Douluo: Overturning the Gods

After reading twenty chapters, I feel more and more... Three points One: Banyu, the protagonist wants to show his character through certain actions, but the plot and context you choose in the early stage do not match at all, and it does not play an attractive role, but makes people feel very embarrassed. Two: Bai Shayi, I don't know whether the subsequent description of this character will be the most descriptive or have special arrangements. But in the early stage, the author quoted this character if he just wanted to show that the protagonist had to protect Yuanyang when he was young (which can be expressed in the training room), and it has been shown before that the protagonist is an LSP, so now he went to Gu Liang to give people a sense of discomfort as Yang Wei entered the club. Of course it is possible to accumulate soul power, but it is only the accumulation of soul power. The level is stuck for you. You suddenly give the protagonist a first soul ring without even getting a second or second. Just like the protagonist in a cultivation novel, the energy (Qi, spiritual energy, etc.) Of the same level is several times or even dozens of times more than the average person. Even so, the protagonist is still just practicing Qi, and will not be said by others that he is the second level of foundation building. The basis given by the author is Qian Renxue and Tang San. Qian's Xiantian Twenty is Shenwu (no one knows if it is possible to bring a soul ring, and it can be explained by the power of gods). Tang's Thirteen is a level that comes only after he obtains his first soul ring. No one said he was Thirteen before he obtained it. We can understand that the protagonist's soul power is very strong, but one level is only for Qi training. Because he has too much energy, he thinks he is the second level of the golden elixir, and others also think he is the second level of the golden elixir. It gives people a sense of division.

The writing is quite good, but I feel it is better to write a system. I read dozens of them, and the conclusions I draw are all the main character's hysteria. Without any experiments, just relying on my own brain? I don't understand. It seems ridiculous to dare to put it on myself without even having a guinea pig. It's better to come up with a system and then give out missions that fit the main line. No matter how bad Douluo is, how can all generations of people be Sb? I can come up with it just by thinking about it, which is really untenable, but it is still much better than other brainless novels. After all, there are not many big names in this category, not to mention Douluo, which is particularly good for new writers. I know everyone about fan fiction. How can the popularity generated by other works surpass the original work itself? This book is still very good.

Douluo fandom has the biggest drawback. In other words, there is convergence. That means you can't stop the car. The protagonist is too powerful. Personally, I think the cool thing about Douluo is the colorful soul rings. The author arranged for the martial soul to fuse with the soul ring to improve the quality of the martial soul, but it does not affect the appearance of the soul ring. Be holy in front of others. At present, it seems that the protagonist can no longer touch the enemy, and the situation is smooth. It is best not to go into deep settings for self-created God and Demon Bones. If you want to turn to the heavens later. You can take care of Tang San's entire universe first. What divine seal Dzi beads? Then, I really want to turn around. Definitely keep one hanging. The protagonist has savvy. But from a refreshing perspective, this is actually not satisfying at all. It just feels like I came up with the technique after just thinking about it. I'll just DIY a fun plug-in. 1. Infinite Soul Ring (Because the protagonist combines the soul master system with the system created by himself to create a new system and go out of his own way, no longer restricted by the rules of the universe, he can continue to absorb the soul ring as long as his body can hold it. The soul ring will become "fuel", promote the improvement of cultivation, and understand the "Tao" of the ring holder) 2. Law Coverage (The protagonist comes out of the Douluo Universe, Yin and Yang are different. If you get the ability to refine soul rings, or simply let the sword have this function, a soul ring will be born if you are killed by the protagonist's spirit. For example, when you come to the Godzilla world, the law overrides it and forcibly defines Godzilla as a "soul beast". If you kill it, you can explode the soul ring. As long as you can beat it, you can have unlimited soul rings. You can try some superhuman soul rings later) This complements each other and creates a sustainable cycle. Think about what is on Ye Fan's tripod. They are all marks left by Ye Fan's enemies. The protagonist can also play this game. After one sword blow, his soul will be gone. In this way, the two swords will become a classic of mountains and seas, which is very B-style.

