The young man Li Guang was exterminated when he was eight years old, and has since embarked on the path of pursuing the truth. However, when he traces the truth, he finds that things are not that simple.
Reader comments
The book is very good, keep writing.
(After three and a half years of writing, I am still very good at it.)
I hope the master can write it more beautifully, the content at the end is a bit boring!
Come on! Frequent interruption will reduce the weight. I suggest you type 200,000 words and publish them regularly. If you don't update it for half a month, very few people will watch it. This is purely a suggestion.
Dreams come true and the future is bright.
The single move has been decided, I wish you success in the future.
A chapter of 2,000 words will increase the number of people who will read it. It is best to publish it at eight o'clock, morning or evening.
Fantasy romance, the two have little connection, this is more like romance, fantasy fighting and killing, this romance seems inappropriate.
The transitions are natural and the characters are vividly drawn on the page.
The only shortcoming is that it fails to reflect its own main idea.
Three or four pages per chapter will dissuade many bookworms. I suggest you write a chapter of 2,000 to 3,000 words.
Chapter 7: Genocide should describe the fight, or focus on the protagonist's grief.
Your writing style is very good. I can't help but sink into it and feel the strange and bizarre worlds.
It is recommended that you add the description chapter to the work and place it in the main text, which will reduce your weight and exposure.
This is a trap I have stepped on, and I want to tell you. It is not a criticism, just a suggestion.
The book is very good, keep writing. (After three and a half years of writing, I am still very good at it.)
I hope the master can write it more beautifully, the content at the end is a bit boring!
Come on! Frequent interruption will reduce the weight. I suggest you type 200,000 words and publish them regularly. If you don't update it for half a month, very few people will watch it. This is purely a suggestion. Dreams come true and the future is bright. The single move has been decided, I wish you success in the future.
A chapter of 2,000 words will increase the number of people who will read it. It is best to publish it at eight o'clock, morning or evening.
Fantasy romance, the two have little connection, this is more like romance, fantasy fighting and killing, this romance seems inappropriate.
The transitions are natural and the characters are vividly drawn on the page. The only shortcoming is that it fails to reflect its own main idea.
Three or four pages per chapter will dissuade many bookworms. I suggest you write a chapter of 2,000 to 3,000 words.
Chapter 7: Genocide should describe the fight, or focus on the protagonist's grief.
Your writing style is very good. I can't help but sink into it and feel the strange and bizarre worlds. It is recommended that you add the description chapter to the work and place it in the main text, which will reduce your weight and exposure. This is a trap I have stepped on, and I want to tell you. It is not a criticism, just a suggestion.