Reshape Heaven from the Earth God

With so many Shinto works, how can we attract readers? First of all, the setting of suppressing the gods into incense, ghosts and ghosts is not attractive to readers. Secondly, the world view is pitiful and uninteresting, and there is no room for weak gods to operate.

This was written too hastily, there are enemies everywhere, and it feels like there wasn't enough time to develop at all.

It's like a few drug addicts found evidence, but they can't leave with the evidence, and they are still performing there, brotherhood, they say you leave, I will break the queen, you leave, I will break the queen, and then the leader comes back with people 🙂 and then everyone gets in, leaving one person struggling in his heart 🙂, it is very well written, I will write it again in the next life

The layout should be small, and should be more generous to attract readers.

The introduction is grand and grand, and the actual deduction is really bad. This is not a god. He is a wild god that Taoist disciples can beat every time they meet. He can just beat him every time, and there is a feeling that the progress is slowed down by the flow of waste materials. He is the one who brags the most and does the most stupid things. The nature of the gods is to be extremely powerful and crush them, so much so that every time they are stronger, they are afraid of taking out a book of exercises to practice and then having a battle breakthrough, life or death breakthrough, injury breakthrough. I originally thought that according to your writing method, Land Seventh Grade would have 100,000 chapters by the time you wrote the introduction. Return the land to the Emperor of Heaven. Promotion is slow, the structure is small, and the ability is small. . . .

Dare I read Chapter 50? It's too long-winded and I'm still telling riddles. The Kingdom of Yin Earth is about to be destroyed. I'm still speechless.

The protagonist makes enemies everywhere, and time is urgent and tight. The next step is the deus ex machina, which is full of cheats.

The world view should be written in a bigger way, and the themes of the human world should be those countries with many strange arts, varied customs and many fantastic texts.

The human race is supreme and will be destroyed if it violates the laws of the Nine Cauldrons. There is no fairness in the law of heaven at all.

The layout is indeed smaller. Either magical power flow or layout flow. There are also many flaws in the system.

Come on, this is the only Shinto text I have seen that is still being updated and is not particularly bad.

There are as many human emperors in the world as dogs, and the gods are writing down their hair. The Human Emperor is worthless, and neither are the gods. The gods with this kind of power can at best be regarded as Yin spirits and false gods stealing their thrones.

You started off writing it well, but by the time you get to the 20th chapter, so many people have died, who would still believe you?

Tmd, are you writing a Qiong Yao drama?

Your plot is a bit deliberate.

The more I write, the worse it gets. A bunch of people come out that the protagonist can't control, and it doesn't feel exciting at all.

The worldview of the human world is too small and does not fit well with the worldview of gods and demons.

My subordinates are under the influence, my little brother is here.

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Is there no detailed boundary division?

Hey hey

I've only read two chapters, and there are too many exclamation points... Does the author expect to use exclamation points to express emotions? Looks like someone suffering from road rage

This book says that after a person dies, he cannot even become a ghost, and his soul immediately disappears.