Heavens, Start from Gangzong Yin Yang Road

There are so many horror movies to write about, there are too many, such as Transformation, Horror Cruise, Ghost Call, A Quiet Place, Dead Silence, The Ghost Shows, The Grudge, Death Comes, The Ring, Kunyan Pool, The Shining, The Graveyard, Ghost 4, Ghost 5 and other classics, let's see how the author has arranged them one by one, 😁

The author writes very well. I would like to share my opinions and suggestions here. I hope it will be helpful. I really like this type of novel, and I was very surprised when I read it. The flaws do not hide the flaws. Hong Kong horror films are the childhood memories of most people, and due to the censorship of mainland films, it can be said that most people's intuitive experience of horror, or Chinese horror, is based on the images of Hong Kong horror films of the older generation, as well as traditional folk ghost stories. I feel very good about the beginning of this book. Compared with most other previous novels that all start with Jiu Shu and Zhengying movies, starting with Yin Yang Road has a unique flavor. It is just that Yin Yang Road may not be as widely spread as Ying Shu to a certain extent, but it also has more freshness. Since the author chose the Yin Yang Road series of movies as the life background of the protagonist, the author probably prefers to watch this type of movies and is a fan. The thing that scares me the most about works with this type of theme is that it is not like a ghost movie or a ghost story. If you change the skin, it can be said to be an action movie. This can be seen from some current works. The author started with the Yin Yang Road movie, which really surprised me, because the Yin Yang Road movie series is very close to the ghost stories and urban anecdotes that were circulated in the streets of Hong Kong in the past. The story inside is also very standard and different from other types of movie stories. The protagonist accidentally breaks a taboo and ends up with no good end. There is also an ending similar to the annihilation of the group, instead of a story line that forcefully redeems the respect at the end. I think this is actually a major feature of this series of movies: it is not making a movie, but telling ghost stories. People who encounter ghosts in ghost stories will definitely not end well. Otherwise, how can ghost stories be scary when told? Of course, the title of this book contains Zhutian and Hong Kong Zong. It should be a world view that has been combined and organized by the author. Not only does it have the plot of the Yin Yang Road movie, but the author certainly cannot just tell a ghost story. The protagonist has a golden finger, and he certainly cannot be like ordinary people. In fact, it doesn't have to be consistent with the writing style of other Hong Kong comprehensive novels. The main world view and background setting of this book are a world with ghosts and weirdness. This represents a difference in writing foundation. The other is a comprehensive supernatural Hong Kong movie. If the plot design is similar to a police and gangster complex, the main character image will not be suitable. After all, no matter how good the marksmanship is and the wealth is huge, it is difficult to deal with ghosts directly, and this is also the basic setting of the ghost movie genre. In this worldview, some of the protagonist's opening words are actually really good. Being a sinister villain is very awesome, and you can always be yourself. With great wealth and immense power, even if you are unlucky, you may not have a happy ending. This is different from the writing style of Hong Kong variety shows and urban essays. This is not to say that the protagonist must be an ascetic monk with a pure heart and ascetic desires, but it is the main stance. The first interesting point for readers will not be this: In a world full of ghosts and strange things, how famous is the protagonist? Are you on the wealth ranking list? How much power? Common urban culture is cool, pretending to be cool, being admired and flattered by people around you, etc. The weight of these will make you look different. The following are some personal opinions for communication: I hope that the author's works will become better and better, and his results will become better and better. 1. The focus and leads of the plot in the early stage can be Yin De and system task rewards. The reason why the system rewards are put later is to avoid a kind of mechanical deity with system capabilities to destroy the atmosphere. It is also because the main body of the story should still be this world that combines many ghost movies. In the later stage, the plot can appropriately make some linkages between ghost movies. Or the protagonist has to be infected with some causes and effects, in order to save close relatives and friends around him, or because of the things and goals he wants to do, the price he must bear? In the end, it all depends on the author's own opinions, inspiration, and choices. 2. Ghost fighting can avoid a single action-style writing, such as two people fighting, or a man fighting a monster. After all, a major feature of ghosts in ghost movies is the existence of ghosts themselves, which cannot be seen or touched. Fighting ghosts is definitely one of the most exciting points in this type of work, and it's not an exaggeration to say that it is the first exciting point. The key is actually the weirdness and terrifying power of ghosts. In ghost movies, it is almost invulnerable and irresistible. How strange and unique is it? So what kind of story did these strange and terrifying ghosts appear in this world? (Origin Story) These contents are the key to truly attracting readers' attention. First of all, the ghosts cannot be low, and the damage and existence methods must not be low. Of course, the process of the protagonist getting rid of them in the end cannot be too casual. Let me briefly talk about my own views. The person who finally made the decision and put the most effort into this novel must be the author. Writing a book is not easy, it is really hard work. At best, I just chatted a little bit. It was easy to talk, but easier said than done. This has always been the case.

