Film and Television City Begins with Golden Wedding

It's like a running account, with no emotions, no writing style, and a poor student in Chinese.

A running account, and also in the first person. It's like writing what happened in a TV series, just like a primary school student writing about what you saw after watching this TV series, what happened in the past few years, who got sick, who died, and there is basically no sense of the protagonist's existence.

I just want to test whether I can write. Now I am working hard to make corrections. After all, I am a man in science and engineering. I hope everyone will understand me, and thank you all for your recommendation votes 🙏🙏. I haven't found how to send Easter egg stamps yet, so I can only send photos from here. The following are the three periods in the South

Find a class. You are not suitable for writing novels. You just refer to the protagonist in the first person and in the third person. What do you mean by the two souls in the protagonist?

I should have traveled through time earlier and intercepted Hu Wenli. Children would not have a sense of involvement.

It's like a diary, like a script, first person, like what I did today, what happened next, no sense of immersion

Modern people, especially adults! If you have a portable space, it will be a waste if you don't play around! You can become a boss at any time!

Switching between first person and third person is too numb. One moment it was Zhao Hao, the next moment it was me.

I'm here to see "Goldfinger"! Be an ordinary person in an ordinary world! The trouble is, while others are living, you are cultivating immortality!

You changed Han Chunming's surname, is it appropriate to still use it as a fan, and sell it as dog meat?

If you give up and don't go to a good school, you have no feelings for the school you want to go to! What do you think? Insulting IQ

How can I put it, human relationships are the basis of writing. I didn't expect that you didn't write the interpersonal relationships in the Golden Wedding well, and you didn't even write the love and hatred between the two families well. Admire it! Come on! No style.

I don't know how this recommendation for this popular series came about. First of all, the theme of golden wedding is good, after all, the filming of the TV series is not bad. But the problem with your writing is huge. Not to mention the small problems such as first person and third person, it is just that the writing is a running account. Scenes that you cannot remember at first glance will be forgotten after reading it. You can either write it from Tong Zhi's perspective, or you can write it from someone else's point of view, which is better than yours. Even the people who are writing about Siheyuan Studio are better than what you are writing. It's really not that interesting. You can join a group of authors and ask old people how to write. Even if their books are not very good, they will definitely know how to imitate other people's books and write them without changing the medicine.

What are you writing about? Sometimes first person, sometimes Zhao Hao

The three golden chapters are written like a running account! Moreover, the names of male pigs cannot be unified, so this book is just boring! Give up decisively

Why is it sometimes in the first person and sometimes in the third person? From which perspective do people enter the book?

Like running water, there is no emotion, and the golden hair is useless

It's a running account and the segmentation is quite strange. It's uncomfortable to look at.

It doesn't look good. Don't criticize the author. It just doesn't look good. Give up!

This is hanging! One day on the outside, one year on the inside! It's me, so I planted perennial plants on the island, such as ginseng, Ganoderma lucidum, Panax notoginseng, Maca, Chonglou, rosewood, huanghuali, golden nanmu and so on!

Dude, one world, one woman, is it interesting? You are still a great writer. Jin Lao is not good. You are still in poor health

Don't you know how to do punctuation and paragraphing? The first chapter was really uncomfortable to read.

There are no details in the plot, and it feels like it's been written off in one go, and I have no intention of continuing.

Sometimes it's first person, sometimes it's third person, it's so confusing.

Why are there so few novels about golden weddings?

And that novel about the flow of heavens through the golden wedding?