Those Years When I Forced the Bosses from All over the World to Write Diaries

If you have any comments, I have already signed a contract, basically two chapters and 4,000 words per day.

I can barely take a look, but I have some comments! So far it feels pretty good, but the official response is not only slow but also the analysis and response capabilities are really poor! First, for example, Fei Snake showed up before. At least the official could know Fei Snake's background through big data, and it was easy to think of people related to Fei Snake. However, the official did not conduct some simple visits or anything like that. They waited for Fei Snake and others to take action before responding. This is very unofficial! Second, Liu Jia's return to the sect! This official operation is very confusing, and the ability to cope with it makes me unbearable! As an official, you should be able to tell at a glance that Liu Jia is under control! Otherwise, the official price will be too low! Just like weapons, there are so many arms dealers in the United States, but the one with the most complete knowledge of weapons and the most weapons can only be the US official! Not those arms dealers! So I actually knew that Liu Jia was controlled into the monitoring room, why didn't he arrange for someone to stay or control him directly? ? There is no shortage of people in the officialdom! Third, criminals know the layout of military bases better than the official. This is a bit ridiculous! At least he shouldn't react later than the protagonist! Otherwise the officials would be too incompetent! Unexpectedly, no official personnel thought of this problem from the beginning to the end, as if the officials were pretending to be blind, waiting for the protagonist to discover the problem, and let the protagonist solve the problem! Fourth, the Flying Snake event went too smoothly! It's easy to evade official tracking! Not to mention that there are so many modern cameras, but just a few decades ago, if a criminal gang entered the country and was still in a big city, it would not be difficult for the officials to find traces! And there are all kinds of powerful weapons emerging one after another, making them look more official than official! Fifth, there is the problem of the shield and the passage door. Things that were used decades ago still need to be opened in ancient ways. This is because of the scientific research capabilities of this world! Just like in our world, there were tanks decades ago, and not long ago there were anti-tank guns, such as aircraft and missiles. As long as there are some, someone should study how to counter them! Some small sects may not have such equipment, but the official should have it, not to mention the technology generation gap is decades! Lots of loopholes! So I have a suggestion, you can arrange some traitors or something for the official, this will be easier to deal with!

Author, don't give up! This book is pretty good!