The Card Is Coming: Smashing the Head of the God

Everything was good in the first place, but when it came to the battle with the guy who played with poisonous snakes, I felt that the protagonist was written very strangely. The protagonist obviously has a trick, this world card, and a bunch of trump cards. I shouldn't have clenched my fists without saying a word after being provoked by him for a few words. Also during the fight later, I felt that the protagonist was weak. And to be honest, when we get stuck in this paragraph, it is not very obvious to the reader what trump card the protagonist has, so the feeling that the protagonist is "panicked" as written earlier is even more strange. Above

After reading everyone in the comment area, I know that it's not my fault that I can't stand it. Thank you.

I don't understand why he picked an initial card in high school for three years. Even if the initial card consumes a low cost, it is an early card with a limit to how much you can improve. The college entrance examination does not determine your destiny. What level you are at is directly related to the platform you accept and the resources you have. The reason is too far-fetched. Step by step, you spend three years on an initial card, and it will take decades to make up for it later.

Thirteen people have too many scenes. Maybe you, the author, are very satisfied with the story you created, but am I here to see that these long and stinky supporting characters don't count as the story?

I can't understand that after waiting for 3 years, the protagonist will finally rely on luck.

After reading Chapter 18, I'm still confused. I didn't see how strong the original card that Pig's Feet wasted three years of waiting for is. What's the advantage of this original card? Three years of training other cards with golden fingers is probably amazing, and the function of golden fingers is not irreplaceable. Its only function is to help Pig's Feet save money? ? ?

After reading it for a long time, I couldn't understand what the author wrote. I couldn't understand the introduction. I read the novel for a long time, but I still didn't understand what the author wrote. After reading it for a long time, I was confused. I didn't know what the author was going to write. There was no explanation or introduction to the system. After reading it for so long, others said that the writing was poor. I don't even know what you wrote. You are the first one. I looked confused. I can read the English and I can still understand the general meaning. You said the whole Chinese, but you don't understand it when you put it together.

I suggest you write less about women.

Find a class, novels are not for you

I've been a human being for three generations, but I feel like the protagonist is so stupid.

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At first I thought someone was hacking this book, but hey, I was still too young and slipped away...

Looking at the introduction, I thought it was Wudi Wen, the kind that uses a hammer to conceal everything all the way.

Social relations are too complex, too chaotic, about aristocratic families, too many conspiracy theories, to put it bluntly, the chapter is easy to water Refer to Huo's beast control book, the name has been forgotten for a long time, and I read the most recent one, Super God's Pet Beast Shop, which was pretty good, although it was a little bit later, and Gaowu's Global High Martial Arts, which is concise and clear, and the writing is more passionate. None of the more popular books is as complicated as yours. Do you think you are reading fantasy, or something about aristocratic families? Also, there's Su, I skipped several chapters, and I kept wondering if it was a female protagonist. Even if it was, your early plot should be to attract readers to continue reading, and occasionally intersperse some female chapters in the middle, instead of making so many bells and whistles.

Are you sure the protagonist is... A real time traveler? ? ? ? Does it feel fake? ? ? ? ?

My suggestion is to write less psychological descriptions of supporting characters, it's all just a few words

So many supporting roles? It's really good. The main character watched the whole show, right? I was speechless even after reading about ten chapters of the show.

Reborn women don't have male friends. If you talk a little more, someone will kill you. People on the field say they want to kill you. The teachers in the school just let it go and call it trash! It's okay to die! Blatantly taking drugs and violating regulations, not stopping the competition, and shouting that the opponent was disqualified. . . The woman is angry and doesn't do anything. Say something cruel and you will pay the price if he dies! Awesome

The common plot of this type of novel is that the protagonist changes the public's original impression that a certain card, profession, bloodline, item, etc. Is trash (mostly there are NB enemies in the background). After all, the protagonist relies on it to soar into the sky, and the protagonist also publicizes it, However, your sister, the protagonist, relied on a golden finger to turn around, okay? It's so cool for you. Others don't have a golden finger and can't copy your achievements. Leading a group of people who regard you as their idol to imitate you, isn't this a scam? Are you sure you are not from the enemy's side?

It's pretty good. Even if I don't know about the fighting scenes, I like to write here and there. So speechless.

The creativity is okay, but the protagonist's IQ is not.

Can it be turned around like this? 😃

I'm afraid this is not an old lady's foot wrap, it's smelly and long.

Skipping the plot of the Thirteen People does not affect reading at all. My suggestion is not to subscribe to the fifty chapters.

First let's talk about hundreds of years ago, and then let's talk about more than a hundred years ago. The content of one chapter, the time is not even accurate 😥