Douluo's World Blessing

The author's book has the flavor of cultivating immortality

I hope the author can persevere😁😁

A different kind of Douluo that can

After reading so many chapters, the author's writing is pretty good so far. It's just that the author has written too little and the worldview has not yet been developed. But overall it is good. I am optimistic about you and I just want to write more.

Read the comments. It's pretty good. I'll just comment after reading the book. I'll put it on the bookshelf first.

How should I put it? The writing is quite detailed, just in the first few chapters. I feel that there are too many descriptions that have nothing to do with the main plot, which is really slow to get started, but now there are too many Douluo fandoms, and they are too voluminous. If your first few pictures are not very attractive and have no gimmicks, it will not be good. After all, the author is also a newcomer For example, the first two chapters describe the birth of the child and the daily work of the father. I think these are completely unnecessary, but the author's writing style is okay, and the description is indeed quite detailed. , I think it can even start from Chapter 5. Even the protagonist Goldfinger can also mention one thing from it, that is, what you write must have a certain intersection with the protagonist. Even if you want to describe the protagonist's parents, they are the daily ones who take care of the protagonist. The kind of soul hunting team can be inserted later. The beginning is so long that I don't want people to read it (of course I haven't read much yet)

I've read a few of them, and I think I like them, but I don't think they'll be popular, but I can hone them and try to write better in the next one. Today's Douluo are all hot-blooded or harem dramas. This kind of slow-burning type simply cannot attract people, because it is not interesting, and after a few chapters, you will lose interest in reading it. No matter how good you are in the later stage, it's useless if no one is watching. What's more popular now is your acting skills. Let me give you a suggestion! It just so happens that no one writes that kind of story now. They are all love stories now. You can make a story about forced slave marriage, or a dark genre that does not require love. The three beauties of Wuhundian are not fun. It just so happens that you are good at writing about this kind of IQ. When the time comes, you know that you can also do a time-travel in the later stage, and you can complete the Douluo chapter in one or two hundred pictures, and then the entire Ten Thousand Realms chapter. On the way, you can write about what kind of power you get, making you directly invincible. Then you can travel through those worlds that are not as powerful as you, the entire invincible stream, and slowly follow this invincible routine, each world has hundreds of thousands of words. Go through ten times and you'll be done. Maybe you can become the new great god