I Lied to Bibi Dong in the Beginning of Douluo

One thing to say, this book is still worth reading.

The writing is great, it's the funniest Douluo fanfic I've ever seen, full of stars! ! !

Shui Binger, this is a bit disgusting to me.

The writing is a bit crooked. Shui Bing'er's family is a noble family of Tiandou, and there is also Contra in his family.

To be honest, I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 48. Maybe it was because the addition of another world made me feel disgusted, but as a reader, I still read it. After all, the content is the author's hard work and it took a long time to conceive. I have also tried to write a book, but the book is not so easy to write. Especially the conception of the world, the description of the characters, etc., These all affect whether the reader wants to continue reading, but you have Douluo and others, what is the point? I have read all the depressive books (it made me lose consciousness for two days), and the title of your book is about Douluo, but you don't focus on Douluo. The beginning is good, but have you written around the Wuhun Temple? Innovation is good, you have to process other people's good works and turn them into your own works. Sorry, looking forward to better books from you.

Why should we assign such an identity to the protagonist? Being the son of Tang Hao, he has to deal with his father and brothers. His mother died at the hands of Wuhun Palace, but he joined in and recognized the thief as his father. Is this deliberately disgusting the readers?

This book is quite in line with my taste. I hope the author can give me a surprise later.

This, this, this, what the hell is written here, his logic doesn't make sense! It's too poisonous. Be careful, brothers.

Why do you need to collect second-hand rabbits? I hate them the most. It would be okay if I started cutting off my beards. Forget it at this time.

Disgusting, it doesn't matter if you mess with Tang San, your own father will do it, he's really not a human being

Shui Bing'er can't take it anymore

It's a rubbish novel, I suggest you don't read it, it's too intellectually depressing.

How can people be brothers with 🐶?

Good guy, what kind of magical introduction is this, hahaha.

Ahhhh, I was blocked again. I'm so angry.

Du Shen Mu Huan Jiu Ji, even if this is the only one, it should be full of innate soul power, let alone dual martial souls. As for what the author said, there is no relationship between the two, the dual martial souls only depend on the strength.

There are too many bugs. Ma Hongjun is younger than Tang San. How come Tang San enrolled in Shrek? Ma Hongjun is 14, and Yu Xiaogang only came to Shrek after Star Dou Forest.

It's okay to scold me for banning me, or say that my writing is not good. I accept it. For those who treat me like a ginseng cock, please don't come out to find trouble. If you see someone, I will reply and ban you for one-stop service.

Why do fellow Douluo people want to criticize Tang San now?

Why can't you hate a person who has been imprisoned for 6 years?

If you want to kill Tang San, just find a reason and evidence to expose that he took away the original Tang San, which will directly make Tang Hao and A Yin want to kill Tang San.

Regarding the age of the characters, brothers, it is different from the original work. I have changed it a little bit, mainly because many brothers are asking.

I recommend a Douluo fanfic called "The Great Sword of Douluo". The protagonist is Galen. His goal is to overthrow Tang San and the Spirit Hall and become the God King.

Although it obviously feels like Tang San has been reduced to his wits, it's still pretty cool to watch.

The author's biggest failure is Shui Bing'er