Douluo: After Modifying My Memory, All the Goddesses Are Chasing Me.

Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

This is the first time I see this kind of subject matter and creativity, I must support it😌😌😌

I think the starting point is a bit limited in your subject matter. Have you considered other websites and writing something that everyone likes to read (dog head saves life)

The male protagonist is a green slave. He cuts off Bibi Dong's beard in advance, and Cao steals the little dancing mother. But at this time, A Yin's beard can be cut off. Instead of cutting off A Yin's beard, A Yin and Tang Hao have a child. No matter how awesome it is, isn't this a green slave? The author pushes girls to others and then takes them away. I really can't stand it.

This book belongs to the kind of book that you won't wear when you see a pair of good shoes, but you have to let others wear them first before they look like bad shoes. It's great!

I'm a little speechless. The protagonist has been boasting for a long time, but it's just a three-hundred-year soul ring?

I still have some opinions to mention. It stands to reason that the author has a fan before, which shouldn't be the case. It's a bit toxic. These chapters are all about Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang. Although I know that I want to torture Yu Xiaogang, but there will be too many scenes. You don't dare to fall out with Qianxunji. I understand. Yu Xiaogang, why are you still having an affair with him? I really don't understand that as a fan writer, you shouldn't know what others are reading, and it can be seen that you know. Seeing 20 chapters here, it is not possible, but if you can turn the tide later, I apologize to you and hope the author can improve. After all, it is hard to find Douluo fans now, and there are no good QQ people commenting on your own love. It is indeed almost the same. Yu Xiaogang has more scenes than the protagonist, so why not restart it? I'm just making an objective evaluation, I'm not going to criticize you. The book is really not good, so do your best

Too lazy to say anything, just take a look for yourselves

Shen Nong's Test of Poison: No Thanks The story is wrong, the plot I wrote is forgotten, the time is confusing, and there are all kinds of repetitions. Poisonous Point: The Three Lives Martial Soul is very dramatic. The exposed seventh soul skill of the Death Scythe Martial Soul, the Martial Soul Avatar, has to be changed to a beast soul avatar's name or some kind of mantis giant price drop. The harem poison is that the previous generation and the next generation are poisonous, and the plot is not explained in any detail and is forced to be written in various ways. The timeline is so confusing that in one chapter, Qian Renxue can be born twice, as a newborn baby because Bibi Dong was named Bibi Dong, and in the next chapter, the maid's belly will be reborn in 10 months, as if it is funny. After being reborn, I studied memory implantation for one month, Bibi Dong made a breakthrough in cultivation for half a year and went to find him for one month, then she awakened her martial soul and added her first soul ring for one month, then jumped three years, then went to Tiandou, ate fairy grass, and jumped to the plan for Qian Renxue to be born smoothly. The most outrageous thing is that Qian Renxue is only 3 years older than Tang San. How many years have you jumped? Have you forgotten the timeline you wrote when you changed the settings? The original setting has been changed by you, 9 years old, level 21, 13 years old Soul Saint~ Please taste it carefully, taste it slowly, I will help you solve the pitfall of Bibi Dong knowing about Dugu Bo, memory implantation, no thanks, stop writing, there is no achievement

You used Xier's photo to trick people into coming in, right?

Why don't you find someone similar to yourself for Qian Xunji? Do you have a brain problem? Damn it, if you want Qian Renxue, why don't you just have a child with the male protagonist? Then it's your own child, and you can take care of someone else's child? Is Bibi Dong such a fool? Raising a child that has no blood relationship with her but is the child of her enemy. She could almost kill her own daughter, let alone the daughter of Qian Xunji who is not her biological child. I knew at a glance that the author wanted Qian Renxue to be the male protagonist. Why is this necessary?

I can't stand it when I go to A Yin. You can be a villain, doing evil and robbing people, or you can be a good person, playing pure love or harem. But you chose to write the protagonist as a disgusting thing who instigates other people's marriages, claiming that he likes beautiful wives. This kind of protagonist is trash who is disgusted by both the villain and the protagonist.

When the heroine has Xiao Wu, she doesn't want to watch it anymore. She vomits and feels disgusting. 🌿Rabbit

What's the use of modifying Liu Erlong? Are you simply disgusted with Yu Xiaogang? ? Then, what's the use? Are you really hungry and don't choose what to eat? ?

I feel like the biggest problem is that the protagonist obviously has a more direct and refreshing way, so he has to do it secretly. The system can obviously be used boldly, and the functions it provides are quite powerful. However, I have to design some plots that I think are clever, and lead others to act out a long scene, but the actual plot does not advance much. For example, if you want to go up a mountain, you can just ask the system to send it to the top of the mountain, but the protagonist insists on letting it build a one-time winding mountain road, and then climb it by yourself for a day.

The first few pictures were okay, but the style of Wuhun Awakening has changed, and the writing is brainless and has no logic. It's like tricking people into feeding them shit: it's so disgusting.

