I Relied on My Water Power to Dominate the Interstellar World.

The character design at the beginning is not very good, so I won't read the rest.

It was my first time to write a book, and I was very nervous. I always felt that I was not good at writing. Dear friends, please give me your advice. Tell me about the article: About the female protagonist Jiang Yourong, she has grown up all the way, from waste to overlord. She needs to experience many hardships and defeat them one by one. There are always many hardships in life, personal, from life, social... About the male protagonist Jing Yang, he is very strong, but is limited due to physical reasons. When he is crazy, he only remembers Rong Rong, and only Rong Rong can comfort him. He has only loved one person in his life, ever since they met. As for Song Zhifan, he is the second male lead and a small boss. Whether he will become a big boss later depends on the development of the story. He is a poor man. His mother is in the hands of his father. He has no family and hopes to have one. No spoilers. As for Sha Yun, I originally wanted to set her up as a cold and aloof young lady, but due to lack of writing power, the author became a bad and poisonous villain. But she is also a pitiful person who cannot be loved, and is crazy and crazy. Hmm! There may be more villains in the future that you hate with itch. Finally, I am not very good at writing reviews, so please forgive me. Finally, dear friends, please give me your advice!

Please comment, as long as it is well-founded, no matter it is good or bad, I will humbly accept it, make corrections, and make progress. Thank you all again! 😊😊

The psycho male protagonist was introduced at the beginning, so I won't watch it anymore

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After reading it, I found that the main characters are all sick, including the heroine

He is a bully. He has a system but no ability. He cannot see the reality clearly. He has no ability to protect himself and exposes his ability to control people. Isn't this a complete idiot?