Immortal Phoenix Covering the Sky

Since the main character has become the Heavenly Prince, he must do what the Heavenly Prince should do. Wu Shi, Yaochi, the Holy Prince, the Shencan Clan, and the Emperor's lineage all know their grudges with these four, and they must be killed. Regarding the diplomacy of the ancient royal family, Yuanhu Lake can definitely be dealt with from the original work. As for the grassroots in Qilin Cave, the author understands it. Whether the other royal family are enemies or friends is left to the author. And if you want to have a heroine, don't make An Miaoyi or Yan Ruyu. We have some taste, wouldn't it be nice to switch to someone who is a good match?

Since he is already an ancient prince, just point your ass to the human race and kill him ruthlessly. Don't come back to recognize Wu Shi as your father.

Those comments in the comment area that pit the protagonist against humans are too small. The main theme of Zhetian is the pursuit of the great emperor to become an immortal, and everything else must come later. In modern times, there was actually no hatred between the ancient tribes and humans at all in the beginning. After all, the hatred that existed in the past has been over for millions of years. If the Ancient Clan hadn't wanted to oppress humans as soon as they were born, powerful men like Jiang Taixu and Gai Jiuyou would have no interest in finding trouble with the Ancient Clan. Both parties could benefit from each other. And if the Ancient Clan had not found trouble in advance, humans would have been very afraid of the Ancient Clan and would not have taken the initiative to attack the Ancient Clan. If someone wants to ask, eh, if the ancient tribe does not oppress humans, how can the status of the race be improved? Good question, but the answer to this question is very simple, so simple that there is no need to ask it. [The protagonist becomes the emperor]. It's so simple. No matter what race you are or which planet you come from, as long as you become the Great Emperor, your race and planet will be respected because of you as the Great Emperor. There is no need to rely on provoking enemies for no reason to improve one's racial status. As long as the protagonist becomes the emperor, everything will be available. And the first priority of humans in this world is not xenophobia. The goal of the great emperors of the human race is to level the restricted area, not "Ah, I want to improve the status of the human race and which ancient race I want to exterminate." Their structure is not that small. As long as the Forbidden City Supreme wants to cause chaos in the dark, the Human Emperor will fight. No matter you are the Ancient Emperor or the former Human Emperor, you will fight. They will be treated equally. There is no such narrow-minded racial prejudice. The protagonist used to be a human, but now he is an ancient race, so there is no need for the ancient race to specifically conflict with humans. As long as he becomes the emperor, and then treats the ancient race and the daily rent equally, then these races will be under his command. The protagonist should not focus on one racial struggle. The pattern should be bigger, like that of an emperor. When Ye Fan was weak, he was oppressed by the ancient tribe, so he killed the ancient tribe, but when he became the emperor, he did not go out of his way to exterminate the ancient tribe. The protagonist structure should also be bigger and bigger. If you want to be the Great Emperor, destroy the Supreme Being, and ascend to immortality yourself, don't focus on narrow-minded racial discrimination! !

The author should not forget that the female Holy Spirit of Yaochi and the Prince of Heaven can also be said to be childhood sweethearts. They were not even "born". They are natural Taoist friends.

It is too difficult to be a foreigner in Zhetianli. Even if the protagonist is in the first echelon, he can only survive with the ancient tribe at most. In the early stage, they kept saying that all the ancient races looked down on the human race, but as a result, the human race had a group of great emperors. The Holy Spirit is also one step short of reaching enlightenment as soon as it is born. As a result, even a great emperor will have to kill one or two. There is also Ba Ti who claims to be the biggest enemy of Holy Body. However, except for one who kills Holy Body head-on, the others are all playing dirty tricks. Besides, the first-tier heroes Wu Shi, Rueren, Duan De, and Emperor Zun are all from the human race. The fight between the Ten Thousand Clans and the Immortal Emperor was all about supporting the scene, and the battle between the Blue Emperor and the Holy Emperor should have been pretty good, but the results were all half-baked. Anyway, if Zhetian gets a lot of praise in the early stage, he will get slapped in the face later.