The only bad thing is the eunuch in the middle. When Jia had the opportunity to get first-hand goods, he gave away A Yin, Liu Erlong and others, and then changed his memory to take them back. This kind of second-hand goods is not very good. Feeling a bit bitchy

The biggest bug is that Bibi Dong should know the number of martial arts souls of the male protagonist. After all, the script he wrote must take out the trump card before dying. He should have exposed two or three martial souls. However, the male protagonist is still choosing his own martial soul before awakening. This is very dry. It is better for the author to delete the previous ones. The fallen angel martial soul feels useless. After all, the secret room Douluo is dead, and Qianxunji has also retired to be an otaku. Could it be that Xiaoxue's martial soul will be fused in the future? There is also a staff of life that seems to have not come out until now. Why don't the author delete the chapter about awakening the martial soul (just delete one). It is a free chapter anyway, so why not make the plot more reasonable. To be honest, leaving a sickle to save alone feels very powerful. {"NickName":"Zhuo Xingtong","UserId":334400010}

It's a bit disgusting, forcing memories on his own woman, and Qian Renxue who was a few years old, forcing Qian Renxue to become a god decades later. Not to mention that they are both the same person, I just feel bad.

He scolded Yu Xiaogang as a scumbag and scolded Tang San for being a hypocrite, but he turned out to be a stallion and even more hypocritical than Tang San. This kind of novel is the most disgusting.

The protagonist is a rubbish system, the rubbish protagonist is sexually incompetent, and the protagonist is crippled by looking at him.

Many plots about recruiting girls are awkward and hypocritical.

The Three Lives Martial Spirit is extremely poisonous, the Fallen Angel Martial Spirit is extremely poisonous, the Sickle Martial Spirit is deadly on the streets, and more!

The biggest failure is Sansheng Wuhun

The writing is too poor, there are a lot of bad sentences, and the narrative skills are so bad that it gives people a headache.

I have read more than 280 chapters so far. Let me share some of my opinions. First of all, the first point is about the "green" issue in the comment area. The protagonist initially thought that Ah Yin was the anime version and felt that Ah Yin was not very beautiful, so he did not feel "love, like, or occupy" towards Ah Yin. By the time the protagonist officially meets Ah Yin and realizes that she is not the anime version, but a peerless beauty, it is already Chapter 47, when Ah Yin is pregnant. So, as for the "green" aspect, it depends on everyone's own defense situation. The second point is about "green". But this time it was Liu Erlong. The author made it clear that the male protagonist was attracted to Liu Erlong, but still allowed Liu Erlong and Yu Xiaogang to fall in love. Of course, the author also made some patches, such as controlling a kitten and interrupting Liu Erlong and Yu Xiaogang when they were about to have close contact. To put it simply, he fell in love with Liu Erlong and allowed her to have a spiritual love affair with Yu Xiaogang. However, the author's purpose of doing this was just to severely humiliate Yu Xiaogang in the future plot of Lanba Academy. The third point is about the author's incomplete understanding of the plot of the original work. In more than 270 chapters, the Shura God was mentioned. The author actually said that this Shura God was not the first generation, but the second generation Shura God. This was true and made me a little nervous, so I went to the Internet to check it. The fourth point is about the female protagonist. In my personal opinion, the author's main plot of this book should revolve around the abuse of Xiaogang and Tang San, and the heroine is just incidental. Until I read Chapter 280, each female protagonist basically had more scenes during the period when she first came into contact with the male protagonist, and was only mentioned occasionally later. In my opinion, at least 60% to 70% of the readers who read Douluo fanfics are there for the heroine, and the abuse of Tang San, Yu Xiaogang and others is just incidental. The focus of this book is obviously on the abuse of people rather than the heroine. Finally: My above-mentioned opinions are all based on my thoughts after reading Chapter 280. If you have different opinions, please discuss them rationally. I can't stand the follow-up anymore. I hope readers can recommend Douluo fanfics that are basically good-looking.

I didn't want to read it at first, but everyone said it was a stallion story... Good! I see

The protagonist was actually tricked into going to Douluo? What age are you in, why are you still using this old-fashioned method of "torturing the owner for fun"? Are you happy to see the protagonist deflated? When reading a book, readers put themselves into the protagonist, follow him to defeat everything, and push forward all the way, thereby gaining emotional value and pleasant experience... So even though so many people criticize Invincible Literature, this type of novel still has an extremely broad market, just because it is comfortable to read! What about you? I watched the beginning and felt that the character I was playing was like being deceived and sent to northern Burma to work as a black slave. What fun is there in this? Author, do you think it's funny that someone is deceived like this? I can't accept it anyway. Coupled with the outrageous cuckold plot in the comment area, this kind of rubbish will affect my mood even if it is for free, so I will decisively abandon the book.

What the hell are you writing? For example, in the scene of Ah Yin's sacrifice, there were originally several versions of how to deal with it, but you chose the version that was least acceptable to the audience. Of course, this version is actually acceptable, but that was without accepting Ah Yin. In Yin's words, this version is the most rubbish. The best version is that Tang Hao planned the soul ring, Tang San was born, God Shura put the soul into the dead Tang San, and then used divine power to help Tang Hao seriously injure Qian Xunji. After Qian Xunji died, Tang Zhen vomited blood and died. Isn't this good? If you want to write about Tang Hao's affection, then in the eyes of readers, you shouldn't accept Ah Yin.

The previous content is actually good. Don't read it purely as a cool novel. It's actually very enjoyable. Even the ending is not just that. The last 200 chapters are hard water in my opinion. The last 200 chapters can be completed in 50 chapters. If you have to expand it and write a lot of messy "games", it is actually very meaningless.