The Days When I Was a Spiritual Mentor in Zhetian

The Holy Body Emperor can't defeat his son, he can't defeat him

What the hell is it written that the first incarnation of the ruthless man was the Emperor of Nanling? In the second life, he used his own Tianling Gai to make the lid of the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Jar? And then established the Shaking Light Holy Land? Have you really seen Zhetian?

The world level of this Zhetian is a bit low... I suddenly feel that it is very reasonable for the supreme humane person in this Zhetian to have a long life span.

Please writers, please stop insulting the "Great Holy Body"! Go and read the original book yourself about what the "Great Holy Body" is! Before finishing three chapters, the Forbidden Zone Supreme launched two dark turmoils in front of the protagonist! The protagonist is also awesome. He has already practiced the One Qi Transformation into Three Purities, the Great Nirvana Sutra, and the Eight-nine Mysterious Techniques. With the flat peach and the Nine-turn Golden Pill in hand, he actually only killed one Dragon King! ? Or did he do it because the protagonist snatched the elixir of immortality and the sidekick Supreme refused to give it to him? ! If the old red-haired monster had known that you were so insulting to the "Dacheng Holy Body" when he first wrote the book, let alone the trilogy, it would have been a great merit to be able to finish Zhe Tian!

Low configuration covers the sky😅

After taking the system reward and elixir, he can still live for tens of thousands of years. He has nothing to do but pretend to go in and exchange lives with the Supreme Being. Doesn't he, who has traveled through time, not know what's inside? As soon as the Supreme One came out and ate hundreds of millions of creatures in one bite, the protagonist became angry. Why are you angry? Wasn't it you? I thought you were so good at fighting that you couldn't even protect people.

Zhetian doesn't need any spiritual mentor. What emperor needs this thing?

😥 I could have continued reading, but you ended up traveling to a perfect world again. . The plot of "Shading the Sky" only ends there, and the result goes directly to the perfect world. . Forget it, stop watching it.

When writing a fanfic, you should at least read the original work once.

Is this because of the popularity of that spiritual guide book? 😏

To say that the author is a fan of Zhe Tian is to overestimate him. He probably just read it casually for the purpose of writing a novel. He said that his fellow Zhe Tian fans looked up to him and stopped reading after seeing Void. The author probably wanted to express that the nine generations of great saints, the eight are him. Then Jizi appeared in the original book, so Jizi is the only son of Void. Hengyu didn't have an emperor son, so Hengyu didn't have a son? In the follow-up, it should be written that the Emperor of the West was born without a beginning, right?

Is this timeline too confusing? After the death of the great emperor, you can still suppress people and prevent them from becoming emperor for ten thousand years. It's okay if you are as awesome as Ye Fan. There are still ruthless people who can't be hundreds of thousands of years away from the Qing Emperor.

Tmd, this writing feels like it's pieced together, a little bit here and a little bit here and there, it's all wrong.

I have tried the poison and died from it.

... Zhetian World needs a spiritual mentor hahaha...

It's purely a YY work. I write whatever comes to mind. It's a mess.

"Rebirth of Emperor Ye Tiandi Plays Football"

If Shen Nong doesn't die, he will only gradually wither away.

If you like "Shading the Sky", don't read it. I've tried the poison.

To be honest, it's a brainless article. If you don't have a brain, you can barely read it. If you have a brain, you'll want to curse people.

The author is awesome. I read all the reviews and none of them were good. It's the first time I've seen a book with all the comments complaining about it.

Why do I feel a bit like a security guard?

Feeling, just one word "chaos"

Persuading people to quit on the first page, keyword, damn

I can barely look at it in the front, but I can't stand it when I work as a nanny for Ye Fan in the back. It's so poisonous that I can't stand it. I've already become a mortal immortal, and I have a bunch of eight-nine Xuan Gong cursive sword techniques, but I can't say that I can't beat Wu Shi and the Immortal Emperor? ? ?

If it updates quickly, it can still be a quick article. As for whether it is poisonous or not, you can only know after watching it.

Doesn't anyone think that the title of this book is based on the American comic spiritual mentor? The format is exactly the same

No one left? When I saw the back part, I felt poisonous. I skipped a few of them and read them, saying that he died after crossing the tribulation.

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The subject matter is very good. If it can write about the arrogance of an outsider and the tyranny of a strong man, this book should be a good source of food. But the result is that the writing is not good, but the protagonist is written like a loser. The various contents and principles are full of loopholes. After tens of thousands of years, the state of mind is the same as that of a loser.