EVA Birds

Hey hey, I'm the good guy in the group

I think the character of the protagonist can be more gentlemanly. How do you feel about a handsome guy being a joke? I feel weird. You can also change the chapter name and what chapter it is. It's not available at the moment.

The plot is too fast, and many details are not in place. If the plot requires it, you don't need to mention the fact that Shinji met Nagisa Kaoru. If it doesn't matter, you can write it down in detail. There is also a clone of Lilith. I don't understand the setting here. The original work is that Limbo is Lilith's soul. Who is the male protagonist, Lilith's body? Personally I feel it's a plot problem, it's too fast