Start Cultivating Immortality in the Tomb of the Living Dead

The dialogue is too naive, this is what I saw 10 years ago 😥

It's really unbearable to talk to the system, there's no sense of immersion, and the protagonist's dialogue feels very childish.

Seeing Lu Zhanyuan go back and become an immortal, he decided to give up the book. The foreshadowing can be unpopular but not evil.

Author, the protagonist you wrote is so pretentious! Since she wants to go back so much, let him go back. Find another one, he doesn't want to go, there are many people who want to go. The writing is so pretentious that it affects the reading experience.

A gathering of time-travelers? ? ? If you look at the threads, they are all time travellers.

Why are you writing so many complaints about Chapters 1 and 2? It looks so vulgar and you still write so much.

How does this thing have anything to do with cultivating immortals?

Don't overthink, don't think, don't read carefully, this is still a readable novel

If you have anything you want to say or something bad, please point it out. If you can change it, change it. If you can't, try to make sure it doesn't happen again.

Why are there time-travelers everywhere? Isn't it disgusting?

Lu Zhanyuan can hurt Ouyang Feng😰

After reading it, I would like to summarize The first three chapters are a bit awkward and easy to persuade. Those who traveled back in time came in (I personally feel bad) It can be seen that the author wanted to write a different kind of astronomy. Come on slowly

What does the author of 5 years old and 1.5 Meters think?

The first sentence of the introduction is that people raise voodoo, and voodoo nourishes people. I thought Miao Jiang's voodoo technique, or the real voodoo system, turned out to be selling sheep's heads as dog meat.

It's said to be about cultivating immortals, but all I saw was martial arts training from the beginning to the end.

The writing is quite good, but the age of the main character is quite disturbing.

What does the cultivation of immortality in the title of the book have to do with the content? The protagonist, a martial arts practitioner, had to be named a cultivator, and I was convinced.

Collection stickers are valid for a long time! ! Collect system templates, there are many systems required, so all you magical book friends are invited to use your imagination. Of course, it is also a good choice to learn from them.

We are soliciting martial arts names from all readers! The yang energy in the pig's feet is strong, and practicing the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms has the effect of strengthening the body. The scales of the dragon-shaped body are on fire, causing burning damage. Please use your imagination. Lao Jiang has been thinking about it for many days and has not made a decision.

I clicked in because I want to see the unique results of Wuxia and Xianxia, ​​or Wuxia

Is this book meant to amuse women? Nothing to see

Write a resume. . . . It seems that the male protagonist has seen through the world of mortals and does not need the female protagonist. He is devoted to the Tao.

The plot progress in these chapters is too slow, and there is too little communication between the other travelers. You have to travel through many worlds, so don't limit yourself to Tianlong.