After Signing in for Ten Years in the Republic of China, I Discovered That It Was Actually a Zombie World

I gave up the book when I saw Chapter 11 about accepting a disciple. I accepted a disciple as soon as I came down from the mountain. Zhang Daudao is older than you, so you accept someone as a disciple? Will you pay the recipient 10 yuan a month? Was labor so expensive in the Republic of China? You are so rich, farewell~

I just looked at the catalog, it's OK, there's nothing wrong with it 🤫 After descending from Longhu Mountain, we immediately arrived at Maoshan's sphere of influence, cowhide

The writing is okay. For this type of subject matter, you must write a good contrast between realms during fighting scenes. Magic skills are easier to bring into intuitive feelings. The protagonist is not decisive enough yet, and for small minions like Mr. Tan and Awei's teammates, don't waste too much energy on appearing twice and just kill them. Readers have little expectation for such minions. (Of course, if you want water, I have nothing to say)

Tianshi Dao came to the territory of Maoshan. You are sick. Hire a servant for 10 yuan per person per month. Can you have some common sense? At that time, the purchasing power of an ocean was very powerful, okay?

Does the author have no common sense? In those days, hamburgers were just beef with two slices of bread. If you didn't want to eat beef, you'd order a hamburger.

He is like Zhang Zhiwei who is superior to other people. He is as young as the protagonist, but he feels much more awesome than the protagonist. It's really irritating to see the little minions touching each other.

Even if it's a woman, is she sick? Do you like you even if you are a girl?

I gave up immediately after reading Chapter 8. It felt too toxic.

Overall it looks okay, but I always feel like there's something missing.

How pitiful, 130,000 words and only 5 comments. Give you a thumbs up @6

Who is the heroine? Can you mark it? If your surname is Ren, then I won't read it.

Didn't get first place

Does the author write about the treasures in Longhu Mountain? As far as I know, there are three treasures in Longhu Mountain. One is the Dharma Seal, and the other is the male and female sword. The male and female sword was given to Zhang Tianshi by Taishang Laojun when he accepted Zhang Tianshi as his disciple. There is also a big seal called Yangping Zhidu Gong Seal. This seal can command hundreds of gods. These three treasures are the inherited treasures of Longhu Mountain. The protagonist must get it~

Second again

The cat that lives above me_ Looking forward to the follow-up. Jun💔jun, I'm here to support you. Come quickly (Yi Lingjiu, its Yi Yi, stay with Yi Qi) {"NickName":" slave","UserId":216595106}

Speed ​​update, I can't sleep at night

It's so fast, I feel like the smooth results I'm looking at are stuck. . . A good book is to be read quickly!

As a Taoist priest, if you build a Taoist temple, shouldn't it be a Taoist temple?

The author is not clear about the difference between a master and a master. According to the protagonist's situation, the contemporary Longhushan Zhang Tianshi is the protagonist's master!

Even with my eyes closed, I know what the author is going to write.