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Huang Xin might as well not change it, it would be too embarrassing and too abrupt. After all, the author was influenced by the bad opinions of some readers. This emotional line could have been written clearly... The character who was very elegant before suddenly suddenly became a treasure, and he was shy and "kneaded the corners of his clothes"... This kind of rotten description is really embarrassing. The persona of a shy little girl is really not suitable for Huang Xin. For a relatively mature man like the protagonist, if he doesn't take the scumbag route, a gentle and elegant woman would be very suitable. It can not only accommodate the protagonist, but also give the protagonist a sense of warmth at home. As long as it is shaped in this direction, it can well fit the protagonist's inner age and fill the loneliness of the protagonist's time travel. The process can be described as the protagonist being attracted by chance, the two gradually getting to know each other, and then the protagonist taking the initiative to pursue it, using some unconventional plots, and then they can be together naturally! To plan for the future, you can sign Huang Xin into the team and do some professional-related work, such as legal affairs, accounting, etc. What a pity, now the living thing has been changed to a poisonous point. Next time, remember not to change the heroine's design casually. No matter what the character is, as long as there are no major problems, readers will pay for it once it is written.

This is the fortieth book that I have ordered, and it is also the first lol online game article. Overall, it's just good enough, but some of the flaws are a bit toxic to old readers. 1. In the early post-match interviews, he kept talking about the female host while driving. This is really unnecessary. He looked like a second-rate man who has never seen a woman. 2. The first time he directly attacked others for being ugly, to be honest, it was too much. It's better not to make random jokes when you're not familiar with others 3. Just use the bad jokes in the live broadcast once or twice. Every time the live broadcasts are repeated bad jokes, I suspect you are copying and pasting the word count 4. The hostess who appears inexplicably in the middle period The thing is too inconsistent, I have no contact with this circle, I am still a famous college student, and there is no way I can have any intersection in life. It is better to just have a female commentator or create a team's analyst or some other related female protagonist 5, s6 wins After the championship, I basically watched them all in a skip. I was tired of aesthetics. The games I had been writing about were no longer interesting and unattractive. The main reason was that Invincible was too fast and the rhythm was not well grasped. The subsequent games were all homogeneous. Finally, I hope the author will work hard for the next book.

Old bookworms, please think about it before reading. The author is still using scenes from 15 years ago to write the heroine, and is still frustrated even after being opposed by many people. The writing on the competition is good, but the heroine is really a failure. I feel that the author has never seen this type of heroine in his life, and everything is based on fantasy. The other female characters, Zhou Shuyi and the heroine's best friend are all described as plumper than the heroine. [Actually, you can just write it if you want to. The opinion of book friends is that the chapter title indicates that there is a heroine, so book friends can speak by subscribing] But the author won't do it😅 Regarding the leaflet about discussing the heroine, there are 150 likes for those who are against the heroine, and 80 likes for those who are in favor of the heroine. [Basically two-thirds of the people opposed]

If you don't want to write it down, just G.

All I can say is that you can pursue professionalism when writing novels, but never pursue rationality.

Overall it's pretty good and worthy of this monthly vote. It is recommended to start reading from Chapter 30 to 40. I can only say... Renaissance almost makes me vomit.

It is estimated that the 100-chapter S game will end

The enthusiasm in the description of the summer finals is coming out in this paragraph, come on!

The author paints a big pie every day and then fails to finish it. He also says that the readers think you are stupid. I have been deceived several times. Can you count it yourself? If you can't finish it, don't say it. If you can't finish it, just pretend to be dead and let the readers scold you. This is a water problem_? This is a credibility problem

The setting of this heroine is really not good. A college student and a professional player. How can the two of them intersect in life? One has to study and work, and the other plays games, so they don't have much chance to get along with each other. Even if they do fall in love, they will break up soon. The author himself can't find an opportunity for the female protagonist to enter the male protagonist's life, right? It is not even necessary that the male protagonist should not find a girlfriend. In order to maintain his status, he will stay single and find one after he retires.

I don't understand why the coaching staff and the team didn't stop the protagonist from trying to kill QG and RNG. Do they really not care about their own image at all? Also, as a professional player and a public figure, can you not always speak obscenely in post-game interviews? Do you think this is humorous? No, this will only make people feel obscene. Or are you saying you can't tell the difference between humor and vulgarity? Violence must be retaliated, harsh, vulgar, like this. In S8, the protagonist still expected to pass the official review and participate in the Asian Games?

The author said at the end of last month that he would try to finish writing about the World Championship during the National Day, and then on the 8th, he had just finished writing about the semi-finals. Later, I said that writing skt is very fast. I also thought that the author would finish it in a day or two. I was still thinking that the author finally knew what the readers wanted to see. Then I overwrote it for three days, and couldn't even finish the first scene for another three days. I said before that the author could finish writing the finals before the 15th, which was an underestimation. Are you going to go to the 20th? Do you think this author is watery or not? They even asked us where the water was! The competition is all about the playing field, why write so many miscellaneous things! Other authors have almost finished the finals of 20,000 to 300,000 words, but the author's big brother has almost reached more than 500,000 words! Really speechless! Anyway, I quit after watching the finals. I really can't stand it anymore.

Don't speak obscenely in the post-game interview! If the occasion is not appropriate, it doesn't matter what you do in private or live broadcast, but it's very low to be sexually explicit in official occasions! It's very inappropriate, especially since your wording is not subtle. It's hard to make people smile, and it will only make people feel disgusted.

