Invincibility Starts with Saving the Witch

It might be better if there weren't those abrupt lyrical poems. The writing is good, but there are too many gorgeous words. It's not only uncomfortable but also a bit inexplicable. Sometimes there are some plot fragments, which makes people confused. The last few chapters are much better. At least they won't be ill without foreshadowing. Come on, I'm looking forward to the next plot.

Don't die and don't live alone

Originally, the dragon didn't do anything. It could be a legend when it reached adulthood, but it became an epic when it came to you. Now the gap between legends is so small. Then why are all the dragons in this world not dead? It's nothing if it can't do more than a dozen. The reason why a dragon is a dragon is except for its unparalleled talent. There is also the sublimation of the level of life, the arrogance of the dragon has the capital of arrogance. Where did you put the talent gained from the dragon's extremely long growth cycle and extremely low birth rate? If you write like this now, then everyone will focus on quantity rather than quality. It doesn't matter which race is stronger and can't survive. It only takes a few decades for you, an ordinary person, to become a legend. It takes hundreds of years for a giant dragon, but there are still not more than a dozen. The quantity cannot be compared, and the difference in quality is small, so how can you keep the dragon alive? To be honest, I really don't think humans are very talented in fantasy worlds. If they can avoid genocide, that's good. The reason why humans dominate many novels is because the person writing the book is a human being.

It's a good book, the writing is good, and there are almost no poisonous points, but it is a bit strange to read. If the author maintains his current level or gets closer to it, the result should be somewhere between a masterpiece and a masterpiece.

Lily's mother died at the beginning. What a wonderful mother and daughter.

I almost quit when I saw the author's comment😖

I'm already confused. Is this considered a youth disease? The articles I write don't have any sense of pictures. I also like to do this when writing essays for Chinese language exams. The teacher is happy to read this. But if I remember correctly, the starting point is where I write online novels.

The plot progressed very quickly, and I was a little confused while watching it. How can I put it, when I saw the male protagonist asking the female protagonist to kill decisively, I couldn't stand it anymore and ran away. I can't say it was a little bit toxic. I really didn't like it.

I have read 4 chapters. The author's writing style is very suitable for me 😊. I will subscribe to it first and then read it slowly! Come on, author! It's not easy to find a book that suits your taste these days😍😍

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It is written that the main character is insane and is not worthy of being a time traveler. Time travel is so simple. Picking up girls and enjoying life is such a simple thing.

Personally, I think the book is very good, but there are some strange lyrical expressions that suddenly appear. It's not fantasy, but there is no foreshadowing. It's funny one second and tragic the next, which seems a bit dramatic.

It felt weird to read, and I had no desire to read on. Moreover, the emotions at the beginning changed a bit too quickly, and haste makes waste.

How big is a dragon the size of a star? As big as a meteorite? Is it dozens of kilometers long? Or is it as big as a planet? Mars or Earth? If it was as big as a city, it would be at the meteor level at most. Is it similar to Deathwing? It's the kind of thing that can't raise even a splash of water in all the worlds.

Faster, faster

Nice setting and good writing. It's just that the writing is a bit mysterious. I don't know why in Binglong, I feel like I'm watching Chinese translated on an English machine.

Come on author, the number of chapters determines your achievement

It's a pity that after a while, the result is gone. The author's style is quite to my liking. Life has dreams, and each one is wonderful. I'm looking forward to the new book😘😘

Looking forward to the author's next book

Hello everyone, my name is Ao An. Today I will show you something you want to see.

Woohoo, come on, author! I finished chasing it in one go yesterday and regretted it so much that I asked for a monthly pass to show my sincerity. If you stop updating, I will take you out of the computer desk three times, three times!

How much does a fan cost to join the group?

The composition of the author is so complicated. This diversion dog looks very comfortable.