Upgrading Starts with Hunting Weird

The Tiger Fist was upgraded to the Fire Fist, my brain hurt a bit

To be honest, it's neither fish nor fowl. It's obviously set in ancient times, but as a result, many of the interactions and behaviors between other people and the protagonist have a modern flavor. If you can't write about ancient times, just write about modern cities, or just go and see what other people write about ancient backgrounds. It makes me really uncomfortable.

How to say it! I feel that there are many unreasonable things. For example, if a family is wiped out, it is a big deal anywhere. As the county lieutenant with the highest combat power, he did not take anyone to camp, and was squatted by the protagonist.

What are you writing about? Nondescript.

The nicknames are so bad 👎🏻, "Zhong Kui", "Lu Pan", etc., And the main character's surname is Lu, wouldn't it be appropriate to call him "Lu Pan", God is so sneaky😓

Can the protagonist adapt so quickly after just traveling through time? The first chapter has a bit of Long Aotian's tone when killing ghosts.

Big friends and little friends, happy Children's Day 😆

Anyway, I just look down on Jin and have no passion.

Except for a lot of classic national curses, there is no highlight

I hope readers who see typos can correct them in the chapter reviews, thank you!

Real water, even the sea is not as good at water as you are.

The pace is too fast, the plot is not compelling enough, and it feels a bit different. This is my personal feeling. I hope everyone can express their opinions.

I've been updating for a week and no one has scolded me. I'm so lonely🐶

The work is getting closer to the second achievement very soon. If you want to invest, hurry up and start it. The author has 4000+ stable updates every day. It is certain to achieve the second achievement, so you will definitely make money from your investment.

This cool article looks pretty good, but it has a few minor flaws. Killing monsters gives too few energy points, or even no energy points at all. Chapter 98 looks good so far. I hope it will be updated soon.

The panel appears too frequently. It appears several times in one chapter. This is not reading a book but watching a panel.

I have a bad feeling😐

I haven't won the female supporting role yet. It's a bit slow. Is it because the main character's function is not working well?

You can tell that the protagonist will join the official costume B without even watching it.

The storyline about the family is so weird, I feel like it's the same whether I have it or not, so I might as well not write it