Ji Tangfenghua

I hope this novel will become popular🔥, the author's skills will be tempered, and readers will be able to read better and better works.

Come on, it has been submitted, the writing is good, I hope to return it

I don't know if the author knows about the term "Three Golden Chapters", but I think that since this statement exists, it has its meaning. For online articles, a good beginning determines how many readers you can retain, and the number of readers affects the subsequent growth space of a book. Based on this book, I saw comments about this opening that had the same idea as me. "I can't understand" After reading the first three chapters, I don't know what I read. There is no desire for me to continue watching, so...

I've read Chapter 10, let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is very good, describing the details of actions, expressions, and some descriptions of the general environment and small environments, which is very good! There are also some rhetorical quotes from poetry, which are pretty good, extra points! But let's stick to the more common question, the plot question. Let me briefly describe the contents of the first three chapters: floating corpses, waking up through time travel, and resisting enemies. There is nothing wrong with these three plot points, but they lack a very important and attractive factor - a sense of expectation. Why are there floating corpses? Why time travel. Why help defend against enemies. In these points, more content that is more attractive should be added. For example, the floating corpse is traveled by the protagonist, right? You can write that when the floating corpse appears, the situation suddenly changes, or even thunder and lightning rainstorms, etc., You need to create a scene where the floating corpse appears, and leave a memory point for people. After all, characters who appear with various signs will have a higher sense of substitution. I don't want to put myself into a floating corpse that looks extremely ordinary. After reading the first three chapters, I continued to read the tenth chapter, but I found that the anticipation point was not created well enough and seemed flat. Conflicts and contradictions are there, but they are not prominent enough. Also... Maybe it's my problem. There are a lot of words in the names of people, and the names are a bit difficult to pronounce, which is not very friendly to me. When I see the next chapter, I often have to think about who this person is and what he does. Well, this can be regarded as the memory point I mentioned above. Anyway, except for the protagonist and the little sister, I have no impression after that... Come on!

Come on, collected, invested.

It's short and concise, I hope it will be a chapter of ten thousand words after signing the contract and putting it on the shelves 😁

At least create an image, hey

When traveling through ancient times, take care of yourself and survive. Ordinary people may not necessarily be able to survive. The ancients were just not as knowledgeable as modern people, but it doesn't mean they have lower IQs.

After reading a few of them, I felt good, but I felt that it lacked new ideas and was a bit boring. However, the description of the female characters was pretty good. The author can use it as a practice work. The next writing will definitely improve. I look forward to the author's masterpiece.

Jia Jia is pale and pale, and the dew is like frost. The so-called beauty is on the side of the water. Jian is the stalkless di, and Jia is the newly born reed. Traveling to an era of chaos, the known history has changed. How should we live in troubled times? I would rather be a peace dog than a person in troubled times. This sentence also shows that in troubled times, people's names are like grass. I look forward to how the author will describe survival in troubled times.

Wow, it looks good. Not only is the title good, but the content in the article is also well described. It gives people a feeling of literary talent, and it reads smoothly and beautifully.

The writing is very slow, but very emotional. The wisdom of the supporting characters is still high, and Han Ji can only remember a sentence now, what is the secret behind his death. Who is the old friend and why do we not meet? Worth seeing with flesh and blood

This book is my favorite subject matter. It is beautifully written and the author's writing style is really good. The storyline is also quite interesting, and it also involves some other aspects of knowledge, such as Chinese medicinal materials. I hope this book will get better and better as it gets written, come on!

If you travel through time, you will definitely have to do something great. Words of inaction. I'm so sorry for the opportunity to time travel. Since there is such an opportunity, we must seize it. Have a good time. Achieve great things. A hero or a tyrant. All in one thought.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~ Come on

The author's writing style is really good. I haven't seen such a good book for a long time 😁

Although I want to say that for every ten more investments, one more will be added, but this investment seems to be rising too slowly...😂