Fantasy: at the Beginning, the Saint Is Tricked into Joining the Demon Cult!

The beginning is amazing. The villain is about to be killed by the heroine. He confesses his love to the heroine before he dies. The contrast between the heroine's concubine and Xiao Bai is very suitable to my taste. I am also going for this single heroine. The author has also written many female side characters in the back. I can understand it. In fact, it doesn't matter if the hero has a harem. It's just some manipulations by the author later. I have to use it. The character's death drives the plot, but the author also wrote it very decisively. It's good that the protagonist is also decisive in killing. However, there are many typos in the first part, which greatly affects the perception. In fact, if this novel is written along the sweet text, it will be quite good. The male protagonist has been away from home for many years, and the female protagonist has a difficult delivery of her second child. The compensation for returning home feels a bit...

After reading the free chapters, I finally gave up on paying. Judging from the results, this book should be considered a title fraud, because the content written in the title did not actually happen at the beginning. But actually the beginning was pretty good. Except for the fact that the heroine is in love and possessed by a brain at the speed of light, I like the overall direction of the story. Based on the parts I have read, the more serious problem of this book is that there are frequent logical flaws. I feel that the author made up the reasons for many problems when writing the book. There are often logics that are unreasonable at first glance. Even the settings mentioned above are not enough considered, and there is a situation where he shoots himself in the foot. In addition, the direction of the story in this book seems to me to be very erratic. It seems that the author himself has not thought about how to write it. At the beginning, he used a lot of words to describe several female supporting characters, as if they wanted to join the harem, but suddenly they all disappeared and developed into a single female protagonist. However, not long after writing, he suddenly became pretentious and abandoned the previous ones. The heroine started to separate, and then picked up all the invisible heroines and added drama. I can actually accept the harem and single heroine books, each has its own fun, but the back and forth in the direction of the plot made me very uncomfortable. I didn't know how to read it, which was also the main reason why I gave up in the end.

I was convinced. The beginning was really good and I liked it very much. The plot later was too bloody. The protagonist traveled through time and I also traveled through time. This routine seemed to go back more than ten years ago. It gives me a headache, I guess I'll be in high demand later on. It's also suitable for listening to books. After watching it all night, I felt numb. I kind of understood the idea of ​​making a group portrait, but there was something wrong with the arrangement of the plot. I saw the beginning of the text, and I'm tired of destroying it.

This book is my favorite villain novel at the moment. I hope the author, Baba, can read my book review. I hope the author can always write about Jiang Han and Zhou Baoer, because combined with the atmosphere of modern society, the attitude of young people today towards relationships is dispensable. I also know that novels cannot be compared with reality, but I think those who like to spend time reading novels may not want to see the reality like me, and want to see the feeling of grandparents and grandparents in novels.

I still hope that more people will read the novels written by the author. After all, it is the result of the author's hard work. I was really angry when I read it before, but now that I think about it, the scolding is a bit harsh. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write more excellent articles.

I have read forty chapters of this book now. I am very satisfied with the characters in this book. I hope it will not develop into a harem novel. Please ask the author 🙏

I can only say that the author is invincible. In order to implement a single female protagonist, he directly physically removed all the female supporting characters, which is a bit confusing. Now that you are the heroine, you should not create so many other female characters. You should implement a single heroine from the beginning, instead of waiting until later to find out that it is a little off track and come back to physically clear it at the beginning. Moreover, basically every female character has a relatively rich emotional line. They are forced to write it down without considering the reader's feelings at all After I finished reading it, I didn't want to read it a second time. If it didn't work, just Don't add the label of single heroine when you start writing. After reading the whole book, if I didn't know the author's home address (I know it all), if I give this book a score, I estimate that it would only be six or seven out of ten. The normal harem online novels are probably better than this, because he can at least consider each female supporting character and give each female supporting character the destination they deserve, instead of cutting them all off at once like the author. Bad review!

Md read more than a hundred chapters before he said he was convinced💰

The novel is very good, but it often uses female supporting characters who are related to the male protagonist to advance the plot. I don't recommend reading it because it makes me sad to read it.

