading after it is put on the shelves is not as good as before it is put on the shelves. It's obvious that the further it goes, the more it leans towards the light novel genre. After being put on the shelves, these photos can basically be summarized as "women + doing research". It can be felt that the author's focus is on improving the overall image of the protagonist. I think this direction is right. What villains, especially those who are decisive in killing, are most afraid of is being unscrupulous and eventually turning into a murderer. I still remember reading an article before where the protagonist turned into an animal and then traveled through various worlds to become stronger step by step. Later, the author gave up on the book halfway through and opened a single chapter saying that he could not continue writing because the protagonist had turned into a killing animal. After he became more powerful, he would kill everyone in every world. But what makes me feel a little uncomfortable when reading it is that the author may want to make the protagonist three-dimensional too much, so that in my opinion it is a bit too hasty. Mainly in the study of heroines and elves. After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist suddenly started to have sex with women around the time it was released, and to be honest, I found the heroine's love line a bit baffling. It gives me the impression that the heroine was curious after meeting the protagonist, and then she focused on filming him, and then because of loneliness? Directly with the male protagonist. I feel like it can be handled more smoothly, and the time can even be extended. Even the tsundere of the heroine can be reflected through simple daily life. For example, there is a small easter egg at the end of each chapter, such as the elf privately calling the heroine to tell the heroine interesting things, and then the heroine secretly writes them down, or the heroine spends a day shopping with the hero with a cold face, and then returns home to be silly and happy by herself. It might look better this way. Then there is the aspect of elf research. To be honest, I feel that this section is a bit dreamy and unreal. I think it's okay for the protagonist to do experiments for his younger brother's wife, and it's okay for him to find new ideas to apply to enter the Mewtwo experiment, but when it came to the lab for the assessment, I felt like I was watching a taciturn version of Long Aotian + a romance game where the male protagonist guides the female protagonist's family. Because I watched it all the way, I thought that I would pass my own discoveries in the laboratory, or come up with a specific result to join the laboratory, and then help the Chaomeng Project, get favored by the organization, and even give Chaomeng a back-up. It turned out to be a laboratory love game. . . When it is dyed, the flaws cannot be concealed. The advantages of this book are also obvious: The reality of the elves' worldview lays a strong foundation for the content of the whole text to a certain extent. For example, the ecosystem of wild elves suddenly becomes complete. Unlike some elven literature, elves are naturally raised, and even like in the game, they can become stronger by fighting and eating energy fruits. . . The protagonist is "brainful" in his behavior. He will not only kill his enemies decisively, but also make compromises based on the situation. Finally, I still want to mention that if the emotional line of this book is written like this, it may become a comic novel from my personal point of view. After all, it is a traditional tsundere female protagonist who is lonely and captured the heart of the male protagonist. Even if the protagonist is three-dimensional. That has to be based on the protagonist himself. Do you feel like you have a bit of a split personality now? Finally, lastly, typing so many words is not to criticize this book. This is just my personal opinion. When an author writes a book, the old rule is not to be too influenced by the readers. Come on

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Let's mate Chilulian with double S and Alureduo with three S. The S's of the two do not coincide with each other. Is there any chance to breed Lalu Lasi with five S talent🤔

The setting is good, but there are too many dramas