Zongwu, I Just Want to Quietly Tell Stories

I was deceived by Douyin, the settings are completely different, Douyin is such a good introduction, come here to see rubbish

I was deceived by Douyin. This book is so fucking poisonous!

Change the soup without changing the medicine. It is no different from other books of the same type. In the end, they are all harems.

The title of the book is about martial arts, but the content turns out to be very fantasy. Let's just talk about Dou Po skills. Is that interesting? I came here because of the title, but abandoned it because of the content. Goodbye!

It's very toxic. The beginning is exactly the same as the already completed Seven Heroes Town storybook, and it's still Qiao Feng. It's too obvious that it's plagiarized. It's obvious that it can't be written in the second part, and the quality has plummeted.

There are a lot of books like this, which are said to be storytellers, but in the end, the books don't say a few words, and they are ranked again on this list and that list.

Your storyteller has been fighting since the beginning. . .

You can withdraw from Douyin, don't watch it, try the poison

Aren't you going to do this again?

Please cheat on this TikTok, it's rubbish novel

Produced by the studio, it must be a waste product!

The subject matter is very good, but the conception and writing style are confusing, the author's skill needs to be improved, and the logic of priorities is also a bit confusing.

It's not as good-looking as the profile posted on Douyin!

The map is very large, millions of miles away at every turn, and time is really tight. How can a book that is taught once every few days spread to other countries millions of miles away in just a few days? Planes are not that fast.

The first chapter poisoned me to death! We talk about Dou Po once every three days. We haven't even finished the first two chapters of Dou Po, but it's become so popular in other provinces? Bull! He even came from other provinces to listen to the book. There is really no logic at all!

Is it a true storyteller? Don't be like other storytellers who talk about fighting halfway through. Or is it the kind of storyteller that recalls a breakthrough on the spot?

The theme of using storytelling points to draw a lottery is really good at the beginning, but using the existing classic martial arts novels as the background seems a bit old and will not make readers feel novel. If it is changed to ancient times in a different time and space from the earth, and there are no identical historical figures, and all the dynasties, martial arts sects, and martial arts secrets (except those obtained through lottery) are conceived, described and portrayed by the author himself, I feel that it would be better. It would be better to copy everything intact without his own ideas. The characters in the novel are also not distinctive enough. They feel as if they were carved from the same mold. They are all "simple". In addition, the author's writing style needs to be improved. This kind of novel cannot keep the eyes of old bookworms.

The person who stole from the previous house

The most rubbish novel I have ever read, bar none, a good subject was wasted.

Produced by the studio, it must be a waste product, an assembly line product.

This book should be renamed Exposing Others' Privacy

After reading more than ten chapters, I found that the poisonous points kept coming. More than 200,000 workers were hired in one night. Before the expansion, the inn accommodated thousands of people. After the expansion, the inn can accommodate tens of thousands of people on one floor.

Look at what Kuaishou tricked you into, you little piece of trash.

In today's novels, as long as there is a plot in Tian Long Ba, the protagonist must lick Qiao Feng. Reading it makes people angry. Will he die if he doesn't?

There are so many bugs, and it doesn't make sense logically. The major dynasties don't mention it and just treat it as a setting. But here you say that the Qin Dynasty unified the world, and there you say that Yan Lingji was imprisoned in a water prison. That's not a matter of time at all. There are also some character relationships that are annoying. You said that Xiao Longnu is a member of the Great Zhou Long family, that Yin Zhong has been an enemy for hundreds of years, so the dynasty he lived in before was not the Tang and Zhou dynasties. How could he not know that there were also Xu Fu and the First Emperor? When writing about comprehensive martial arts, there is no need to write a timeline. Just set the capable people and strangers of each dynasty and generation to be born in the same era. You can write about Su Hui or let them get some opportunities to become the impression they have. I have to be smart and write that all the dynasties in different timelines are together, and I don't care about it at all, just add a setting.

Can Huang Rong also rank first on the beauty list? She can't even be ranked among the Condor Shooters, right? Huang Rong, who is a wife, has some bonus points. Do you, the young girl Huang Rong, have hair?

I'm really speechless when I see comments saying that Huang Rong is ugly. I have no objection to saying that the actor who plays Huang Rong is ugly. To say that Huang Rong is ugly is because you really don't understand the setting of Huang Rong's beauty in the original work. In the original work, just in terms of beauty, Huang Rong, the wife of the Condor Period, is slightly better than Xiao Longnu when she was young, let alone the setting of Huang Rong's character, martial arts, and intelligence. In terms of beauty, even Guo Fu's setting is not inferior to Xiao Longnv!

I didn't even read the book. I looked at the table of contents and saw the Burning Technique practiced by the protagonist. This Burning Technique is rubbish! It requires a variety of different fires to upgrade. It consumes a lot of resources and is not necessarily more powerful than other techniques. That is to say, there is a way in Dou Po. Otherwise, if you can't draw the different fires, you will be useless.

Are you sending everything out? Why don't you give your wife a gift?

I copied this book, the mistakes are exactly the same hahaha