Naruto: at the Beginning, Tsunade Is Tricked into Buying a Treasure Map.

This is a map of the ninja world. The author cannot make his own map. This is a map on Baidu. The map in this book is based on this map😊

In fact, the Holy Lord was originally one of the twelve sacred beasts that protected the world in ancient times. They protected the order of the world and fought against the seven evil demons. But one day, the Dragon Holy Beast listened to the devil's bewitchment, attacked the Tiger Holy Beast, and obtained the power of yin and yang that can integrate all powers. , The dragon is intoxicated with the feeling of having power. He gradually deprived the power of the other holy beasts and integrated them into himself. Under the bewitchment of the devil. He degenerated into a devil who did all kinds of evil. Accepted the demonic energy of fire and became the eighth demon. (Do you know why the Holy Lord is obviously the strongest one, but is looked down upon by other demons?) But the laws of the world, good and evil coexist, there will not be only evil evil in the world. A new justice will come. The Eight Immortals came to the world and used their supreme immortal magic to seal the demons in another world forever, from which they could never escape. . In the same way, yin and yang in the world coexist, good and evil coexist, and when the old evil disappears, new evil will come. The shadow generals representing darkness came to the world from the kingdom of shadow. But the laws of the world will not change. The yin pole produces yang. The power of evil must be counterbalanced by a counterbalance. Among human beings, seven warriors with the power of justice were born. They used their own lives to defeat the shadow generals, and asked their followers to hide the shadow generals' masks around the world to prevent them from meeting again. . However, the laws of the world will never allow evil to disappear completely, because the Holy Lord is not a complete demon, and the seals of the eight immortals suppress the Holy Lord much less. He escaped from the seal. Once again he came to someone else, and he wanted to enjoy the time that only belonged to him . During this period, he discovered a mask that could summon shadow soldiers. He used magic to steal the power of the mask. A long time has passed and the laws of the world have remained the same, and evil will not be allowed to survive alone. The Archmage, who inherited the power of justice, found a way to fight the Holy Lord. He defeated the Holy Lord and turned all the other powers deprived of the Holy Lord into spells, taking away the Holy Lord's body, just like he had taken away the power of other holy beasts. The Holy Lord turned into a stone statue. Buried underground forever by the Archmage... Each of the twelve spells represents a power of the twelve holy beasts, and they are all very powerful and not as fragile as shown in the animation. (The power of a spell is like a big post, and the user is like a cup taking water. How much it can take depends entirely on the user's temperament). In ancient times, there was no coexistence between good and evil, and the side of justice relied on these powers to fight against the seven demons at their peak. Like the eight great demons, each possesses the same power as its corresponding . Chicken Spell: Telekinesis (referring to the movie, super power is out of control) is not just about floating. Monkey Talisman: Seventy-two changes, which can change all living things in the world . Ever-changing, nothing is impossible (can be developed, depends on the user ) Ox Talisman: Move mountains and seas, infinite power. (Can split a mountain easily) Tiger Talisman: The most important of the twelve talismans. Different forces fused into one place are inherently dangerous. Too much power melted into one body. This will repel each other and cause harm to the body. (Xiaoyu doesn't count. He might be the reincarnation of some great god!). With him, yin and yang can be integrated into everything. (The splitting into two people in the animation is just a side effect) (The protagonist will gain more and more miscellaneous powers in the future, and will need the Tiger Talisman to balance,) Talisman-free: Super speed, not just running faster, but all-round, vision, reaction, and body functions, all-round speed up. (Refer to The Flash, or Quicksilver) Dragon Talisman: Has the power of explosion. It should be a flame shock wave with extremely strong attack power. (This is originally the power of the Holy Lord) Snake Talisman: Completely invisible, even the objects you touch are invisible together with living things (not just invisible, it should be completely transparent! Even the shadow is gone) Horse Talisman: Remove all substances that are not beneficial to itself. Be truly invulnerable to all poisons and fearless of curses (with him, the protagonist will not take part in anyone's plot). Sheep Spell: The ability to target the soul, not only to yourself, but also to others. Can easily knock other people's souls out of the body (Is it similar to the ability of the Samsara Eye? He is more powerful than the Samsara Eye,) Dog Talisman: Immortality. (This is everyone's dream! With that talisman, you can really do it without fear of any harm. In addition, with the sheep talisman, even the soul, no one else can think of it) Pig talisman: Cyclops (He can not only shoot straight! He can also strike like a whip, it will break if it is rubbed, and die if it is touched) . ) Rat Talisman: Turn stillness into movement, turn death into life (This spell is very powerful, the statue he resurrected has divinity. It is simply a artifact and a blessing for otakus. Think of those life-size figures at home) The power of the spell is like a vat with very powerful power. And users are like water cups. It can only be based on your own temperament. Use part of your strength. (If too much power is used, it is harmful. Especially when other miscellaneous powers exist together. This needs to be neutralized by the Tiger Talisman) This is why the strength of each person's spell is different when using it! In fact, the same goes for the Black Shadow Mask. No one else can use their full power. It seems that the evil dragons under the Holy Lord are derived from the Monkey Talisman and The Rat Talisman. The monkey shapes it, the rat gives it life. The protagonist can rely on these two to have many subordinates For example, in the Terminator world, grab a T1000 and become a superwoman. Then the rat charm gives life! Praise The eight demons don't just rely on their own attributes, right? They are the strongest demons among the many demons in ancient times Wizards. They have their own magic! (Remember the magic encyclopedia of the Holy Master? Other demons should also have their own memoranda!) The eight demons were the strongest demon wizards in ancient times. They have magic. Not just by attributes! It's just that the long period of imprisonment made them forget too much (remember the holy master's witchcraft encyclopedia, other demons should have a copy!)

