Conquering the Heavens Through Martial Arts

Chapter 82, what a mentally retarded plot. The protagonist kills people but doesn't kill them all, and has to keep Luo Sha to be saved. What else can this plot do besides disgusting readers? It feels like the protagonist's body has been upgraded and he has entered the realm of seeing God and not being bad, but his brain is broken. Generally, people like Luo Sha and Ye Cang should not be sealed into scrolls and taken away after killing them? In the ninja world, the body of a ninja is also of great value, but the protagonist just threw it there, and Luo Sha was later revived, which was also a disaster. The author is afraid that too many well-known ninjas will die and there will be no plot, right?

I'm really speechless. . . Thousands of tons and tens of thousands of tons can beat the complete Susanoo. This logic is so stupid that it is equivalent to dozens of speeding heavy trucks that can smash the complete Susanoo. There are still 800,000 equivalents that can destroy the island. It makes me laugh. This island is so small. . . Do you know how much equivalent the Castle of Applause is to destroying a kilometer of island? It took tens of millions of Cheer Castles to blow up one kilometer of the island. It is recommended that the author add more common sense

I was really fucked. I read a few chapters and felt something was wrong, but I didn't feel anything was wrong. Then I watched the dialogue between the protagonist and Kurenai Yuhi. Isn't this the way to write fantasy dialogues? I cut off a sentence: "The legendary realm, only a few people in the entire ninja world can reach it."

Don't be fooled, it has extremely high poison properties, is extremely outrageous, and is very discouraging. The protagonist is senior to Shikaku, and Shikaku is Minato's senior, and then the protagonist calls Minato his senior? Just after World War II, he dated the adult Yuhi Kurenai and then accepted Kakashi as his disciple? The last time I saw such an outrageous setting was in One Piece, where Zoro was asked to deliver letters and lead the way to Luffy. You can't write fan fiction just by giving it a name. Please respect the original work. It doesn't have to be as rigorous as the textual research party, but at least there shouldn't be any plot that causes readers to have cognitive impairment.

Author of Yun Hokage! . Just put on a Hokage skin and write it by force?

I read the latest chapter in one go. The writing is super exciting. It can be regarded as the best among many fan fictions. The IQ of both the protagonist and the supporting characters in this book is online and there are no poisonous points. I give the author 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ praise. The only worry is that the protagonist's strength value rises too fast and I am afraid that the book will collapse later. This is a humble worry from a reader.

Persuade you to quit in Chapter 4? Death from poison. . . It's like writing about a red aunt, etc. It's quite important to write a fan timeline. . . Zhu Tianwen's emotional harem drama is a fixed poison pit

This author's writing is a little better than other fans, but the plot of the original work, especially the timeline, is ridiculously wrong. Those who should be alive are dead, and those who should be dead are still alive. . If you can tolerate this, try taking a look. . .

Let me just say one thing: the protagonist has risen to the level of six levels of strength in Naruto. In Hunter World, not only does he not kill everyone, but he is trash. Although he may have been injured due to traveling through the world, the protagonist still has all the abilities of the Samsara Eye, the realm of indestructible gods, and a body of iron bones and steel skin. As a result, even the Spider Brigade was able to go back and forth with the protagonist, and in the end, he tricked the protagonist and ran away. It's really rubbish. I really regret subscribing.

The author likes anti-intellectual characters like Jiraiya. He was deceived and still moved himself. He was poisonous.