The Source of All Heavens

After reading the first chapter, isn't the protagonist a time traveler? Why don't you know about Golden Finger? It's like a native.

Xiaobai's article was very childish in the early stage and had a tendency to lick dogs. Currently, I see it before it is put on the shelves.

To tell a joke, the protagonist uses a Barrett sniper rifle to protect himself in the eternal world. There are still many poisonous points that he wants to complain about. After thinking about it, let it go. It is not easy for the author. After all, the author has been writing books for several years and has written millions of words. Why is he still such a novice?

The White Snake he rescued ended up giving his daughter to Xu Xian, and then Xu Xian rescued him when something happened. In the end, he accepted the White Snake double cultivator. . . If you did only one of these things, you would still be able to see it, but in the end, you did them all. What a green turtle.

I really don't like this kind of protagonist who is too out-of-touch, like a fool

What the hell is this writing about? I saw Pangu opening the sky with my own eyes, and then I imitated Pangu's moves to open the world, and he still kept hitting God's hand? What Wang Chao himself can do with the blessing of imaginary artistic conception, you, who comes from a world of high martial arts, can't do it?

Again, this method of calculating strength by kilograms has been abandoned. The black and yellow fierce horses are not measured by kilograms. The original book describes that the black and yellow fierce horses can break through the city wall. Is this kind of strength measured by kilograms? Can the lifting force of one thousand kilograms be calculated using kilograms when struck with a fist? The punch of a modern heavyweight boxing champion has the force of a thousand kilograms, so don't use kilograms to calculate it, use the impact of the horse to calculate it.

The plot is extremely driven. I want to practice boxing, but I don't have any boxing skills. I happened to have a conflict with someone else's younger brother. Someone else's younger brother came to cause trouble, and after the fight, this boxing manual fell out of someone else's arms. I want to enter Yuhuamen, but I don't have a letter of recommendation. The younger brother died and the boss sent people to look for trouble again. Hey, what a coincidence. I had another letter of recommendation on me.

The first picture was okay, but when I met that woman later on, my brain immediately went offline. The protagonist's IQ should be about eleven or twelve years old. It's also inconsistent. The front part can produce things like cars or toothbrushes, but the back part is just like an eleven or twelve-year-old person who doesn't know what's going on and just jumps around and is stupid.

Is it ridiculous that an ordinary person in the protagonist can understand the artistic conception of Pangu Kaitian?

It's a blind comparison. From the protagonist to the supporting characters, they are all mentally retarded. If not said to be mentally retarded, they are all looked down upon.

It is best not to write about dragons and snakes when writing about the heavens. Behind the dragon and the snake is the Emperor of the Galaxy. Most authors cannot grasp it. Most authors regard the dragon and the snake as a low-level plane and use the national arts in it to lay the foundation. In fact, as long as you get through the dragon and the snake, you can casually come to a world with spiritual energy and become a powerful star explosion in an instant, and your true god status will be stable.

In the early stage of immortality, if you don't use the big trick, you won't get any opportunities. You won't be killed by accident. Don't you know that eternal life is, if you mess with me, you are finished, you are dead, kneel down and kowtow to lead to death

Randomly written, without any logic at all, it is too poisonous, and the immortal world will kill people at the Yuhua Gate with a sniper. . Also install a camera! ! ! Brain.

The moment I saw that the main character has a sister, I knew that this was a trash novel. It was the same as having a sister. I guessed it right.

Not only does the protagonist look like a fool, but the protagonists in other worlds are also written as fools. Also, while the content of the eternal world is not well written, the content of traveling to other worlds is also written like 💩

After writing so many words, I have never thought about why I am still a loser?

The origin of the world of White Snake is really disgusting🤢. It could have prevented a lot of bad things from happening, but it wanted to ruin the plot, but it turned out to be a shit-like plot!

I was reborn in Eternal Life and then traveled through the Demi-Gods and the Eight Parts. I really don't understand how the Demi-Long and Eight Parts can help the world of Eternal Life.

The protagonist can't live without showing off, and no one notices the murder inside the eternal world. It's so speechless. When everyone is as stupid as him, you must know that not even a direct disciple of Hua Tiandu dares to kill Fang Han in the sect.

After reading the first ten chapters, judging from my ten years of reading experience, I must have jumped into the street. I started from such a high starting point, but ended up with no peeing throughout the whole process. You have become an immortal and asked, but in the end, you have traveled through the world of Chinese martial arts such as dragons and snakes... What do you think? ? Generally speaking, those who travel through the world of martial arts should be in modern cities, after the martial arts of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. After all, you are cultivating immortality and you go practice martial arts...

I bet 50 cents on this book. I'm sorry that I didn't read the content. You'll know what it's like just by reading the introduction. The world of immortality has gone to the world of dragons, snakes, martial arts, and weak immortals. I just want to ask, can the ten-layer immortal body destroy all these worlds? Not to mention the spiritual realm, unique civilization, and the Three Thousand Avenues of Eternal Life are the best. The intentions, laws, magical powers, and power are all top-notch. Why go to these small worlds?

Finally there is a book by Dragon Snake, wow, I am so touched. I hope the author will not rush into the street.

I'm looking forward to it. Is there a sword that can be used in the snow?

Not a dragon and a snake? How is eternal life.

The introduction is not very good, but the content of the book is very good. Combining immortality and martial arts. The description of the battle is thrilling. I hope the author will continue to work hard.