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Don't write emotional dramas. If you fall in love with Tsunade or Terumi Mei, then she asks you to help her or her village. Will the protagonist help? If not, she will deliberately try her best to induce the protagonist to protect her, and the protagonist will help or not, so this novel should not include emotional dramas 😰

Obito is really not because of love. . Perhaps. Not entirely because of love! He executed Eye of the Moon, not for Lin. He understood - Kakashi didn't want to kill Lin, but he did it anyway; Lin didn't want to die, but she died anyway. At that moment, he realized the truth of the ninja world - those who didn't want to kill killed, and those who didn't want to die died. Forcing people to kill, forcing people to die, forcing people to cherish each other but kill each other The ninja world is hell. Obito suddenly understood that the ninja world had no future at all. Everyone was forced to become an executioner, would be reduced to a puppet, would be wiped out who had their ideals killed, and would all die. It is true that Kakashi desperately wanted to save Lin, but he killed Lin himself. Lin wanted to live, it was true, but she committed suicide for Konoha. They are forced to do things that are completely contrary to their ideas, and they are unable to resist. So Obito was desperate. He believes that people who are like puppets are fake and wants to create a new world. There, there is the real Kakashi and the real Lin. They are real and can express their true thoughts as they please, live as long as they want, don't kill if they don't want to, and be their true selves. This is the truth. In the more than sixty years since Konoha was founded as a village, it has experienced a total of 4 ninja wars , with an average of one world war every 15 years... A ninja war once every 15 years, what is the concept? After the Fourth World War, there seemed to be peace. That was because Konoha was the one who saved the world, and he was the boss with absolutely transcendent strength. Just wait, when Naruto and the others die, the Fifth Ninja War will come. Isn't this the first Shinobi War? As soon as Hashirama died, the four major countries immediately launched a rebellion. Did Hashirama treat them badly? They still rebeled. Koko. This ninja world is sick and there is no cure...

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As a behind-the-scenes article, it is undoubtedly unqualified. All personal emotions are experienced by the protagonist, which is very bad. The protagonist should be like the tablet or statue enshrined at home. It is important but not necessary. Just worship it during festivals or when you think of it. There is no need to write about it in detail. The most important thing is that the protagonist is the referee. He should not be biased, nor should he vent his personal emotions. The previous jar was biased towards Konoha. It didn't matter the first time he saw it. But it turns out that this is the same for you. You have to surpass him instead of imitating him! Scatter the treasure map together, and the person who gets it will use the power of the treasure to let people know about the treasure, and then there will be a fight. This can be filled with dozens of chapters. Then Akatsuki is looking for the treasure, and is discovered by the Kingdom of Thunder. A mantis stalks the cicada and the oriole behind it, and then is discovered by the Kingdom of Fire. This can be filled with dozens of chapters. Isn't this the number of words! When I saw the protagonist going to Konoha again, my whole expression was like that of a grandpa on the subway looking at his mobile phone. I really hope you can surpass the original work (can) instead of copying the original work.

