Fujitora in Douluo Smiles

I have been reading this book for seven years, and I have read 30 volumes of this book so far. However, this book is poisonous. I am here to tell you about it. I hope those who come after me will think twice before taking any action.

In fact, I have never understood why fellow Douluo fans would join Shrek Academy and eventually destroy the Spirit Hall with Tang San. It is reasonable for Tang San to have a grudge against the Spirit Hall and want to destroy the Spirit Hall, but the protagonist is not set to have any enmity against the Spirit Hall. Why should he destroy the Spirit Hall? Moreover, most of the protagonists are civilians, and they should not destroy the Spirit Hall. Without the Spirit Hall, who will awaken your spirit for you? Two empires? Or the Tang Sect founded by Tang San? The former represents the nobility. Will the nobility care about the common people? The latter is a sect. Unless you have talent, will they answer you? It is impossible to spend a lot of manpower, material resources and resources to awaken the martial soul for civilians. Without the Wuhun Palace, you, a commoner, don't even have a chance to awaken the martial soul and still want to rise? It's just a fool's errand! The authors of these Douluo fanfics are quite interesting. On the one hand, they write that the protagonist values ​​love and justice, but does ungrateful things. It is simply a story about a farmer and a snake. The protagonist is that snake. I suggest that future authors of Douluo fanfics fix the settings before writing, otherwise it will be really hard to watch.

The evil soul master must be as strong as you wrote! So weird, Douluo Continent has long been dominated by evil soul masters! What you write is more terrifying than those who cultivate immortality.

Why go to Shrek? Could it be that fan fiction can't go to other academies besides Shrek?

I can't believe it in the first chapter. In the original book, Tang San could see villagers using martial arts spirits since he was a child, but after five years since the protagonist, no one in the village has used martial arts spirits?

I hope that the protagonist will pick all the fairy grass, but don't give it to Shrek and those people. Isn't it better to use any good things to improve yourself and Zhu Zhuqing? Giving it to Tang San and the others was a complete waste. It's better to go to Wuhun Palace to invest. Personally, I am more optimistic about the Wuhun Palace. After all, you can see how useful the Wuhun Palace is just by watching Dou Er. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I hope you can consider it. Anyway, isn't fan fiction just about watching Tang San and Shrek get hammered?

It's a single heroine, right? I'll just watch it

I was deceived by the title and introduction of the book. I originally thought that it was inherited from Teng Hu Yixiao, or that the fighting style was related to Teng Hu Yixiao. The result... Sigh. The writing is very messy. A lot of the plot at the beginning was contradictory and not my cup of tea. Come on, author, I'll run away first.

It would be impossible to live without Zhu Zhuqing. We all have Zhu Zhuqing. Is Zhu Zhuqing really innocent?

I just really don't understand why Ning Rongrong is qualified to get the fairy grass? You left Shrek without even knowing each other for a few days, and you have such a good relationship when you come back? Why do you feel that this fairy grass is so cheap? The most important thing is how the protagonist's father treats the protagonist. Is the protagonist's head flooded? At least no one except Zhu Zhuqing has a good relationship with him so far. As for this, it's like a fairy grass when they meet? Or are you going to be a bitch again? Or do you want to lick Qibao Glazed Sect again?

I was really poisoned. Dou Yi has never written about evil soul masters. It is estimated that there are, but very, very few. In your book, evil soul masters are everywhere, and so many chapters are about water evil soul masters. I am really convinced!

This kind of book can be read by new bookworms. It is not recommended by old bookworms. Douluo is not well written. He copied the character of Naruto. Titled Douluo Cai is the same as Tuo Tian Mi Gong. It is not recommended. Shen Nong's poison test is completed.

Well! Sorry, I can't stand it anymore. I personally think the creativity is pretty good, but I feel that there are too many constraints. In addition, I already know all the worlds, and my goal is limited to the world of Douluo. My vision is a bit narrow, so it may not be suitable for me.

Shennong was poisoned to death, and he could only eat one of the five marrow-cleansing pills at the beginning, and then gave it away.

The problem with Douluo 1 Tang San is not particularly big. What really makes people dislike it is the later ones! As for Wuhundian Bibi Dong is a love brain. Although Tang San becomes more and more annoying in the next few movies, there is nothing wrong with suppressing the spirit beasts. It would be a dream to expect someone from different races to be of the same mind as you! To put it bluntly, it's not Tang San that everyone hates, but the author.

To be honest, every time I see Zhu Zhuqing, I think of the mysterious internet celebrity face. When I think of the internet celebrity face, I can't get into it. It's too ugly! I don't know how you can tolerate Zhu Zhuqing as the heroine. Can anyone share their experience?

To be honest, the author's writing is very good and fluent, the plot is also good, and the setting is okay, but why add Shrek? Follow Tang San? Honestly, it would be fine if you join Shrek to recruit people, but you can give your heart to Shrek. This seems a bit cumbersome. I suggest that the protagonist leaves Shrek later and either joins the Spirit Hall or creates his own force.

Hang out with Fang Han as the guaranteed heavenly king, hang out with Tang San and wait to get some s*x 🙂 Tang San: Did you, a loser, enter the God Realm too?

What nonsense is Ning Fengzhi Sword Douluo? He should just join the Spirit Hall and find a bunch of titled Douluo to kill him.

Now that the pirate system has been written, why do we need to add Naruto characters to force people in? Besides, where did Dou Yi get so many evil soul masters? Just come. Each one is higher than the other, especially the first encounter with Dugu Bo. The feeling is that opportunities keep falling on the protagonist like raindrops. It was originally a gimmick of watching Douluo write about the pirate system. However, the writing style of the battle is relatively new and mostly daily. It is blind to the theme of Douluo Pirates and always adds the evil spirit master as the enemy.

The setting of a Hokage character and an evil god out of nowhere is just superfluous and extremely inconsistent. I don't know what the use is of creating an evil god organization. Maybe it's just that I can't see it. It may be useful later, but it's really inconsistent. And there is an evil soul master. If you don't report it to the Spirit Hall, the Tiandou Empire will send someone to solve it? Isn't this a bit strange? The Wuhun Palace is specifically designed to kill evil soul masters. Not to mention that the evil soul master organization that was not in the original work could not have been so arrogant in the era when the Wuhun Palace existed. It is outrageous to say that the soul masters of the Tiandou Empire are nobles. They would risk their lives to kill the evil soul masters.

Depend on! Where is the single heroine promised on the character list, you big liar!