Lord's Simcity

I think the protagonist should build high walls, accumulate food, and slowly become king. If he produces so many industrial products, he will be suppressed and coveted. It is better to use them only when the protagonist has a certain level of strength, such as becoming a king or a god.

It's better for the protagonist to have an English name. It's a Western fantasy, but a Chinese name seems a bit out of place.

If you have the ability, don't exploit it, think wildly, and use it openly or covertly.

Does the protagonist have power? So crazy? If you take something that is beyond the era, can you protect the interests of Kongting? ? ?

I don't have a plan, I guess it won't be long. The protagonist goes to the territory alone and doesn't know anything about it. He doesn't even have a servant around him, just a groom leading the way, and starts building roads the next day? The situation in the territory was not clearly understood or handed over, and development started without even knowing the people below.

He knew a few days in advance that the monsters were going to attack the city, but he didn't make any preparations. Then only 10 of the guard team died. The barracks was built again at the last minute and the savior came out. I don't understand how this is written. Are you screening readers? I can only say that there was no tension at all. It seems a bit strange in this era when the average number of seniors per capita is 6

It's a bit confusing to read now, and I'm a little dizzy, especially some of the opening words are very difficult to read (it depends on whether they are better later) I really like the development of the plot line of this novel (similar to Long Ling's novel My Empire,)

I feel like the writing is too empty. I don't see any supporting characters with personality. Everyone is like an NPC in the game. The protagonist plays his own role.

Isn't it okay not to use the words ("but" and "and") at the beginning of every sentence? When writing novels, don't use the so-called elementary school sentence construction. It affects the reading sense. If I am criticizing, you can read it yourself or read the books of those big writers. They only appear in a few places The original writing is a bit messy, and the reading sense is poor, so the results can be imagined (I support the author in writing such a magic technology article,)

I have read a book of this type before, it was also a lord, but in it there were witches, and there were several in their own territory. Later, other witches were invited to come, and there were also two little girls in it, one could change into a bird, and the other had wings.

It's so deserted. The book is pretty good. It's a pity that I don't recommend it. I guess the author will have a surgery after three months of perfect attendance.

It is useless for the author to explain in the comment area. It is better to spend time to reorganize the logic of the first three pictures. Readers are impatient. It depends on yourself. If you want to enjoy yourself, feel free to do it. If you want to make money, change it to attract readers. After all, if you want to enjoy yourself and make money at the same time, the author's level is not up to the situation of standing and making money.

Come on, I see that the opinions in the comments are quite sincere, and most of them are useful. Don't worry about the other stupid ones. Just write well. I like this type of article.

I have read dozens of chapters, and I personally feel that it is quite good. Come on, author! I hope I can keep writing and don't stop updating. I'll do it when I have investment.

I'm curious, what factories are needed for initial industrialization?