The protagonist kept speaking in a pornographic tone during the interview. Did the author find it humorous?

I always feel that the layout is a bit small. It's not that I can't use it as an entry point. It's just that your article is too long Look at that man who is ridiculously strong What is a hexagonal jungler? The shooter is fierce This is written by someone who has such control over the entire e-sports circle, but I don't see anyone following closely. Just ignore the interaction between the puppies. There are very few off-site writings and there is relatively little hostility The author feels that this is just to torture the puppies. I really feel that it is unnecessary, so that the readers will feel full of anger In fact, the true attitude towards the puppies should be that they don't care, don't know, and are not focused.

I'm almost 1/3 of the way through. The author talks about porn too often. As a public figure, it's really cheap to talk about porn. Occasionally, it's down to earth to be smart, but now it's a bit too much.

The author's writing is really good, the jokes are good, and the results can be seen. After all, the newbie's results are really great. I hope I can maintain them in the future. I just feel that the appearance of this heroine is too unexpected. I don't know what other book friends think of it. Anyway, I think that if a professional player falls in love with his big fan (he is a big fan, he has already joined the core fan group), don't talk about true love. What is the difference between a professional player and a fan? Moreover, in this kind of semi-professional and semi-fun e-sports article, you made the woman appear independent, elegant and noble, which is really disconnected from the whole article. You are noble and awesome. You and Brother Hansheng are not together just to be on the top and become Internet celebrities (I also made a joke). Maybe I have read few e-sports articles. The only ones I am following now are Brother Wolfberry and Stressful Boy Aguang. The e-sports articles I read before have good results and are known by everyone, at least they are famous. They are equal, or they are childhood sweethearts, and they have always been with you when you were not famous (I am talking about you, the support mid laner and hexagon jungler). I hope the author will adopt it. I really hope that this book will get good results. After all, the only ones with good results now are 2.3.

Really don't write about your heroine, it's too embarrassing. Sister Zhou is pretty good.

The author should make his position clear. He must write Huang Xin as the heroine. He must make it clear that we should decisively abandon the book. Don't say half-heartedly and then let Huang Xin come out and dance for half a chapter. It's disgusting. You won't refund the money whether it's spent or not. Or if you write at the beginning of each chapter that if Huang Xin is included in this chapter, we won't subscribe, okay? Now you are just like tricking us into subscribing and then writing this Huang Xin, it is as disgusting as eating a fly, you know?

From "I carry everyone in the royal family" to recently "Now I understand that League of Legends is not a one-person game", the co-author has never taken RNG teammates seriously, right? He is worthy of being a teacher from Tang Dynasty who matures every year. The teammate who was a bad guy back then is now 3 MSIs. I wonder what he thinks.

This Huang Xin is really a failure, it's too awkward. You want to make the heroine know someone, but you just add someone casually, it's too blunt, it's really uncomfortable to watch.

Stop worrying about whether the heroine is good or not, stop writing, even if the heroine is a mute bride, it is ten thousand times better than the original heroine.

The addition of this heroine is too abrupt. Did any reader ask for a reward? I don't understand a group of people who feel that it is contrary to the rules. She is not as good as the anchors in the circle. There are also many good-mannered ones.

There is a story about a male protagonist who talks about being handsome but turns out to be on the same level as his brother-in-law, which instantly lowered my sense of involvement. The brother-in-law is only considered handsome in the e-sports circle, and other circles are really incomparable.

I still suggest that the heroine named Huang Xin be cut off directly. It has already aroused the disgust of a large number of book lovers. Why do you still write it when so many people hate it? This is not an important role. The heroine is now in a stage where she can be changed at any time but not impossible. Do you have to chase and feed poison? Now I see that Huang Xin's article was skipped directly. It is recommended to refer to other books, either the whole childhood sweethearts or the whole circle of people. If you do this, people will be very unhappy. When did it become clear that this was the heroine? Let me tell you, I am so evasive. Now I just saw that MSI won the championship, so I will keep it for now until I finish writing the S competition. If the heroine is sure about Huang Xin, she can retreat in time to stop the loss. We can't disgust ourselves.

Brothers, I'm withdrawing it first. The author decided that the heroine is Huang Xin and won't change it. Everyone has different opinions. Since everyone has different opinions, they can only retreat. You can't just read a book and still make yourself feel disgusted. To be honest, if the original female protagonist of this kind of e-sports novel cannot be written well, a large number of readers will be turned off. It is better not to write a female protagonist. Farewell, I wish the author better and better books. Maybe I will come back for the next one.

E-sports writing needs a female protagonist, and the players are not robots, but how to grasp it is very important. This woman does have a low sense of existence, and the two of them are not from the same world, so it will be difficult. I give the author an idea. Kandi made the male protagonist's cat sick (feeding him something he shouldn't eat or something), and the male protagonist asked Huang Xin for help. Then Huang Xin rescued the kitten, and then it would be more natural for them to have a good impression of each other, but remember that the length cannot be too long.

It feels like the protagonist of a similar lineup will write about the advantages if the author takes it, and only the shortcomings if someone else takes the author. Also, the protagonist is really lucky. He can avoid unexpected skills by coincidence every time, and he can always unexpectedly hit others by throwing skills at critical moments. This novel felt a bit boring after reading it.

I really regret subscribing. If I had known this paragraph was written like this, I wouldn't have subscribed if there were so many Sister Zhou.

Do you, the author, understand what I mean? 😁