Lord Game, Start with a Dragoon Battalion

No one with any brains would see Western dragoons appear on Chinese territory!

The author can be careful not to have too many funny self-talking sentences. That kind of thing is actually something you find funny when you write it, but people may not like the effect after you publish it.

. . . . . . . This book should be read as a refreshing novel, but it has a fatal flaw. The number of words is too small, and even reading it as a refreshing novel requires reading a lot. The structure is vague, the logic is unreasonable, and the IQ is worrying. The key is just a seedling. . . :

There was a tone of disdain and contempt in and out of the words, as if he had been reborn and everyone else was trash. This kind of thing is even more disgusting than Long Aotian.

I have finished reading the updated 94 chapters, and I would like to share my thoughts on the poison test First of all, the novel is named after the Dragoons, but until now the Dragoons have not played a particularly important role. Just knowing that the Dragoons are a special unit with great attributes, but the author's writing skills are not enough, this is not reflected in the Dragoons. , The same is true for the descriptions of other arms in the novel. You can only know how awesome it is from the grading of junior high, high school and top level. The other is that there are too many passages in the novel where the author is self-proclaimed. The number of words in each chapter of the author is only just 2,000, plus a large paragraph of verbal praise, it seems very watery. There are also insufficient descriptions of other supporting characters in the book. So far, there has not been a single outstanding supporting character, and even the forces of state agencies and large groups do not have enough weight. There are also some problems in setting, such as the military camps and resource points in the wild, some of which are far away from the protagonist's village. Why is no one grabbing them while the protagonist is not around? I hope the author can fill these problems through game updates in the future. For example, the recruitment of troops is refreshed at a fixed time every week, and when the time comes, someone will grab them. Newcomers and new books are pretty good, keep up the good work

Four chapters are about persuading people to retreat. Are there not enough arms in China for five thousand years for you to write?

It's full of flaws. The Zhao'an Order treats other players as fools. When charging money, it treats the country and those rich people as fools. So many people in the national think tank are idiots. There are also choices of territories and talents. I can only give a big exclamation mark. Let's see how you come back later.

I've seen Chapter 54, and he's been bragging about how powerful his dragoons are. Each fight only has a supporting role. I don't understand why this is so powerful. I was a little master in my previous life. I'm still so excited when I see some low-level materials.

At the beginning, Tianhu has omniscience and omniscience, and then he still can't defeat the second generation. Then he throws away his territory and goes out to run around, running around, and nothing happens.

Rubbish novel, waste of time.

Han Xin got it but it was useless, Zhang Liao returned to his heart, and the protagonist rushed into battle on his own. Author, are you serious?

I just finished reading Chapter 30, and I feel like the author is being funny when it comes to making money from pig's feet and sending troops. I am short of money to recruit troops, crossbowmen, dragoons, and golden knights. Isn't 150 crossbows a week a selling point? Wouldn't it be better to sell half to recruit and half to recruit, and use the money earned to recruit Dragon Knights or Golden Knights and then go out to hunt in the jungle? You must rely on the few soldiers you have to slowly fight in the jungle and then use the money you earn to recruit soldiers.

The author has a big problem with this basic setting. I suggest you post the setting so that everyone can study it together. The numerical values ​​​​of online games are more troublesome. You don't need to be too rigorous. But you can play around with it. 100 Health for this unit is too unreasonable and easy to collapse.

Author, I want to give you a fair evaluation. The beginning of the book is very poor. It's the kind of book that you can't stand after reading the first 3 chapters. The old bookworm couldn't even finish the first chapter. The beginning of the chapter contains a lot of incomprehensible numbers and details, and there is absolutely no desire to follow the reading. Author, have you asked anyone around you who likes to read to read the opening chapter? The first cheat, most of the inexplicable cheats, the reborn ones are generally not cheated, but have rich experience, but this is more difficult to write than the cheats, there are many details to deal with, if it is a cheat, do not consider it, all explanations are borne by the plug-in. For example, if the protagonist spends 2 million to brush attributes, it should be considered that others will also brush attributes, so the protagonist's attributes should not be invincible. Then the most important skills can be weighted between skills and attributes. For example, the attribute is S but the skill is A. The skill is S but the attribute is A. The protagonist needs double S. What kind of attribute skills the protagonist can acquire needs to be rewritten. After all, you will use it in the next article. It is also said that the protagonist's attributes start at 10 points, and those legendary generals' attributes are 1.5. We shouldn't write about military commanders here, but any old bookworm will have a big head when he sees this. Don't set the setting at the beginning, and add it later. The opening chapter is an important battlefield that determines whether readers will stay or leave. I just finished reading a book that begins with eating earthworms and arguing with parents about having a younger sister. To be honest, the writing is not very good, but at least it is interesting.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel like Han Xin is trash in the author's mind? There are very few scenes. My evaluation is more than ten times higher than that of the main character Qiang Han Xin. Then there are too few dragoons, and there are too few early scenes. There are some fun points, but they are all small, and there is no big fun at all. All I can say here is that you can only hang around at the starting point.

Rebirth will have a butterfly effect, but it can't be too big! You guys, if you do something trivial, the butterfly effect will greatly affect the progress of the game. That's ridiculous!

Author, you can change the early stage to say that this game is sold by a company, and the early recharge time is changed to 6 hours a day, and the maximum recharge is only 640 yuan.                                                                                 The game was discovered by the country on the second day and promoted vigorously. Otherwise, according to the people in the world described by the author, many people would have added hundreds of millions of dollars in value on the first day.

Send military commander information to others. Come on, send Han Xin as well.

Low-level troops can do forced damage if they are large in number. High-level troops are powerful but small in number. How can they fight against low-level troops? With 100 blood points, I can kill one high-level unit with one attack from my more than 100 low-level units, and one high-level unit can kill several low-level units with one attack. The recruitment cost of low-level military units is low and the number is high. No matter how many people die, it won't hurt. The recruitment cost of high-level units is high and the quantity is high. Even if one person dies, it will be heartbreaking.

Now that I see it, I feel it's okay, but the Dragoons are too stretched and I feel like I've been making soy sauce 😂

I have seen many book friends say that there are problems, and they do exist. First of all, the advantages of rebirth are not reflected enough. There are advantages, but not big. Second, as the title of the book, the appearance rate is not high. It never recruits enough 150 people per week. It has only been a few dozen now. Dragoons, you're wasting so much money on archers, infantry, and crossbowmen. There's no need for them. Buy all the dragon blood stones and get dragoons. The more they come from the same clan, the more powerful they are. You can't think of it. Moreover, dragoons are immune to damage from ground troops. Just take off. The second is that your greatest advantage is that you can rush troops, but as a result, you also have a commander-in-chief restriction. . . At level 100, you can only bring 10,000 soldiers, which is too few. . There is no need to impose restrictions, and as a new book, you should work hard in the early stage to accumulate popularity and readers. You can update it once a day and still have a small number of words. .

Why are you so short? ? ?

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Come on, I enjoyed reading it anyway. This book should pay attention to readers' feedback, but don't care too much. It's normal to have some loopholes in the story. Therefore, the author, do not forget your original intention and keep your mission in mind.

It's not a game. What's so good about virtual online games?

There hasn't been any updates for two days. What's going on?

This book suits my taste, but it's too short

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It's been three days, no updates, either it's positive or it's not in prison

Have you cut it? I should be able to tell you if it's Yang.