I have read a novel in which the protagonist is Sasuke from time travel. It's just astronomy. He is different from the protagonist. What they are doing is playing in a more humorous style. The protagonist will look down shamefully when he sees Naruto's seduction technique! There is more. The protagonist is making a revolution in Konoha. First, the business revolution that brought money in the third generation. After waiting. And high newspaper office. It was nothing. Three generations are also happy to have money. Later, the protagonist spreads revolutionary ideas through newspapers. Make a revolution. He also took on a female apprentice. The female apprentice is still a genius. The protagonist gave him the idea of ​​a steel suit. He just kept researching. Then things got serious. Even Payne reads his newspaper. Look at his revolutionary thoughts. Still brainwashed! I feel that the protagonist's thoughts are the right path to save the world. Afterwards Konoha Village. The protagonist is imprisoned by the third generation! . Then Payne was looking for the protagonist. Lead the entire Akatsuki organization to directly attack Konoha Village. Then the protagonist's apprentice. The steel suit has also been developed! (Refer to the simple steel suit in the first part of Iron Man) and also began to break into the root prison. It was quite exciting to watch at the time. Pity. Wait until they storm the prison. Payne wants the protagonist to build a new world together. His female apprentice wanted to save him from Konoha. When Kakashi, Gai, the Third Generation, and Danzo all gathered. The protagonist travels through time again! Suddenly traveled through time at the climax. It was very uncomfortable when I saw it😖 I still remember it. The next world is in the Mr. Zombie world. The protagonist uses the art of incarnation to direct and act in a play in which two masters and apprentices are attacked by a snake demon in the wild. In fact, they are all his incarnations. The snake demon has become like Orochimaru. The master looks like an old Taoist priest. He looks like Sasuke when he was a child. Then in front of Uncle Jiu. The avatar taking the form of Orochimaru bit his neck. Then the incarnation of Orochimaru said in a very pretentious manner. You will come to me. Then suddenly his head stretched out, and a long sword stuck out of his mouth to stab Jiu Shu. The old Taoist priest, the master's external incarnation, ran over to serve as a sword for Uncle Jiu. Then Orochimaru transformed and left. The incarnation of the old Taoist priest is like Uncle Jiu Tuogu. Uncle Jiu was grateful to the old Taoist priest for saving his life and agreed to accept the protagonist as his disciple. Take care of him and grow him up. . After hastily burying the old Taoist priest. Uncle Jiu took the protagonist back to Yizhuang. The protagonist needs to be cured of the evil poison. But when looking at the wound. Suddenly, he found that the tooth cavity bitten by the incarnation of Orochimaru had disappeared. Instead, the mark of Sasuke's cursed seal appeared in Naruto. And then. The marks began to spread from around the neck. Uncle Jiu's heart skipped a beat. I thought I was in trouble. This is probably the rhythm of turning into a demon. Although I have never seen this form of demonic poison. But Uncle Jiu didn't dare to delay. Immediately ask Wen Cai Qiu Sheng to get up. Help with the forum practice. Use Maoshan's evil magic method to suppress the spread of evil poison. Although Uncle Jiu was unsure. Don't know if it's useful. But only once. Nothing can happen to the orphan of the savior. Otherwise, I will be ashamed of the dead. After Uncle Jiu used up the spell. The protagonist also controlled the curse seal and retracted it into the Heavenly Curse Seal mark on his neck. . After. The protagonist is Uncle Jiu's most special apprentice. You have reasonably participated in the world of Uncle Jiu's series! Later, when he transforms into the curse seal release form in front of Uncle Jiu. There is also an excuse. Previous poison

After reading the previous chapters, what should I say? What I want to see is the fierce collision between various characters and forces because of the treasure map, such as resurrection props, unsealing props, Obito and Black Zetsu will definitely go crazy, who will get the treasure, and what interesting things will happen. I want to see these, not to see how pig feet sell treasure maps, how to help others dig treasures, how to show off, and what abilities they get. Who wants to see these! Who cares about the pig's feet? It doesn't matter whether it's invincible or not.

It would be better if the protagonist is an invisible person behind the scenes. Damn it, he has to come out and show off.

No, brothers, I will limit my speech for a few days. The trolls will affect my mentality. Yesterday, I almost didn't finish the second update. 😂 Someone is really going to prostitute for nothing. Hundreds of comments are all trolls and curses. This person's life is so unsatisfactory that he came to the Internet to vent his anger😓

In a book like yours, it's best for the protagonist not to be swayed by anything. , What you are doing now is obviously biased towards Konoha. After leaning towards Konoha, you are biased towards various characters that you like. , You should not show this bias. All kinds of treasures are scattered, and who gets it depends entirely on luck. It doesn't matter at all. Is it a bad person or a good person? This will be better! This world is just a tool for you. There is no need to care about this or that. The world will be better if it develops freely!

