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Online novels should not be crammed into word count as if they were written for an exam. The language should be kept concise, and the dialogue between characters should be purposeful and effective. The description of the environment should be appropriate, especially the atmosphere of character behavior and dialogue. Do not write sterile dialogue that has nothing to do with the plot, and do not create an atmosphere full of hatred and hostility.

The language is long-winded, the logic is confusing, the characters are childish, and the plot is bizarre.

If the author writes seriously, I promise that I can invest in you and get a recommendation vote.

Author, I suggest you get to know Jiuzhe. It may be helpful for your novel.

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It can be seen that the author is working hard to write, and I am quite looking forward to this subject matter, but the problem is that there are a large number of characters at the beginning, and these characters are not real, which means they are fabricated. If they are fabricated, the author needs to give an introduction, and then strengthen the characteristics to make people have an impression, so that it will not be easily confused.

It's so well written, how about supporting each other with comments?

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