I think it's okay. It's much better than those that force you to level up, have unclear logic, and have no system to ask your grandfather to sue your grandmother. I feel that the protagonist of this book is a bit like a ruthless person in Zhetian. He doesn't have a strong physique, but he makes up for it with his own talents. Maybe it's because he's a little tired of reading too many YY cool articles. I admire those protagonists who can find their own way. Who else but the creator can say that they can completely match the skills given by the system, even if they are rubbish? I always feel that the system is a conspiracy. There are millions of people in this world and you are not special. You don't have what the system wants. Why should it help you become stronger and give you what you want?

Maybe I am more selfish. If it were me, I would not easily give the secret of my strength to others. Even if the success rate of this secret is very low, I won't say a word! I will only help my relatives and loved ones. You have to wait until I reach my peak before I can announce it!

Come and read with me

Shennong's message: This is a very poisonous book. The protagonist has been trying to use the power of thinking, but the key is still fucking successful. He can't do anything before time travel. After time traveling, he uses the power of thinking to cause trouble and rain. There is no logic at all, and the protagonist keeps pretending to be cool and brainless. It's pretentious (like a fool to imitate Madara Uchiha), and the main character is a big-mouthed person who talks about everything. I've read so many Douluo fanfics, and this book is the one the author is most proud of. I couldn't read it until I've even read twenty chapters. I've died from the poison, and those who forget to come cherish it! ! !

The protagonist is still hesitant to kill a scumbag who is preparing to commit suicide. This is not called respecting life, it is called lack of firm will.

In order to irritate you, I endured the nausea and read the original work. First of all, among the Five Elements Academy, only Tianshui Academy accepts civilians, but only women, and secondly, Lanba Academy. But these two are not as good as Shrek Academy. First, if you join Shrek Academy before Tang San, you can get two top-end talented younger brothers, Oscar and Ma Hongjun. Second, Shrek Academy has fewer students and more teachers. Three soul saints can give the protagonist soul rings. Which school can do this. Shrek Academy is nothing, but it is suitable for the protagonist to go to.

Please don't call me Tian Dao, it's such a rude name⊙⊙

I understand. The protagonist respects life and shares his skills with his friends. He wants to be domineering but instead becomes a funny boy and acts as a gift boy. Just to eat Qianjia's bowl of soft rice. If you have murderous intentions at the slightest disagreement, you are too selfish and domineering, and you will definitely not be able to become a son-in-law of thousands of families.

The first ten chapters are somewhat interesting and can barely be rounded off. After that, the writing becomes more complicated and embarrassing, and the main character is inexplicably overpowered at every turn. So why did you write so awesomely before?

Why was it that a modern person could create his own amazing skills in the past?

I can only say that it was pretty good at the beginning, but it started to disgust me when I got to Chapter 50. The soul master system was established by the gods. It is impossible to defeat the gods without external power. If you want to defeat the gods, you must at least become a god.

The first few dozen chapters are well written and can be regarded as food and fodder. But starting from the plot of going to Wuhun Palace, it was very poisonous. (You are a soul sect of more than 40 levels, with the strength of a soul emperor in a short period of time, and the plots you write are all about Douluo level and god level things. Just ask the protagonist how he feels to be involved. Why do you control a top powerhouse like Qiandao Liu Bibi Dong, and even play against the Rakshasa God? You have no backstage or trump cards, so many secrets Just open your mouth, and anyone can slap you to death with a backhand.) (You can do whatever you want with your strength. If you are above level 40, you can enter the academy, fight spirit competitions, collect fairy grass, and improve your strength. You do nothing every day. You just dominate the strong ones and play against titled Douluo and gods. Do you have the strength to know?)

I get scared when I see my own self-created exercises. I can't even do broadcast gymnastics well in the real world. Once I go to another world, I'll create another one, NB. I, Emperor Huangtian, would like to call you the strongest😎

A small detail. Children aged 4-6 years old, let alone whether their bodies can bear 8 hours of exercise a day, must eat a lot even if they can bear it. Common people really may not be able to afford it.

Stop updating now, don't write anymore, the relationship between mother and daughter is so disgusting, it really makes people angry. I came here to see Douluo, and I want to see mother and daughter reconcile and have a good result. Who the hell came here to see the heavens, a world in the sewers, reaching perfection, what a joke, and finally returning to Douluo, just kidding, a perfect Supreme to Douluo. It is estimated that Douluo couldn't bear it and collapsed. It is estimated that the protagonist abandoned those women, and his true body was experienced in various worlds. A trace of spiritual consciousness accompanied them independently in Douluo, and he was separated from them. The difference in life levels is so big that they can't get close. How can they get close when they are close? It's time to transform into a Tao. Especially in Douluo, if you have reached half a step of Dhamma Body, is there such a condition? The entire Douluo is not as big as Dhamma Body, and there is no condition for cultivation.