Some personal thoughts, welcome to discuss: 1. Since the protagonist is the emperor, he must know his own position. Just like the readers of the Alien Beast style do not like the protagonist to be too close to humans, the protagonist should also focus on himself and his own power. If there are human beings who are hostile, he will naturally kill them. The Supreme takes the initiative to make peace 4. Regarding Ye Fan, I think the protagonist can be himself, there is no need to target him in particular, if he comes to stop you, he should be killed 5. As for the heroine, if you have the ability to write emotional scenes, just write them. If you don't have the ability, just don't write it or write it off in one stroke, but if you want to write it, I hope to write one that can keep up with the protagonist 6. The Emperor's talent is the most talented in the early stage of Zhetian, and he is also of noble status. I hope to write his characteristics

In fact, the grudge between the Immortal Emperor and Wu Shi is just a matter of face, and the Immortal Emperor is very affectionate and righteous, and he erects monuments for his dead subordinates. On the other hand, the Emperor's respect for the people of the ancient heaven is not worth it.

The only requirement is that it should not be written as a stallion novel. It would be better to write about the ancient princess or Yan Ruyu. Don't write about a bunch of women An Miaoyi, Qin Yao, etc., Don't study them anymore, they are all broken. If you want Taoist companions, go to the trouble of finding someone with a noble bloodline who can cultivate to at least a quasi-emperor. I don't want anything rotten and smelly. He is also the protagonist after all

When I was reading the book, I thought that the Holy Prince was a bitter prince, and that he had no guardian and was bullied by the Heavenly Prince. Later, it was discovered that the Emperor was a bitter prince, and the Immortal Emperor made enemies of him. Wu Shi was responsible for clearing the equipment. In the end, only a few saints were there to help him. There were no great saints and no ancient imperial soldiers, but he had to face so many powerful opponents. After reading it carefully, I found that the second son of the Emperor was the worst. 1. The Heavenly Sword was taken away by the Emperor, and there were no ancient imperial soldiers. 2. There were no resources for cultivation at all, and they had to rely on themselves. 3. There was no guardian to guide the cultivation. There are many people who have great skills) 5 Innate has a peerless enemy, the Heavenly Emperor's son Ye Yishui, who must be better than him in every aspect (requires resources, protectors and protectors, practices scriptures stronger than the little phoenix, two great Heavenly Emperor-level inheritances, and is the innate holy body Taoist body...) To sum up, the two most miserable princes are the two sons of the Immortal. They don't know what evil the Immortal has done. They are unlucky and the whole family is unlucky

The rest of this book seems to be okay so far, but there are two problems. The first one is the Emperor's sword. I remember that the original book clearly stated that it was a five-color heavenly sword. It was made of at least five kinds of divine gold. How did it become the Galaxy Divine Sand? This is not a level at all! The second one is more than 30 chapters old, but the protagonist doesn't even have an imperial weapon on his body. He's afraid of fire, brother! When you are born, shouldn't the first thing you do is go to the small world of Kishifu and get back the skin of someone who is not the emperor? When the time comes, if I call back my divine thoughts, I will probably be able to develop an imperial weapon! There is also the Immortal Taoist from the Immortal Mountain, big brother. Not to mention rescuing him, at least I have to meet him.

