Prehistoric: Storytelling at Guanjiangkou, Chang'e Burst into Tears

Can you please stop raising the price? Just fifteen o'clock will be enough. If there are too many, I won't read it.

To be honest, when I introduce the characters in it, I don't even know much about his life. I just use a few classic quotations, and then the audience is amazed and admired. That's too hasty

Nuclear Bomb Journey to the West, the power level is too low, there are too many flaws, a big demon shocked me, I am speechless, I have to say that the battle of the Tomb of Gods and the Heaven Slaughter can still feel a little bit like I read a book about summoning thugs before. Ye Fan, who came to Journey to the West, punched Baoling Mountain with one punch, kicked and punched. How can an emperor from a broken world with no three realms or six paths in the world and imperfect laws be so powerful? It stands to reason that Journey to the West has the complete Three Realms and Six Paths, the laws of heaven and earth, and the saints in the Three Thousand Avenues can break the world and evolve into Feng Shui and Fire to reopen the world. Personally, I feel that they should all be top-level worlds. Going up means transcendence. Transcendence should mean building a new avenue. You are the source of this avenue and there is no chance of being surpassed. Those stacked realm boxes feel so exaggerated.

Everyone said that Zhetian was a good book, but I really couldn't read it. I just finished reading Perfect World and saw someone recommend Zhetian. After reading a dozen or so books, I didn't want to read it. But many book friends praised it, so I endured and read about 200 books and then gave up. At that time, I didn't think there was any harm in reading Zhetian, but I just couldn't get into it. Zhetian didn't have that immersive reading feeling, so it was very annoying. When everyone said that Zhetian was good-looking, I really didn't know what was better... (Don't criticize if you don't like it)

Please tell me a little more about the content. It's a bit too clumsy to start a lottery with less than one chapter of the original work. Moreover, the upper limit of Zhetian's strength is still relatively low compared to that of Prehistoric. At least the complete system of the trilogy series must be perfected to match the training system of Prehistoric. It's too clumsy for you to start a lottery after just saying a few words. The characters of Prehistoric are not likely to hear a demon, and Yinghuo is shocked. It feels too exaggerated.

Let's go, as long as the protagonist's opponent is all smart, the character description is a mess, and you dare to go out if you are accompanied by two saints, how do you know that Nuwa Tongtian will not take action if you go out, or that Yuan Shi is trying to get hurt to kill you, and there is Hongjun behind you. You are already in this situation, and you still expect the heaven to shield you. Do you think others are blind? You don't say anything about things that happen easily, and you also lower your own quality.

My understanding is that Zhetian World is just a middle-aged world, because they are pursuing the road to immortality, which means that his world is one level lower than immortals, so his strength must be lower than that of the prehistoric world, and it is difficult to raise big fish in a small river.

I feel aggrieved. There were An Lan, Qing Emperor, and Huangtian Emperor before me, and now there are ruthless people. The protagonist once again retreated from the Holy Tribulation, and blatantly did not take the saints and the way of heaven into consideration. The ancestor Hongjun did not react much to the protagonist when he came. The protagonist talked about the mythical Daluo without any scruples. Doesn't this all mean that the protagonist has Do you rely on it? These immortals have also confirmed the authenticity of the Mythical Great Luo, and Hong Yi and Ruenren are both from the human race. Immortal Qin Yingzheng has become a Mythical Great Luo, but they don't even take the human race in their eyes. The protagonist is not even afraid of the Mythical Great Luo, regardless of his own strength or treasures. Things, this is also part of the strength. There are actually people who look down on the protagonist every day. The protagonist knows so much, but there are still people who don't believe the protagonist at all times, worry about the protagonist at all times or ridicule the protagonist. Moreover, the protagonist's storytelling involves huge interests. Maybe Dao Dao will be attracted by this kind of interest, but Yuanshi Tianzun actually doesn't take it to heart, and Taiyi actually dares to pass on Yuanshi's decree. This is flipping the table. In fact, if there is such an interest, if you show even the slightest disrespect to the protagonist, Dao Dao will personally go out and kill you completely.

After reading thirty chapters, this book has too many typos and I can't read it. The prehistoric writing is too perfect. In the prehistoric era, there was a system that directly forced the book down without being discovered by Heaven. No matter how hard it is, it is no different from an excavator breaking through space.

To be honest, it's a logic bomb. Not to mention that your levels match up. According to the level you said, if Qingdi is the great emperor, he will be regarded as a saint. You are too far-fetched. A drop of blood from the emperor's corpse can contaminate the Immortal King, so it is only the Immortal Emperor. Even your level comparison should be based on other novels, and you are wrong. Only the immortal emperor can interfere with time and space, which is comparable to Da Luo in his lifetime. And the main character is a loser, pretending to be nothing all the time. The story told at the beginning is not to mention the story of other worlds, but directly to the beginning of the world. It is really the first level of the novice village to directly open the final boss.

