Pushing Xianwu Across the Board: My Ancestors Never Thought of Prostitution for Nothing.

Please give me some comments. My hands are shaking without feedback [Wang Chai]

The protagonist is soft-hearted towards women who want to harm him, but decisive and cruel towards men. Moreover, the development of the plot has a tendency to favor romance, but it is not written in a way that makes people feel weird. A good book is ruined by writing about women.

I think this protagonist is quite cool. He was threatened with death at the beginning, but then he went on a trip to the mountains to pick up girls... It was clear that Sun Erhu had a problem, and the prince was also a threat... He almost had an accident several times, but he just acted so heartlessly, can you believe it?

It's a bit like imitating This martial saint is too generous However, the gifts feel random, the protagonist is also more casual, and the character portrayal is a bit monotonous. A prince of a dynasty needs to attack the protagonist with his own children in public, just like if you made the emperor unhappy in ancient times, the emperor would personally come down from the dragon throne and take a knife to chop you. Whether you are an emperor or a bandit leader, you will fall apart immediately.

It poisoned me to the point of death, made, and my hand was so weak that I could write for a primary school student 😂

The quality of the book is okay, but the pace is slow. It fails to advance where it should be advanced. The heroine is too abrupt. If you don't know how to write about the heroine, just don't write about it. The reason why most of the great writers are great is because they have either touched upon the heroine or not at all, or they haven't written about the heroine until they have finished the novel.

I want to call 110, I want to call the police. This novel is extremely poisonous and someone is manufacturing and selling drugs.

Too floaty. If you don't have the strength, you still go around trying to commit suicide. Speechless.

What is this book about? A pot of smorgasbord 😓

It's a miracle this protagonist's intelligence survives.

A running account is not as exciting as a composition written by a primary school student

The author makes up a blind chicken with all the bacteria. One moment he teaches others how to read, and the next moment he says they are illiterate and cannot read!

Why does it feel like your book is more like a sacrifice flow?

Chapter 16: The inexplicable licking of dogs. It is recommended to skip reading these chapters.

The starting point is that it is getting worse and worse, and I am detoxing every day

The introduction is not very good, it tells the whole story.

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