Zongwu: I, Yang Guo, Have Never Done Anything Wrong, How Can I Change It?

Wow, the plot is very similar to the original work. . . . . Then why don't I read the original work?

Is this also called a time traveler? Isn't it just the natives who use the skin of a time traveler?

It's weird. Why do you insist on going to the ancient tomb?

I was really convinced after reading the plot that I really couldn't sleep. I really looked for Xiao Longnu throughout the whole process as the old man said. The writing is also good. I think the plot of the first hundred or so chapters is also okay, but I was really convinced when it came to protecting Huang Rong from giving birth. Xiao Longnu and Huang Rong were both captured by the White Lotus Sect, and then Yang Guo because It took several months to find someone to break through the innateness. If the White Lotus Sect hadn't captured Xiao Longnu in order to make her a saint, I think Xiao Longnu and Huang Rong would have gotten pregnant again. Then after finding Xiao Longnu, their memories were wiped out, and they only knew that they were White Lotus Sect saints. Brother, have you watched too many idol dramas? In my opinion, the moment she lost her memory, Xiao Longnu was already brain-dead, but the one who is alive now is Our Lady of White Lotus. Even if Our Lady of White Lotus remembers the past, will she be Little Dragon Girl? Not necessarily, just like the soul travel setting in the novel, those who come after inherit the memory of the former, but they don't feel that they are the former.

Generally speaking, I feel that if it unfolds slowly, it will be a very good novel, and it will be much better than other mixed martial arts. However, if you don't pay attention to the rhythm, it will probably collapse. The main line is not clear enough. Before, you found the little dragon girl, and then you won't be separated because of the original work and then look for it again. It's very poisonous, so be careful.

Halfway through, the time traveler is not like the time traveler. Grandma Sun died. He still apprentices under Xiao Longnu. When meeting, he calls aunt. If you have no idea, stop writing the book and go eat some walnuts.

Amnesia directly due to combined martial arts? The single divine eagle is okay, but what about the mixed martial arts protagonist who has lost his memory and likes to see through martial arts? On the contrary, it is a bit poisonous. The plots of mixed martial arts are intertwined, and even if the protagonist has memories, it won't be of much use. You, the protagonist, feel like Yang Guo dressed as a time traveler. . . . Then why don't readers read the original work?

It's so poisonous. The more I watch it, the more poisonous it becomes. All kinds of abuse.

The writing is really rubbish, and it keeps abusing the main character. The main character is either injured or on the way to being injured. After reading it once or twice, it is okay, but after reading it more times, it becomes disgusting. The golden finger is of no use at all. It is purely used by the author for numbers. This book is really poisonous.

Why do you think I want to read the fanfic? I just want to see the grievances of the original plot being modified. Can you have the original version of your writing?

The words "pass and change" actually refer to Yang Kang

What's the point of rewriting the original work? ? I won't watch the original work? Moreover, the protagonist loses his memory when he encounters the divine eagle, and remembers it when he encounters other plots. Is it interesting? Is the wisdom halo released to oneself selective?

If you want to read a refreshing article, I advise you not to read it, this book is abusive.

So this is a love-minded protagonist. As a time traveler, he knows that this is a mixed martial arts world. He doesn't think of ways to improve his strength, so he gets beaten and abused in various ways.

After reading Chapter 14, I thought I could change Grandma Sun's fate. In the end, he died according to the original plot. Since this world is a comprehensive world, why don't you choose something else? If it doesn't work for overseas Xiake Island or Tianshan Lingjiu Palace, you can go to Li Tanhua or Huamanlou, but you have to go to the Ancient Tomb Sect. Apart from Xiao Longnu and the incomplete Nine Yin Manual, you might as well go directly to the Divine Eagle Valley outside Xiangyang City to practice swordsmanship.

The author is really insistent. He has written a book with hundreds of thousands of words and only collected a few thousand. The few comments are mostly criticisms, and he is still antagonizing readers. You are also really stubborn. If you write it for yourself, just say it is your own pleasure, and no one will pay attention to you. This author doesn't listen to what others say at all. Many of your vicious tricks were leftovers from other people's tricks and were eliminated. Why do you think you, a three-legged cat, can write well in kung fu? Playing with the old tricks that others have left behind, but not knowing that these are all poisonous points abandoned by the times, full of self-confidence, I don't know what you think. If you don't hit the wall, don't look back? It all depends on my love for martial arts. No one can teach you writing routines, and you may not be able to listen to other people's advice because of your stubborn personality. I have to explore on my own, and I have to write a few more books, and I have to suffer some losses before I know how to write to attract attention. The framework is good, the cheats are okay, the content and plot are not interesting, the first chapter is poisonous to screen readers, you are not platinum, why are you so arrogant?

Doesn't Yang Guo's name mean to encourage others if they don't change it? Isn't this wording interesting? Also, Yang Guo's grandmother Bao Xiruo really owes her life to Guo Jing's family. After all, it was Bao Xiruo who saved the King of Jin and implicated Guo Jing's parents.

Chapter 22 really makes me want to complain. I don't see that the title of the book has anything to do with the content. The protagonist is a time traveler whose brain is still working sometimes. You said you are either a time traveler and develop according to your golden finger that is not working well at that time, or you are an aborigine. But if you are an aboriginal, what the hell are you going to do in the ancient tomb? If you are aboriginal, what are you doing if you can't beat the ancient tomb? Forget about going to the ancient tomb, what's the difference from the original work? Grandma Sun is still dead, but she still worships Xiao Longnu as her teacher. Although she is a martial arts, but the dynasty insists on having an aunt to live with her, is it a master-disciple relationship? Is this the author's feelings? I don't know what the protagonist is thinking, but if I were the protagonist, in this place where warrior dynasties are everywhere, I would definitely be cautious in the early stage and look for opportunities. After all, there are dangers and golden fingers there. If I don't protect myself first, I'm afraid of being torn apart by random swords.

The copywriting is quite inspiring, but the protagonist hasn't changed anything! Grandma Sun was still implicated to death by him!

Man, is this written about mixed martial arts? This is so degrading to people's eyes.

The author should update soon. I think the characters you wrote are full of character traits and very close to the original work. If you want to end it, you can improve the plot of Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu. I really want to see Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu get married.

Qiongyao? ? What a divine writing style, no wonder it was finished in more than 200 chapters. If you can't write about Yang Guo, don't write it.