Personal opinion, I hope everyone can discuss it together First, the protagonist is the emperor, so Wu Shi cannot let go. The eight generals of the Ancient Emperor Mountain died so many times to protect the protagonist. Why is the protagonist so miserable? Needless to say, there must be revenge. This is the most basic bottom line in life. You must avenge those dead subordinates. Secondly, my point of view is whether the protagonist is an abandoned son or not, but I attach great importance to it. First of all, all the emperors and emperors in the novel left their best heirs in the golden world, and Immortal should be no exception. If it weren't for Wu Shi's troubles, the emperor's configuration would be invincible. Well, a supreme emperor can still do it. The kind that fights Wu Shi for a long time, an alternative way of preaching, the quasi-emperor is even more, it is like the emperor recommending students, okay, this configuration of the divine organization, the Taoist palace, dares to go against the prince of heaven, the Taoist will give you a try, who can bear it, Chuanying? Even if someone is more powerful than the Heavenly Prince, just ask the Taoist to kill him. No one in the restricted area can beat the Taoist. After becoming the emperor, you can still find your father and follow your father to slowly become an immortal step by step. Just like the second child, follow your father and you will become an immortal quickly. Secondly, in the book, the Heavenly Prince never summoned the Heavenly Sword and the Immortal Taoist, and did not even know their existence. I guessed that the Heavenly Sword was the Taoist, because the Immortal Taoist can summon the Heavenly Sword, but the Heavenly Sword did not appear in the original book until the Heavenly Prince died. In this way, the Heavenly Prince has no regard for his own protection. People don't understand and don't know the existence of Taoists. This should be the test of the Immortal Emperor to the Emperor. He hopes that he can prove the Dao on his own. When the Queen appears, there will be a luxurious lineup. These are all prepared for the Emperor. Could it be that the Immortal Emperor still hopes that the Queen will prove the Dao. Thirdly, as for the distribution of the Source Eye of Creation, what I want to say is is that the only thing that can improve the qualifications? There are obviously many more. Will the immortal and ancient overlord not be able to find other things to improve the qualifications of his son? Fourthly, the Emperor did not save him when he was about to die. This is actually easy to explain, because Immortal was in no condition at the time. What condition could he be in if he could be taken away by two imperial weapons? Third, as a person of the Immortal Emperor, I think he is very good to his own people. It is said in this book that he helped the Queen of Heaven when she was suppressed and saved his youngest son. There are also so many people in the strange world who are willing to follow him. This shows that he is still a good person. All the ancient tribes call him the supreme god. How can a person who has not achieved anything be so respected? It should be the forbidden area passed down from the mythical era. As for the sneak attack, first of all, it is unreasonable. Whether it is the late emperor or the self-destruction supreme, their lifespans are not long, and their blood is of little use to the immortal. This is written in the original work. After Ye Fan killed the Ancient Queen, he found that their blood was of little use to him. Secondly, he did not kill because of his combat power and just did not want to expose himself. Otherwise, why would he hide himself. Immortal killings are usually carried out by fishing. For example, if the emperor robs someone's coffin and dumps the body, it doesn't make sense. I don't know what's going on in Douzhan, let alone Wushi and Ye Fan. It doesn't make sense that you killed the whole family and didn't let anyone touch you. As for sneak attacks, why should you attack head-on if you can have a sneak attack? Fourthly, there are some unexplainable places in the book Zhetian and the issue of combat power collapse. I don't think there is any need to explain this. Of course, this is a normal phenomenon, and it is normal for fantasy novels to suffer from breakdowns and inconsistencies. As a fan writer, filling the loopholes should be one of your priorities, making the original plot more reasonable. You can't just magically change it. The Taikoo Emperor and the Huanggu Emperor calculated that the road to immortality would be opened, and sealed their outstanding children and arranged for the Great Sage and the Imperial Soldiers to protect the way. This is just kidding us. Like Gai Jiuyou, how can you, the Great Sage and the Imperial Soldier, do anything to each other? There is also the time for the opening of the Road to Immortality. After the Golden Crow attained enlightenment, the geniuses one by one said that there was not enough time, and the time predicted by the Emperor and Emperors was too inaccurate. There is also the issue of combat power. For example, the Divine Phoenix Immortal next door did a good job repairing it. The Immortal Immortal in the Last Year of the Ancient Dynasty was seriously injured in the fight against the Remnant Immortal and was almost rebuilt. Therefore, there is a problem with combat power. Isn't this solved? Fifth, regarding Ye Fan's attitude, I personally think this book is well done. There is no big conflict between Ye Fan and the protagonist now, but there is a conflict between the two. Ye Fan is a big humanist, and there is a big difference between the human race and the ancient race. This is understandable, after all, it is human nature to prefer one's own race. The protagonist is a symbiosis of all races, but he is biased towards the ancient race. Who makes your father the supreme god of the ancient race? The human race does not believe in your father, so the protagonist must be biased towards the ancient race. This is a natural opposition. But the difference between the two is not so big as to separate life and death. Sixth, some people say that we should not attack the trio with murderous intentions. We will need them in the future and we will not be able to win without them. In fact, the threesome in the original work are very cheating, but this is a fan novel, and the author can also cheat on the Immortal family. In the original work, each of the trio cheats better than the other, which is normal. After all, he can be the protagonist without cheating. In the future, we can have a family of three immortals instead of a trio. That would work, right?

To be honest, I don't really like the second brother and the immortal queen in the original novel😔