Drawing out the characters in Zhetianli through lottery is a bit poisonous. The most poisonous thing is that characters like Duan De are not afraid of the protagonist, and they will be gone in one go.

Is this book going to be bad? Hongjun ends after more than 80 chapters, and the protagonist offends Haotian, Yuan Yuan, and the two sages of the West. Who would dare to listen to the book? Even if Hongjun gives an order not to stop listening to books, he can't punish some juniors. What about the protagonist who appears in the future? Even if the protagonist has a paradise in the future, he still has to go out? Maybe someone will be watching the protagonist every day. Even if he is invisible and conceals his secrets when he goes out, as long as he comes into contact with people and the weak meet the strong, as long as it cannot be calculated, it is related to the protagonist.

The real Daluo Daoguo does not exist in the perfect world. Only by borrowing part of Da Luo's magical power from Tiandao. A drop of black blood drove a fairy brother crazy. No one really thinks that this immortal brother is Daluo Daoguo. At most, it is a Taiyi Golden Immortal scattered number.

The studio targets storytellers again

😅 Isn't this a reskinned version of "Inventory of the Heavens" Basically, the beginning is okay, the background gets bigger and bigger, and then a myth emerges to finally suppress everything. Most of the similar inventory novels follow this routine. Let's just say, can't we not do this? Describing an absolutely invincible background world, and then not having the ability to write this world perfectly, in the end it is just used to set off the protagonist's omniscience. The whole story is so scary, there is not much interesting plot, and it is basically a mess in the end. I sincerely recommend that the authors of this kind of heaven inventory article, whether they are personal or studio articles, focus on the integration and exchange of the world of the heavens. What everyone wants to see is the integration and collision of different worlds, whether small people or big people, the recognition and hostility of each other's ideas. This kind of plot can attract readers, rather than blindly stepping on one and the other, or stepping on all the worlds to the ground. The background description is extremely exaggerated. Such content is too boring. The Zhutian Inventory-type novels are basically bad. If you want to achieve good results, you don't just need to change the skin, but you need to be fundamentally different from other inventory-taking novels. Hey, just a quick comment, I hope there will be a truly wonderful inventory of the heavens in the future. You can seeChen Nan and Ye Fan sitting and discussing, Qin Yu and Tongtian competing, and Luo Feng, Han Li and other worlds fighting for the great ways... 🙂🙂🙂

Three chapters only cost 60 cents, and you still want to play this trick even though it's limited to free? Tsk tsk tsk, I don't even bother to treat you as a human being.

Damn, storytellers haven't seen their strength improve in such a long time.

It's too weird, especially the first few chapters, which fall into the common problem of storytellers. I don't know how to change the version. For example, when it is said that Mount Tai is the place where emperors have been consecrated to Zen, Mount Tai was consecrated to Zen in the Spring and Autumn Period. Do you want them to think that this story really should not be localized? Just copy it

The low-profile version is prehistoric, and the high-profile version perfectly covers the sky 🤭

Many novels have been misled and written poorly in Yuan, but the biggest problem between Yuan and Tongtian is the dispute over the concept of Tao. Where does the dispute over fate come from? Is there really a Yuanhuduzi in Tongtian compared to Huduzi? You had a fight with a neighbor's kid, and the other parents ended up immediately. Your parents waited until you were beaten to death to find out. Do you like this kind of parent?

If you have the ability to talk about "Buddha is the Tao" 😏😏😏, which is the first book in the world

It's actually a bad book 😵 and it's bad luck

Well, I feel more perfect. A world like Zhetian is more like the world of the Shura Path in the Six Paths of Reincarnation. They enjoy the blessings of gods and humans, but their hearts are polluted in various ways and create all kinds of bad karma. Like gangsters, they only know how to kill and rob. It is one of the countless small worlds in the Asura Path, and they will reincarnate forever in it.

The description of the matter is too long-winded, and one thing cannot be explained clearly in one or two chapters.

What kind of plane is this? Is it gone? Direct eunuch

The plot of the Qin Dynasty in the book, what kind of novel is it?

I'm recommending a pretty good word game novel. The adventure of this word game is really mysterious. It has a full moon night world view, a combination of various fantasy elements, and a good plot design. The collection link is below, you can try to collect it and watch it.

The rest is okay, the text gradually improves and gets better, but the first few dozen chapters are a bit watery.

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No need to look at it, everyone. My appendix is ​​gone.