The Day of Drawing Cards in Dragon Clan

How about writing them all to death

In fact, Eri Yi's regrets have been fulfilled in the book "Dragon Clan". I hope there will be other female protagonists, such as the Queen of Vacuum, the Little Goddess, etc. Eri Yi can be regarded as a younger sister (in fact, my long-term view is that Ming Fei does not love Eri Yi, but has complicated feelings such as guilt)

Writing about Naruto is a failure. Although the length is not much, it pulls the crotch

Not sure what you are writing about. I feel like you are still suitable for joining the factory.

If the heroine wasn't Eri Yi, why wouldn't she be able to write a Dragon Clan fanfic?

What is this Naruto chapter about? I don't know, I don't understand, what kind of brain circuit is it? I hope to write well next time, I look forward to it

I think it might be better if the protagonist is replaced by a time-traveler. The feeling of Shao Zai's substitution is not consistent, and it feels somewhat separate from the original work.

It's all okay, but it's too watery, all kinds of water, the dragon one is okay, after all, Lu Mingfei is the protagonist, but Naruto, you copied the original plot and wrote it into 1.2 Chapters?

After reading the first chapter, I ran away. There is a system. It was Lu Mingfei himself. I was a loser and didn't want to read it at all. . .

This Hokage feels unnecessary. .

Long live Eri, I hope it's a single heroine, because every woman in the Dragon Clan deserves to be someone else's only heroine

Lu Mingfei's character is more suitable for Shenwei

To be honest, it's all fine. But one thing is really a bit discouraging, there is a self-aware system. . . This. . .

Write to me quickly

This is the end of Naruto. Since I planned to write about ten chapters from the beginning, the protagonist will gain some skills, so I basically follow the original work. Many friends feel that it is not good, so I have finished posting the next two chapters today, which are still based on the world of dragons. If there are any questions, I hope you can correct me. Thank you!

I feel like the author's writing is good, but it's just like drawing cards. It's easy to quickly push it aside, and it's not interesting at all. It's not necessary based on the author's writing style.

Lu Mingfei was able to beat Madara, but what happened in China? Even the newly awakened Lords of Bronze and Fire were so difficult to fight. Only Madara and the First Hokage of Eternal Kaleidoscope were able to fight a world-destroying battle like the Valley of the End. It is unreasonable for Lu Mingfei to have such a difficult time challenging Constantine (who was still newly awakened).

Squeezing your strength is like being half-soft. If you can't harden up, don't date someone you can't have sex with. It will only make people feel sick (the feeling after watching the Three Gorges plot)

Let's briefly talk about this book. It's really good at the beginning. Later, when we get to the Three Gorges, it feels like the author has changed. When we get to Hokage, it's even more difficult to read. It's a pity that it's a good beginning.

Those who have never read Dragonborn will be confused when reading this fanfic, it is very reductive.

None of the protagonists have traveled through time, so why is there a time travel in the title?

The author is probably preparing for an important exam, so let's take care of him first.

Is the heroine Nono?