Beastmaster: I Have Replica Cards

The writing is quite good. The anticipation and excitement at the beginning are almost full. The elements of re-enactment and the ant army (I am the swarm of worms) However, I feel that some details need to be revised. For example, when the beast tide comes, there is too little description. If it is brushed over in one stroke, there is not much sense of oppression, compactness and crisis. There should be more description. When writing, it is best to include some scenes of more advanced beast masters resisting and defeating the beast tide, so that readers can know how the beast masters fight in the book. The battle scenes are magnificent and the earth is shattering, especially for the protagonist to see, and then the protagonist will clasp his hands and whisper: After crossing over, I will be more powerful than these high-level beast masters! Something like that, although there was a golden finger in time travel, and readers all know that the protagonist will become stronger, it is better to mention it more or less openly. There is also the appearance of the healing god at the back, which is a bit bland and even a bit confusing. After talking about his special status and the extremely high cost of rescuing people, he immediately healed the protagonist without saying a word. It's not that it can't be done, but this person's appearance was too coincidental, and it seemed to be an obvious arrangement. Moreover, there was a wave of beasts coming. No matter how injured the protagonist was, he had to at least run away first and eat snacks... It was a bit like that. Although I knew that this required recovery of injuries, but wouldn't it be better to find the ghost wolf to carry and eat while walking? You can also carry it in its mouth. Here we can write that the protagonist and the heroine ran with the ghost wolf, and then were accidentally attacked by other ferocious beasts. The protagonist was thrown out, and happened to encounter a group of senior beast masters and the healing man who rushed to the battlefield and rescued them. I would feel more comfortable this way, and I can't just sit back and wait for death. Come on, come on! Try to put it on the shelves as soon as possible!

How should I put it, starting from the Tower of Babel, it starts to get confusing. I feel that your pace is too fast. The protagonist is only 2 stars now. Regardless of the chickens that have not yet been contracted, there are still two eggs that have not hatched. So according to your outline, is the protagonist's parents going to a new map with more than 10 stars? And then the protagonist will also go there later? Do you feel that your speed increase is too fast and too sudden? Let's first come to the Tower of Babel. I don't understand the content of these chapters. Then according to what you wrote, it reaches the 29.30 Level of tempering. Then the protagonist's character should be tempered and stable, and this should also be the protagonist's character you want to establish. Then Zhou Pingan's behavior in plotting against the protagonist is completely inconsistent with what you want to establish. Then I have now seen the chapter of being plotted out, and I haven't seen much of the rest of it. But so far, my impression of the previous chapter is very good. I have lost interest since the Tower of Babel. It's quite sudden

The author, now that it is on the shelves, should be faster. The previous one was even slower, and it is easy to be spoiled. There are many new books that are not available in this way. Look at your subscription now. Is there very little follow-up reading? Although I don't know how many subscriptions you have, but when I read the chapters and there are book reviews, I know that people are still reading it. Your book is already on the shelves. Everyone is reading it. This is not a good sign. If you don't increase the number of updates quickly, you may not be able to hold on when you see the poor results.

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I don't understand, how can a chicken hatched from an egg know so many things? Did the ancient demon spirit reincarnate into an egg with its memories?