The Legend of the Bloody Marquis of Qin Dynasty

Personally, I think Qin Shi should write less about modern things and climb the modern science and technology tree. Qin Shi's science and technology is inherently abnormal, and it is not a historical article, so why show off the superiority of modern things.

The subject matter is good, but it's a bit embarrassing to watch. I feel like I'm writing a fantasy in Qin Shi's skin, always talking about the level of cultivation. When I see a person, the first thing I describe is the level of cultivation of the person. It's like the cultivation level is written on the face; and the main character is not written in a realistic way, at least. In that era, the aristocratic class would treat their maids as their sisters, and they would treat each other as brothers and sisters. Their wives would call their wives sister-in-law, and they would have to practice egalitarian democracy later on. There were also a lot of risqué practices, and the descriptions were used indiscriminately: driving a carriage, the witchcraft sect 🤮 is a bit poisonous

I haven't dared to watch it yet, but I think the starting point of the protagonist is too high. He is also a noble, a marquis, and a hundred thousand elites. If this starting point does not quickly unify China, conquer Europe and the United States, and develop Australia, I will feel sorry for the word time traveler. Ordinary time-travelers: Travel through the peasants → Revolt → Open fields and station troops → Train soldiers → Conquer cities and land → Digest and develop → Resist and defend the city → Enough soldiers and food → First south and then north → Confrontation between north and south → Found the country in peace → Change culture and innovate → Train troops and stock up on food → Sweep across Central Asia → Lay tracks and roads → Encroach step by step → Unify Asia → Aviation and navigation → Make stars and land on the moon

Qin Shi is really difficult to write about because it is so classic!

Sand dollar, you are a hot chick who is trying to point out the world. You have no strength and can only use your mouth to compare. There should be a villain who will directly kill your mouth. Give the girl a second stroke.

Who has the heroine already decided on? The character bar is also invisible

What was written in the first three chapters, Bai Yifei was nothing. Even a 12-year-old was an adult in that era. Since it was a fusion, the character was changed to look like a diaosi. Slipping away

There are too many messy secondary designs, which are superfluous,,,

To be honest, I look down on South Korea's so-called 100,000 elites. In the Qin Dynasty, transportation was inconvenient and horses were insufficient. The important combat strength was chariots and soldiers. The protagonist is really 100,000 strong, even if he is not an experienced soldier, he is a very powerful force.

I'm a little speechless 😒 Damn, Qin Shimingyue has written a mythological drama for you

No matter how awesome Qin Shi Mingyue is now, there is one fact that cannot be avoided, that is, Qin unified the six countries. As long as you think that Qin unified the six kingdoms in the end, you will have no desire to watch.

The writing is okay, come on, it's much better than the Qin Dynasty fanfic written by a certain app and Xiao Nippon was the protagonist.

This is the first time I read an article about "Xueyihou". The feedback from the comments is OK. Women can do it at any time. In ancient times, as long as they were powerful, they had nothing to ask for. So you should first accumulate yourself in the early stage. Don't stop at being a prince from a small country. By the way, the Bloody Marquis is pretty damn pretty.

Second, why is such a beautiful book not popular?

This book won't be against Brother Zheng, right? Prevent the unification of Qin?

Since the opening of the book, the writing is indeed relatively average, and I am still figuring it out. If you have any thoughts, suggestions, and complaints, you can leave them in the comment area! ! ! Clicking on the book is fate, thank you all for your support! ! !

Yan Lingji

The first part was pretty good. Starting from rescuing the Korean princess, I felt like I could give it up and had no desire to continue reading. Even if you know you can't do something but do it, you also don't need the sword energy from the ceiling. 👿👿👿

This book is pretty good. It's not like a novice, it's organized.

Qin has three treasures: He's Bi, Suihou's Pearl, and Tianwen's Sword! Chu has two treasures of Marquis Zeng: the Zunpan of Marquis Zeng and the chimes of Marquis Zeng! Zhao, Wei and Han have three tripods in the Central Plains of Shanxi: Zhao's Maogong tripod, Wei's Dake tripod, and Han's Dayu tripod; Qi has two treasures: Zilong tripod and golden leopard seal! Yan Youji's old treasure: Dayu Ge.

Wasn't the Demon God of War supposed to have been produced when Gai Nie defected to Qin?

The protagonist of this book, Bai Yifei, asked his cousin, Mrs. Mingzhu, to build Cihang Jingzhai. He could imitate the Cihang Jingzhai in Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty, which specialized in supporting dragons. He turned the prince Sun Gongzi, whom the protagonist was optimistic about, into a person in power who collected external disciples to interfere in internal affairs, military affairs, finance, etc. That is to say, the court of the Seven Kingdoms sent people to do this. In order not to let people see that the protagonist is playing a big game of chess, the Yue Kingdom has to send people. The Qin Kingdom is the best opportunity to support the dragon, because the King of Qin won Ji and many princes and princes competed for it. Jiao Zai sends a person to establish the Demon Sect and let the Demon Sect participate in the post-election vision. As for the Jianghu, doesn't the protagonist have a man named Tang Qi? He can be sent to Bashu to establish the Tang Sect. The other six countries can also send a person to the Jianghu to build strength. In the court of the Seven Kingdoms, there is Cihang Jingzhai and the Demon Sect, and there are various The sect, plus the protagonist's intelligence department Xilou, is enough to control all countries. By leading the protagonist to cultivate and recuperate, keep a low profile, and keep a low profile, the protagonist can take action. After leading Qin to unify the world, these strengths can also be unified to gather greater power, so that he can help the protagonist when he attacks Qin Guo on his behalf.

This is my first time chasing the first place. Is it worth refining?

A classic line from the Legend of the Bloody Marquis of the Qin Dynasty.

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It's over so quickly, and I'm not satisfied yet. .

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