Author, I really admire you, as long as the girl who is good with the male protagonist is either dead or disabled, except Baoer. Also, I know that you wanted to give the male protagonist a exclusive setting, but it seemed that this setting was broken later by a girl from the Demon Rat Clan. Really, you either give the male protagonist a professional setting and don't change it, or you don't set it up in the first place. Otherwise, you may have a bit of a breakdown in the setting of the male protagonist later on, and you may also forcefully write down the two childhood sweethearts of the male protagonist. In fact, to be honest, sometimes it doesn't mean how exaggerated the plot is to make it interesting. At least others should feel comfortable when reading the novel. Your plot is uncomfortable for others to watch. Where do you get the traffic?

If you are single, you should not have an affair with another woman. If you have an affair, the female partner will be forced to die for the sake of the insurance policy setting. It's not so much about a single woman, but more about a stallion story that highlights the male and female partners.

Author, do you know why your book is obviously very good, but why no one reads it? I took a look at your comment section. In fact, there were a lot of newcomers who wanted to read it, but they were dismissed hahaha.

If you write about a harem, you should write about a harem. You want to believe those eunuch readers and write a single female protagonist. Regardless of genre, I don't understand what is wrong with some Qidian readers now. They all like novels without women, do they like to watch two men together, or do they like to watch someone wielding a knife to commit suicide? My personal opinion is that the readers who used to like harems are getting old, they no longer have the energy to see women, and they are annoyed when they see women. When they see the protagonist, they think of their own pain, so they all like women-free novels.

I specially set a starting point to scold you. What do you mean, you either write about a single female protagonist or a harem. It is so nondescript. I can tolerate writing so many female protagonists who like the male protagonist, but then the abuse starts directly. I really accepted it. You will definitely get better results in the harem book. Am I really a bastard?

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and started reading again after giving up reading for four years! I used to be a fan of Third Uncle from the Southern School, Ergen, Mao Ni, Dancing, and Chen Dong. To be honest, since it is a free VIP reading, I am not qualified to say that the book is bad. I am just expressing some of my opinions on the book. As follows: I first saw a video about this novel on Douyin, and then quit reading novels after four years of teaching, so this novel was the target of my break. Overall, the beginning of the novel is very suspenseful. This is undeniable. It is more attractive to use the system to show that the male protagonist Jiang Han has a time-travel identity. However, the problem with the loopholes in the article is that the role of the system is man-made or a kind of creator existence. This cannot be verified. In addition, the male protagonist has no doubts about this. The last step is to integrate the system framework, which gives people a sense of haste. The reason is because the author should not have a framework and follow-up in advance, such as first in the form of a sect, and then the Great Inflammation. Dynasty, and the sudden appearance of Langya Kingdom and later Dashen, etc., Are to forcefully speed up the pace of the article in order to cultivate the protagonist. However, there are many supporting characters, but they are created quickly and without follow-up, and there is no value for the supporting characters. In addition, in the plot I watched recently, Zhou Baoer was summoned to the upper world, the problem of five national stones, was stolen and snatched too suddenly, and there is no more content after Zhou Baoer regained his memory, all show that the author is a bit too fast. In addition, there is a problem with the character setting, disguise technique, voice, and the name of the protagonist. Why can't we do without Jiang Han or Jiang every time? There is a problem with the nature of a traitor. In addition, the description of the skills is too outrageous. It seems that if you go to an enemy country to be a traitor, you will be like a fool and can't find the problem. In addition, there are supporting characters. Whether it is a girl who has a relationship with Jiang Han or not, the protagonist is deliberately described as having an affair with the girls around him, but he also deliberately emphasizes that he has a wife, so the character's personality does not match. In addition, Introducing Ye Chen as the king of the harem to set off Jiang Han felt like he was setting up a memorial arch. In the end, he was a little eager to achieve success in terms of cultivation, opportunities, and upgrading. Overall, the author is of a higher standard compared to the flow-style novels, but may not have enough experience to write this. There is also a lack of coherence in the narrative of the plot, and the lack of distinction and system structure between fantasy martial arts and fairy novels. Finally, there is not enough detail in the connection of the article and the digging and filling of holes. It can be written slowly, and it will be better if the content is fuller!

