I Was Superman's Younger Brother, Yet I Became Homelander

The people of the motherland are too weak and cannot compete with Superman!

One thing to say, the author, this anti-theft thing is really cool. So far, I haven't found any published chapters on the Internet. Does the author have any special background? That's why we can do this

... The subsequent plot is like Aunt Wang's foot-binding cloth, the whole thing is *! Superman has gone dark, ah! Superman's girlfriend has become evil, ah! The female reporter has become evil, ah, the supporting character 123456789 has become evil. After you become evil, I will become evil 😴😴😴. The personality of the protagonist is getting lower and lower, and now the psychological activities of the supporting characters are most described in the whole text. Are you writing about the people of the motherland, the superman, or the supporting character award? The group portrait didn't leave the protagonist aside.

Go high and low, I was attracted by the introduction. The previous plot was very disdainful, but the main character's character of being able to do whatever he wants and being invincible seemed very exciting, but the subsequent plot was a bit speechless. Clark was forced to be darkened, whitewashed and darkened, and there were a lot of DC villains. You have to choose Superman to start the plot. I'll be honest. By the way, most people who read American comics have a favorable impression of Superman. This is tantamount to directly hitting the gun. When Jonathan died later, the protagonist cried, which was very funny. He has superhuman abilities but not a superhuman mentality. Logically speaking, the protagonist should explore the whole world and extend his father's life, instead of dying in the author's writing. So cowardly

In order to write the plot of Superman without interfering at all with Superman's awakening? The whole world is drunk and I am alone awake? And it's very annoying for the protagonist to talk to Superman halfway.

Well, any opportunity to change the plot has the protagonist leaving to make soy sauce. Apart from mindlessly bragging about Cthulhu and the Motherland, the protagonist has done nothing in so many chapters. It can be said that the plot will develop like that without the protagonist. ... Water, water

I'm about to give up the book after reading the third chapter. I rewarded you with two coins just to leave a mark. So speechless. The protagonist is set to be a gangster, and the template is from the motherland. Does it have to be a giant baby? Brainless, bad, what about the restraint and caution of the Chinese? Is there no secrets after having a new foreign parent? Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

Does anyone know whose trumpet this is? Qidian has thousands of works, how come this book allows Qidian to hold an event alone?

I advise the author to take advantage of the popularity and think about your outline. You, a native of the motherland, do not cause trouble. Superman's daily expenses are really trying to persuade people to quit. The plot is too homogeneous. The enemy appears, Superman is decadent, the protagonist attacks, the enemy retreats, and then the next round. Moreover, the positioning of the supporting roles is too awkward. There are many characters, but the role of promoting the plot is too little. It feels like you are holding the identity of a supporting role, but doing the work of an extra. There is no surprise when it appears, and it has no impact if it is removed. The beginning and creativity are really great, but start high and go low. Even if you don't know the word count, skipping 20 chapters won't affect your reading. That's a huge problem.

XDM, you died from poison, don't recommend wasting money 😐