Yu Ling Great Painter

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I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and the biggest problem I have is that the protagonist doesn't practice well at all, and his upgrades rely entirely on adventures or coincidences. Can't he write about some serious practice?

The subject matter is very good, the plot is cliché, but it's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless.

It's understandable that the protagonist draws erotic pictures, after all, many celebrities have pictures, but isn't it a bit wrong to draw a girl who has not yet left the court? The most important thing is that you clearly know that the other party is more powerful. Is this deliberately seeking death? Have all the stars in their past lives forgotten? Do you have to find enemies for yourself?

It used to be impossible to read, and the author cut it off and the readers took notice It's different now, there are many books, although there are still not many good books But author, if you dare to cut it off, you are forcing us to keep it. I'm afraid you don't know how many books are kept in the cold. Young author, you don't want your masterpiece to be left out by readers, right? 🐶🐶🐶

There are many small parts of this book that I find confusing. I don't know why the protagonist does what he does. The author doesn't explain it clearly at all, and there seem to be a lot of typos.

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What can I say, the plot is okay, but the character dialogue always seems weird to me... It feels a bit stiff.

Regarding the chapter on Erotica, I originally wanted to write a more interesting plot, but many people responded poorly and it was somewhat self-defeating. I would like to apologize to all readers. It has been revised. Welcome to criticize and correct me.

Being a painter is such a good profession, but it falls into the cliché of becoming a painter. How many novels are there about painters? How many people write about tie-color craftsmen? At first, I watched it because the protagonist was a color tying craftsman, but in the end, it turned out that he was selling sheep's head to dog meat.

It's okay, but masons make pigments. Isn't the level of this profession too low? Masons should be stone carvers. Pigments can only be a small part, and pigments should not just be stones. Plants and metals can be part of pigments. Pigments should have a specialized profession, right? Just like an ink maker, one ounce of gold and one ounce of ink, all kinds of ink and various crafts are very complicated. The author can look at the relevant production techniques, so as to enrich the profession and professional culture in the novel, rather than focusing on the surface and form.

After reading a few pictures, I gave the author a reminder to pay attention to punctuation marks. The most basic punctuation marks for writing novels were omitted. There was no punctuation marks at the end of each sentence.

Alas, it was really too tragic. As funny as it was at the beginning, it was so tragic at the end. Lu Daoxuan's death was too uncomfortable, and so was Wei Changli's. The writing style of the first part, the relationship between master, apprentice, uncle and nephew was really a utopia in my mind. I can't say that the death was too sudden in the end. After all, there were foreshadowings and foreshadowing in the front, but it felt really uncomfortable to watch it. It's so powerless, it feels like a person is standing on the edge of the sea, looking at the sea, and feeling a sense of powerlessness between heaven, earth and people I still like reading the novel as a whole, both the structure and the plot, the paintings and origami people are all something I have never seen before. This is the author's own conception, and it is also the part that I think is very exciting. Of course, put aside the feeling of powerlessness. I just don't know how many chapters it will take for the protagonist to develop before he takes revenge. I feel like revenge will make me feel better.

To be honest, papermakers are more unique. Papermakers are enlightened. Why don't you follow this path instead of becoming a painter?

Actually, I quite like this paper maker, but I find it uncomfortable to upgrade.

It's too blunt. You need to think carefully about the plot. Don't think that just saying a few words will send people to hell. This kind of conflict will make it more interesting to watch.

Not enough, not enough

I feel that this issue of teaching disciples cannot be ignored even if it is a sect of its own. Shouldn't it be that we have read all the techniques and drawings? Selecting the best among them to promote your own new techniques, isn't this also a kind of progress? This is another kind of eye-opener. If not, you can talk about the secrets of other houses to broaden your horizons. Otherwise, you will be very powerful at the end. Then the master said that it was all taught by me, and gave him a practice method and paint paper. At most, it can be regarded as an introduction. The protagonist's talent may not be discovered by himself. Paper-making is not a bad way to get to the dark side.

Burning incense, this is the only book of this type that makes me excited, but it's a pity that it didn't become popular.

Is this a eunuch? My investment failed directly. I am really speechless.

Why are you still abusing the master? ? ! ! ! It's so uncomfortable to read this kind of article😫😫

This book is so good, but I still can't finish it?

This is probably because we are preparing to have no heroine, right?

What's the strength of the protagonist who is over 400? I haven't looked at it at all. I'm afraid that he has no strength at all and is messy, so I asked.

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