Why do you feel disgusted when you look at Bibi Dong, why do you have to accept Bibi Dong, a crazy woman, a crazy woman who has been hurt by men, a person who hates the world, how can she fall in love with a little brat?

This book is even more outrageous than some systems. Self-created exercises are available at your fingertips. Most of the inspiration comes from various two dimensions. The logic given is also very perfunctory. Over forty levels are called teaching people to become gods. Teaching others to achieve Daluo Daoguo and reverse time. The key is that they believed it and successfully embarked on this path.

It's amazing. I was an ordinary person in my previous life, but I immediately became a great martial arts master. After reading a few novels and movies, I was able to create my own martial arts.

I can only say that the protagonist is stronger than Marvel's Tony. You can create whatever you think of, at least Tony needs to learn the knowledge and experiment. The protagonist can be created simply by making sense.

I think it's pretty good! Those who have read the original work also know that the personalities of these characters are actually similar. I have read a lot of Douluo fanfics, and this genre is actually quite good. At least it is much better than those that have a system and just have everything, not just air every second! The point is that the protagonist knows what he wants and is willing to take action, which is great! No shame in your heart, no shame in your actions! ! !

Between Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, it is always Bibi Dong's fault. Bibi Dong was forced to encounter the secret room incident because of her betrayal. She forcibly put resentment on Qian Renxue. She had a thousand reasons to explain, but Qian Renxue did not have a correct reason to be treated like this. She should not ask Qian Renxue to listen to her when the resentment was put on Qian Renxue. Now it is because the man does not want this daughter. This is really unjust. Anyway, I don't like this result.

To be honest, Shrek Academy is really not bad. The training environment may not be as good as other academies, but in Douluo Continent, Shrek Academy is basically equivalent to a university. The most important thing about a university is not how well it teaches or how much you can learn, but the network of people and relationships. Let's talk about the teachers first. They may not be as strong as the top colleges in terms of strength, but they are still above average. In addition to the masters behind them, regardless of their character, at least they have a wide range of knowledge. The theory of the original setting is the strongest. Even if you don't agree that this is the original author's setting, can you still argue with the author? As for the connections, the daughter of Prince Shrek Xingluo and the Duke, the only daughter of Qibao Liuli, and Tang San, who became a god, Xiao Wu, a hundred thousand year spirit beast, also came with two hundred thousand year spirit beast younger brothers. Can this classmate's connections be found outside? Even if he could, it would be much more difficult to develop and establish good relationships with thousands of students in other colleges than at Shrek. Basically, they would become brothers after entering Shrek.

It felt like Xiao Wu was Tang San's chance. Because of her, Tang San got the sacrifices of the two beast kings, and then personally cut off the last hope of the soul beast clan, and plotted to kill the three-eyed golden leopard.

The poison started in Chapter 16, and I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing more than 40. Originally, it would be better for you to write the male protagonist's penance in a normal way than to go to that liar academy.

For personal reasons, I hate the Master very much. When I saw the protagonist reaching 30 for the Master, I immediately quit. In order to post a comment, I subscribed to a chapter.

There is no need to be too shady about the master. Being able to memorize a bunch of things is indeed a skill. The last person who could sum up was named Virchow. I rarely see people looking down on him.

How to put it, in the Douluo world, the foundation is not important at all, the strength of your martial arts is not important, and nothing else is important. Fortunately, whether you failed or not. Wuhun, in essence, is just a manifestation of energy. Otherwise, how did a lot of things in the later period come about, all of which are manifestations of energy? Wuhun can be changed at will and can even be developed twice. This just absorbs a large amount of external energy. Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong's martial arts are so different. How can they be adapted to release martial soul fusion skills? In fact, it's just a combination of energy. It all depends on the skill of Tang Shenwang. You only need to strengthen your physical fitness and absorb it well. Absorbing enough powerful energy weapons and moves doesn't matter. As long as you have good physical fitness and high mental strength, even a grass chicken can turn into a phoenix if you don't absorb enough energy from the outside world. The martial souls in the Douluo world are very easy to mutate.