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A small poisonous point and some of my opinions on character creation Let me talk about a small poisonous point first, in order to elicit my views on character creation and suggestions for the author I just saw the chapters of Paladin and I feel very disappointed. It is always more important to create a character with broad knowledge than to create powerful men, because the former means completely different thinking patterns, behaviors, and perspectives on problems. For example, since the article says that the male protagonist has studied philosophy, law, etc. (Such as psychology, sociology), then his feelings about the world should be completely different. The author wrote that the male protagonist has become very rational, which I very much agree with and feel happy about (because the author wrote it), but in fact, more of the performance should be in the words and deeds of the male protagonist. For example, when the Paladin showed his discrimination and distrust of witches, why didn't the male protagonist refute it? First of all, even for an ordinary person, that is, from the perspective of simple moral values, the behavior of the Paladin can be summarized as hating and boycotting the entire group because of a few special cases in the group. Is it appropriate to hate the entire two-dimensional group because of the otaku? Is it appropriate to hate all environmentalists because they are extreme environmentalists? Is it appropriate to hate all Japanese because of Japanese right-wingers? Obviously inappropriate. One part of a group cannot represent the group as a whole. Secondly, as a male protagonist with extremely broad knowledge, he can use perspectivalism to deny the Paladin's view of things, he can use Nietzsche's theory of the Superman to directly deny the Paladin's values, he can use Berlin's value pluralism to refute the Paladin's values, he can deny the irrationality of the Paladin's behavior from sociology (as above), and he can even talk about law, etc. So why doesn't the male protagonist object? You must know that language is sometimes a more powerful force than violence. Joining it can make the Paladin realize his mistakes and even apologize. First of all, the plot is more enjoyable. Secondly, it conceals the existence of the male and female protagonists and increases the strength of the male protagonist. Of course, it doesn't matter whether you succeeded or not, the key is whether you tried. However, what I really want to say is not this poisonous point. It is normal for a novel to have toxic points, and what I really wanted to express was the issue of characterization. It is difficult to create a character with a wide range of knowledge, which requires the author to have a strong background, but the author can choose the focus of shaping the character. For example, in the book "The Road to Science and Technology" (I chose this book just because I was reading it recently), the male protagonist sometimes has strong intelligence, but the author focuses entirely on how the male protagonist engages in scientific research and develops his strength. He combines various lofty (but in fact, in my opinion, lack of rationality) nouns and principles. At least in character creation, there will be no problems (doge) caused by the character's intelligence exceeding the author's too much. Although, the principles inside are really outrageous, for example, neutrinos can block gravity. Do you understand the complete asymmetry of the Lagrangian system of gravity? However, we readers don't actually care about this aspect. After all, the author has worked hard and has the intention to explain. This is enough, and we will figure out the rest by ourselves. So the key to character creation is to choose the focus. For example, the focus of the book just now is on the scientific research and technological strength of the male protagonist. The author of this book can focus on writing about the male protagonist's psychological state, his thoughts, and future plans (psychological activities reflect the character's motivation, which is still very important). This process can be dynamic. For example, if the male protagonist is very rational in the early stage, will there be relevant thinking later? (Such as Karl's Criticism of Rationalism, Limitations of Reason, Critique of Pure Reason), or into other psychological states (such as curiosity), etc. You don't need to write as high-end as I said, I'm just providing an idea. For example, the change of the male protagonist's attitude towards the female protagonist, his determination to protect the female protagonist, etc. The emotional explosion can be combined with the climax of the plot, etc. In short, since the author has written about the changes in the male protagonist's mentality, I hope the author can continue to maintain it. After all, the improvement of power is found in every novel, but the improvement and change of character make the characters mature and vivid Come on, author! Ps I hope to send more dog food 23333

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Protagonist: It's too difficult. The high-dimensional fragments haven't come yet and I've become a god.

It's still pretty good to read, but the strength improves too quickly. Is there really so much to write in the future? Many good books stop at 200 and 400 chapters and then start to go downhill. The strength improves too fast in the early stage, and it is difficult to write later, and then it starts to fail and the writing becomes awkward

This fifth level feels more and more cheap to me. You must know that this is the corresponding magic spirit, Nascent Soul, which is rare in the Canglan world. It has been everywhere in the past few months on earth. This is too outrageous. I understand that your protagonist can be so fast after absorbing three blessings, but who are the other people? Why are they so fast? Is it because of talent? Are the people in the Cultivation World and Canglan World all trash? Logically speaking, at least those who come from other cultivation civilizations have such a huge advantage that they will not be surpassed by the local natives in a few months! ! ! Is it appropriate that the heroine is a great magician for a long time, but a bunch of local natives have reached a higher level than him after practicing for a few months?

In fact, we can describe more emotional stories of the male and female protagonists, so that it is not monotonous. The entire book is divided into two lines: the male protagonist's upgrade and the male and female protagonist's emotional sublimation, which are advanced simultaneously.

This type of urban novels almost always minimize the impact of the power of modern thermal weapons. Although "How many divisions does God have" is very crazy, but even in the supernatural world, who under the gods would not think twice about nuclear weapons? This will impact the city and cause large-scale disasters, and the mountains will be blown into basins.

After reading a few chapters, it was said that the protagonist has become rational. I want to know where the scope of this rationality is, whether it is completely the same as a "god" or something, and I feel that there will be no parental plot at all later on. . . .

There are too many official novels now, which are both easy to read and easy to harmonize.

Isn't it said that it is more rational? Why does it feel like Che is more emotional?

Ps, a suggestion, wait until it is put on the shelves before opening the fan filter. There are too few comments in the comment area now, which will make people feel less lively, although it still depends on the author's personal choice.

I have no power at all and the system cannot be written.

What? Just keep it and finish the book? Isn't it a waste of words with so few words?

When people from other worlds are projected to this point, what do the original people on earth do?

There are so few, we should have eunuchs.

The author writes very well! However, Jiuxiang is also afraid of being in a dark alley. Have you ever thought about finding other authors to recommend books to each other?

Is the author so miserable? Reward yourself?

It looks surprisingly good. Come on, author

Very appetizing. Come on

So far, it looks good, nothing bad about it

With just this amount of updates, who are you looking down on? ? Please post 10 chapters like a donkey on the production team!

Where can I adopt an author?

I just want to ask about that person's original consciousness after awakening And no one else will doubt it

It's okay. If you're having sex for nothing, just vote monthly.

I just read it yesterday, but today the book is gone 🤐

I really like the story and the overall pacing is pretty good. However, there are some wording problems in many places, and there are occasional language errors, which makes the reading experience not very smooth. This is where I feel I'm different from the head author.