I have read and thought carefully about the part where Zishan was captured. I have a few doubts. 1 Why was Ancient Emperor Mountain dug by a few mortals? Didn't anyone tell them that there were ancient creatures here? Even if it was too long ago and no one understood it, why didn't Wushi stop them before the tragedy happened? He should know where Zishan is! 2 Why did mortals really dig through the Ancient Emperor Mountain? There is an immortal imperial formation there. How can a mortal dig directly and silently to the resting place of the eight divine generals? 3 The Immortal Lineage was born, and Emperor Wushi should have seen it. Why did he wait until all mortals there were dead and there were mountains of bones before he came out? According to Wu Shi's ability, he could completely avoid this tragic situation. However, he only came to quell the turmoil at the end, which makes people suspicious. Above, we found that Wu Shi's behavior was too suspicious and not the reaction that a Heavenly Emperor should have. Then we might as well make a guess. Wu Shi may have been plotting against Zishan for a long time and let's talk about the plot. 1 Wu Shi broke the imperial magic circle and lured mortals to dig up the ancient imperial mountain 2 Mortals dug up ancient creatures and were massacred by the eight tribes. 3 The Eight Tribes came out and massacred the mortals of the Northern Territory in large numbers 4 When the mortals suffered countless casualties, Wu Shi came, "saved" the human race of the Northern Territory, and suppressed the immortal Taoist, the Queen of Heaven and the Eight Tribes. 5 Later people: "The Emperor Wushi shook the ancient times and led the human race to the highest peak. The Immortal God Dynasty did many evil things, and Emperor Wushi directly stepped on it...~~" I think if the truth is like that, then Wushi has disowned his relatives. Did the mortals of the Northern Territory offend him? He was directly used by him, resulting in countless deaths and injuries, but he "earned a reputation both before and after". As a human emperor, he harmed countless human beings for his own benefit. In this regard, he was worse than the lord of the restricted area. (Most people don't believe what I say, but if the author wants to write Wu Shi to death, he can use this as a reason) Why Wu Shi suppressed the eight tribes without killing them, because he wanted to lure the emperor out. As we all know, Immortal is famous for thinking that there is no limit to human beings, but he is one of the Heavenly Emperor-level figures who are easiest to kill, because he has spent a long time to achieve nirvana. At this time, if an emperor comes out to attack him and swallow his origin, he will definitely turn into a figure close to the Red Dust Immortal. However, Immortal is very good at hiding, so fishing techniques appear one by one. Emperor Hengyu fished him with a large piece of phoenix blood red gold, but he gave up his interests to ensure his own safety and chose Gou. The Emperor directly took over Immortal's coffin and slapped him in the face. As a result, Immortal gave up his face for his own safety and chose Gou again. Wushi the Great was different. He found the emperor's greatest weakness and valued friendship, so he chose to take action after his subordinates were suppressed. The result was beyond Wu Shi's expectations. Even though the emperor was in Nirvana and could not display his combat power, he still let the emperor run away. Of course, the emperor could not save the eight divine generals. Waiting until Wu Shi II's later years, the emperor didn't want to wait anymore. He was afraid that Wu Shi would jump over the wall and kill the eight tribesmen directly, so he forcibly interrupted Nirvana and fought against Wu Shi with his original energy severely injured. Wu Shi had been prepared for it, but it delayed the emperor for two thousand years. In the end, Wu Shi couldn't hold on anymore and chose to go away to the strange world. After that, the emperor entered Nirvana and was unable to take care of the Wu Shi clock in Zishan. Taken together, I feel that Wu Shi's character has definitely dropped several levels compared to what was described in the original work. He may have a righteous heart, but he is definitely not a good person, and he is very ruthless and has his own calculations. It reminds me of Daoyi, who is also the emperor's son.

The demon clan has to fight for this, after all, their imperial soldiers are easy to borrow, and isn't the Qing Emperor's essence and blood fragrant? Doesn't Yan Ruyu smell good? 🙂

Prediction Kneel down and lick Ye Fan steps Plunder Duan De and achieve the template of mutual agreement Ji Ziyue appears, helps Ye Fan marry Ji Ziyue, kneels down and licks Ji Haoyue, and bullies Yan Ruyu

The male is the phoenix and the female is the phoenix

Almost. You can see the rainbow covering the sky. If you are not sure, leave it to the protector. It can be solved very well. Don't put yourself in danger. Your family is not dead and you have no grudge against the ruthless Ye Fan. You can be a person with many friends and many paths.

It's boring. Isn't it good to practice honestly? When it's almost done, he will directly appear to suppress the world in one fell swoop. You must know that there is a person in the God Clan who has cultivated to the peak of the Great Saint within a hundred years. Even if he is a divine body among divine bodies, it is impossible to compare with the combination of the ancient emperor's bloodline and the source eye of creation. What's more, the original work also said that one day of cultivation by the Emperor is equal to a hundred days of cultivation by others. In other words, you have to practice diligently for two years. He was almost a saint when he was born. You will become a great sage after practicing for more than ten years. Who just passed the emperor's reign?