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After reading it in one go, the overall rhythm is okay, but some plots that can be developed are indeed written too briefly, and there is no need to mention them all in one go. Others are still acceptable, keep up the good work (ง •̀_•́)ง
Come on, there is no big problem, but the arrangement of the conflict is a bit delayed to be honest. The plot of Mo Qian in the latest chapter is really delayed for a long time. It feels a bit like trying to create suspense but it is written in such a way that everyone can see through it at a glance. My personal suggestion is to end it as soon as possible and move on to the next plot. Of course, it depends on the author himself. I am just giving you a suggestion.