Are they all from Konoha? Too biased.

The largest denomination banknote in the Fire Country is only 200 taels. Where did the 10,000 taels come from?

I think the existence of the protagonist is superfluous. The jar looked good before, but now it feels old-fashioned, especially the protagonist's preference for Konoha, and even went to chat with the steel hand after the death of the third generation. It's too awkward.

Speaking of Clow cards, imagine a group of big men taking out the cards and using them like girls, awsl

I was stunned after reading the introduction. The Horse Talisman can expel external forces and help you cure your mental illness? The Holy Lord doesn't even have you nb😅

After reading the first three chapters, this routine is exactly the same as that of the jar merchant, and I feel that what you wrote is not as good as the one about selling jars in Naruto.

In fact, the world of Naruto. It is very unfriendly to poor ninjas. If there is no adventure. Ordinary poor ninjas will never be able to access advanced ninjutsu in their lifetime. That is to say, the three basic ninjutsu taught in the ninja school will last a lifetime. . Just look at Kakashi's disciples and you will know. Except for Sasuke. He never taught anyone any ninjutsu. Ninjutsu is like martial arts secrets. Not to be passed down personally. If Naruto and Sakura hadn't met the Sannin. He can only rely on three basic ninjutsu to get by. You see. Those famous ninjas. That one doesn't come from the family. Except Sakura and Xiao Li. The twelve Xiaoqiang are all family ninjas. In fact, the purpose of the ninja school is to provide cannon fodder. Like the author in the original work. He is good at fire escape, and he learned it long ago. No need to rely on ninja school at all.

Actually The biggest problem is: All protagonists of the same type love Konoha. Did Konoha send you money? Must they all be from Konoha? The most important thing is to put the cart before the horse. The real boss is not the ninja but the daimyo. Konoha is just a rundown village. What money does it have? 😅 The Country of Fire is the big one, the Country of Fire is the country with the most money, and Konoha is just a village of the Country of Fire. If it were me I would definitely go to all countries again.

The Hyuga clan's clan is inherited from a single line. Only one person in each generation can become a clan, and all the others are branch families. If there are two brothers, except for the eldest brother who is a clan, the younger brother will also be marked as a caged bird and become a branch family when he grows up, so the number of clan members will always remain only a few people. If Hinata was given up, she would also be engraved as a caged bird and become a separate family. However, Hinata eventually married Naruto and avoided the process of being engraved with a caged bird. And if you marry the Hokage, you can no longer take over the clan, so his sister will take over. Otherwise, one of Hanabi and Hinata will be carved as a caged bird and become the branch family. . Therefore, there are not many clan members. I don't know if there is a five-finger count. There is no group. Also. In fact, a caged bird can be considered a form of protection. Don't forget. Byakugan can have countless eyes fused together. If someone is taking advantage of it. No one in the clan can run away

The first chapter is a bit discouraging. There is no point in wasting experience looking for Tsunade. Do you understand aesthetic fatigue? Even if you get a movable house, you can move the house to any place and meet Tsunade by chance, or meet Jiraiya by chance. It's much better than wasting your experience by forcing yourself to find it.

It would be even less interesting to take the initiative to find someone later. I think it's best to just let it happen. Stay in a random place every day and sell whoever you meet. It's more interesting this way

Go back to your hometown and do whatever you want, you are not suitable for writing novels

Why don't you write a translation for the spell? The noble horse can drive away all external forces, the rat can give motion to still things, and the dog is a good friend of mankind and can make people immortal.

One treasure in One Piece has been searched for for hundreds of episodes but it hasn't appeared. The author can't find the 12 treasures. The most important thing is that it's not called a treasure at all. Isn't this a money-splitting boy?

I thought of a suitable candidate for the Childlike Fruit, Nanao Jinchurifu, who is innocent enough 😜 and also likes to make friends, so I can use the Childlike Fruit to forcefully make friends 🤭

In fact, I wanted to say a lot, but when I thought about the plot I had watched before, I suddenly realized that it was not worth it.

No, it's too easy to hold this dog charm, just like playing house. The next treasure hunt won't be like this. How is this different from opening a jar and opening a store?

It's a very good subject matter, but what you wrote is really easy to win. If you just casually spread the charm, the entire ninja world would start fighting for it. Can a genin and chuunin fight against the shadow shadow even if they get the charm? Wouldn't it be nice to just create some secret realm? Everyone started to fight for the behind-the-scenes flow, but you were still dangling in front of me, like a der.