To be honest, I can only use four words to express "a complete mess". 1. Have you filled the kingfisher's pit? I was resurrected and went to Sakura Country. Have you filled in this pit? No? 2. What does the male protagonist think of that rat girl? Since leaving that place, the hero has never mentioned her. 3. There is also the girl in the brothel who died in an unknown way. She just simply liked the male protagonist and you killed her directly before even ten chapters. 4. Another thing is that Jiang Han's second wife seems to have died of old age. 5. What happened to Jiang Han's third son in the end? The early stage of this novel is really good. This novel, starting from the sect, looks a bit like a fairy tale at the beginning, and then the plot becomes a bit like a martial arts novel, and then it becomes a bit like a dynasty. But what is inevitable is that when you continue writing, you will abandon the previous taste, which makes it look very messy. Also, the setting of your novel is actually very large. You also wrote that the male protagonist Jiang Han traveled back in time, and then Jiang Han found the old grandfather on the earth during the holiday, or found the bug of the time travel. This also shows that the earth and that world are actually in the same universe. Alas, it was a pity that I wanted to write more...

It shouldn't be posted on the starting point, Tomato is about the same

His writing is actually pretty good, although it's a little bit toxic, but I feel like he's getting better and better the more he writes. All in all, it's quite interesting, but it's a little overwhelming to see how popular it is. . .

What is the positioning of this novel? Cool article? Not happy either! Emotional writing? That's not the case anymore, a joke? It's not very funny either! It's like stewing all kinds of seasonings and ingredients together, and there's just a weird smell

Hahahahahahahahahaha, relieve your worries🤣

It's great. I will recommend this book to anyone who clamors to read Pure Love with a single female protagonist. I'm so kind, and I also help the author to attract traffic.

I suggest those who write this kind of bloody novels go to female channels and write novels.

Either it's a pure love story with a single heroine, or it's a harem romance story, it's nondescript, it gives so many girls ambiguous chapters, and then there's no really good ending. I also admire the author's thinking and logic. After reading more than 200 chapters, I started to get upset. I decided to read the comment section. Guys, please avoid the trap. I didn't see it.

I have read part of it and subscribed to a few chapters. Let me tell you about my feelings after reading it. The premise is that I skipped the subscription. I really hate the protagonist Jiang Han. The character of Zhou Baoer is very well created. The logic of this book is very confusing. I found that when Zhou Baoer followed the protagonist, he was either so angry that his hair turned white, or his soul was about to be devoured by others. When I read it, Zhou Baoer was either frightened or on the way to being frightened. Zhou Baoer was either in danger or on the way to danger. Since Jiang Han likes Zhou Baoer so much, why doesn't he just break it off? From my point of view, it would be better for Zhou Baoer to follow Jiang Han than to follow Ye Chen, the protagonist, who has the aura of destiny. Jiang Han is in the hands of the author, and I discovered that the author does not like to torture the protagonist, but likes to torture the heroine, for the sake of torture. I believe that the author also hopes that his characters can come to life. I was thinking about what would happen if Jiang Han really came back to life and saw Zhou Baoer like this. How did Jiang Han have the nerve to be with Zhou Baoer in the later stage. The above is my speculation based on the fact that the characters are vivid. If the author doesn't want his characters to have their own thoughts, then I'm talking for nothing😴

Damn it, 900 chapters, 69 comments, how do you keep writing?

There is a healing feeling of red eyes. There is a single female protagonist, but the plot still has beauties approaching the protagonist one by one, and then the protagonist refuses to accept it, but does not cut off the love directly. After that, I felt like watching the woman who admired him around the protagonist die in one episode. And first, let's portray and exaggerate the character, and then come up with a more tragic death method after it is deeply rooted in people's hearts It feels like the sadistic development of Crimson Eyes, Future Diary, and Dark Pronouncement

I came here from Douyin because I wanted to watch it. After reading the comments, I couldn't stand it anymore and immediately lost interest.

Chapter 67, when I saw this self-righteous plot that I refused to recognize her for her own good, and made her think that I was dead and then said that the long-term pain was not as good as the short-term pain, I knew what kind of thing this author was. This nondescript book only had the gimmick at the beginning, but it was gone!

Can anyone tell me if Kingfisher will be resurrected and reunited with the male protagonist later?

Hahaha, I laughed so hard after reading the comments, this is the single female protagonist. Jpg