Start with Bad People and Practice More

I don't know what to say. The first chapter persuaded me to quit.

This novel is really good. I have read enough of those gentle novels. Time travel is about intrigues, spicy, crazy, you are not young, and there is a lot of strategy. There is no bullying of civilians in it. It is a troubled world. You just kill a few people to survive. This novel is not bloody enough. After all, it is a troubled world. Why don't you kill thousands of people in less than 100 pictures

This magic might as well be called a spell Change it, otherwise it will feel weird

The fused world is really poisonous. Why not travel through the worlds one by one?

Map made

I admire Liu Bang and Zhu Yuanzhang the most, because these two whiteboard counterattacks are so awesome

Does the author know what the First Emperor is? You are still divided. Where did the First Emperor come from?

What I wrote before was okay, but becoming a Jiedushi later turned out to be really poisonous. Why would you, a killer, be a Jiedushi? And it's impossible to do it! It's just a random arrangement. In the end, when he became a military governor, he was still working as a killer? The protagonist looks exactly like that, how should I put it, beating the lives of workers. This system is wasted on the protagonist.

Whether Bago will accept it or not, office romance 😏😏

To be honest, there are too many flaws, the level is overloaded, the setting is messy, the plot is mediocre, the protagonist is a puppet, and the writing is self-explanatory, and the reputation of daily poisoning is well-deserved. However, the author was able to interact with the comments, corrected many flaws, and did not maliciously control the comments.

Your training system and levels are really full of loopholes. There are already problems with the level classification of bad people. When you write mixed martial arts and don't unify the standard combat power, a lot of problems will arise. At least your system should give a detailed level classification. Don't always write down the corresponding combat power for each level. Who knows whether it is strong or weak? Now the main character's strength is in the mid-star level, which is over 90 levels. Do the bug-level characters behind it cost tens of thousands? Don't always make every level number reach thousands. Many things in games such as Placement Jianghu have problems. It's not easy to set a lot of general data. Do you have to copy it? Can't it be simplified? For example, one level should be set for every ten levels instead of the mid-star level like you who are at level ninety. For example, those powerful skills that have been cultivated to a certain level should have the capital to crush them in low-level battles. For example, when skills need to be upgraded in different levels, a percentage table should be used. Each level should have corresponding combat power performance, instead of your current pile of data that has no corresponding vague combat power.

What do bad people look at? They look at two sisters who are the most beautiful in the world. They are really stunning in the world

At first, he said he took the secret book and left, but then he saw that 77 also helped the killer organization to kill ministers of other countries. This killer organization did not give the protagonist any benefits from the beginning to the end. Is this a realistic portrayal of you, the author? I'm short of people here to cook, clean, wash, and move bricks, and they won't be paid, so come quickly!

I don't want the heroine to be Ji Ruxue, because I am really a fan of her now. Her love with Lao Li is a bit bitter but also very sweet. If she follows the male protagonist in a fanfic, she must be from the harem, and the male protagonist is not worthy.

I'm speechless. I can't handle it in one world. If I have to make a hodgepodge, even the masters would not dare to write like this.

Let's talk about it here Maybe everyone's suggestions are right, but this book is all about mixed martial arts at the beginning. If you want to say that I can't write about mixed martial arts, and that I won't be allowed to write anymore, I can't possibly listen to these criticisms and suggestions. Because after listening to it, I can only delete the book. I deleted the comments that asked me not to write about mixed martial arts. You don't have to argue. Just stay in a good mood and be happy.

I could still watch it at first, and even said I wanted to escape. But later on, I don't know why, but I suddenly became very loyal to the Jin Kingdom and became a loyal dog. Moreover, I was also a holy mother. I didn't want to use the system upgrade to become a dog for others.

It's indeed a bit rubbish. I really hate the kind of novels where Goldfinger is written in a very complicated way. It has nothing but a low word count. Can't you just make a random panel and add some panels? Or use silver, elixirs, etc. To exchange points, and then add more. This is concise and clear, looks clean and comfortable. If you insist on making those messy things, it makes my balls ache. The golden finger is the auxiliary, and the plot character is the main character.

The fifth season was very difficult for me to watch. The first four seasons were about the struggle between Li Xingyun and the bad guy. In the fifth season, Li Xingyun started running to save the bad guy. . I watched the sixth episode in fast forward. I don't know what Li Xingyun wants to do. In the name of the emperor, Li Siyuan is trying to attract hatred everywhere, but he doesn't try to attract people. . I just keep fighting alone to save people. Alas, let me tell you this plot. If you don't want to fight, just live in seclusion. Don't ask about the world's affairs. Don't think about saving people. Why bother when you fight alone and get used all the time? I feel like I'm going to be wasted. I don't want to make trouble for Li Siyuan by asking about the affairs of the world. . After antagonizing the bad guy, he started to save the bad guy again, feeling aggrieved. . Ji Ruxue seemed to have strengthened her martial arts skills. She felt chilly as soon as she appeared on the stage, but she was able to do miscellaneous things as soon as she started. . It feels like the level of force dropped a notch in the fifth season.

Brother, what I wrote earlier was quite good, but as soon as Yan Lingji came out, I couldn't remember it anymore. Yan Lingji is from the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States period, and the bad guys are from the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. If you want to be mixed, you can't be so mixed! I admit that Yan Lingji is very beautiful, but the dynasties cannot match her! You want a mix of beautiful female characters, understand. You can look at other comics and animations from this era.

I haven't read it, but no book in this genre is complete. There are already enough bad characters, and there are so many dynasties.

Good looking

The further you get to the back, the more rubbish you get. Go ahead and eat shit. It's disgusting.

With the Qin Dynasty, why would there be other countries? Do you look down on Qin? The invincible Daqin

Just looking at the introduction to this kind of setting, can you think that multiple small fruit kingdoms in the post-last dynasty can stop the Qin, Han and Ming Dynasties? Qin Hanming is still at his peak. If you don't eat, you will be sorry to the people of the world.

Well written and beautiful. Although I only read Ten Star Chapter, it is not suitable for me. Too poisonous.

To be honest, the writing is solid, but the integration of multiple worlds is simply poisonous, as uncomfortable as eating while going to the toilet.

The previous blocking points are tolerable. Although the plot setting is not good, the protagonist's personality and IQ are decisive in online killing. But when he gets to Yan Lingji, he starts to be brainless. Yan Lingji kills the protagonist again and again. It seems that the protagonist does not exist. It feels like the protagonist is being tortured and beat up like Jianzhong.

There are some wrong directions in it. I should focus on the Jianghu spirit. I can write about it to win the world, but I can't lose the Jianghu spirit. I thought I would use a poem and a song to persuade Li Xingyun to continue the Jianghu. (Not called a hero)

Has the author started updating again? Tell me, I will watch more. Don't be a liar