The writing is quite good, and it will definitely be good to keep it up. The only drawback is that there are too few updates, which is not enough to read.

The writing style needs to be improved, it's a bit uncomfortable to read.

If the Hong Kong movie is well written, it has to go to Thailand, and the strength will persuade you to quit.

What can I say about this novel? The beginning was quite to my taste. Now the protagonist has almost become a fire-fighting tool man. Now that he has become a god, it seems dry and boring.

This book was okay at the beginning, and the writing went back and forth, but in the later period it became more and more invincible. This book started to develop the organization and gradually got sidetracked. I no longer have the desire to read it. It is a pity. I will wait for the author to open a new book.

After my own world gradually became invincible, the plot felt less attractive than before. I feel like this is a common problem with this type of novel. Other people's novels can still be read after reaching 1,000 chapters. Whenever the protagonist becomes invincible, another enemy will be added to him, and there will be a detailed setting of a higher level. The plot must not be cliched and not overlap with the previous plot. The chapters are broken in a special way, making people want to keep reading. The plot of this author's book seems to be bland now.

The layout is so big, including the heavens and the system, but the protagonist is such a novice, I have a strong feeling that you will fail.

Name: Zhang Qiaoqiao Gender: Female Race: Ghost Talent: Summon: Imp Skills: Illusion, Life, Claws, Hair, Ghost Bone Eater Skills: Dunjia Heavenly Book Inner Alchemy: Ice Spirit Pearl can master the ice and snow water in the world to protect the body, and is not afraid of the sun and any magic weapon with yang attribute to damage Ghost Weapon: Flowing Cloud Gauze The treasures in the ghost world contain secret spells that can seduce souls and kill ghosts like swords Image: A beautiful female ghost with long black hair, a phoenix robe and a ribbon Introduction: The ghost bride, longing to be loved, falls in love with the male protagonist in the ghost world and follows him. {"NickName":"Book Friends 2021030110401914508","UserId":211039082}

The plot is clear and reasonable, unlike some Hong Kong ghosts who have no side effects and are just like people with super powers. Who else wants to be a human being?

The early writing is really good, and it has the potential to become a god-like work. The protagonist's way of thinking in the early stage is deeply resonant. He really thinks from the perspective of ordinary people and promotes the plot. The sense of immersion is very strong. Choose many film and television works with ghosts and ghosts, but the protagonists have no magic powers. This setting is very interesting, and there are many exciting points to explode. The part where the saint appears in front of people is natural and refreshing. The shortcomings are that the combat power increases too quickly in the later stage, too many dungeons are opened, the characters are too complicated, the emotional scenes are not well written, the story pace is too fast, the writing skills are slightly behind, and the fighting descriptions are too detailed. Slowly falling into a cliché. I hope the author can give me a reply after reading my review. I really like this book I hope the author

I've been chasing it, and suddenly I saw it was limited and free. How should I put it? It's wrong. At the beginning, I came here for ghost movies from Hong Kong, Southeast Asia and Taiwan, but then I ended up writing about time travel, Underworld, and Sweet Home. The author, one Hong Kong ghost movie is enough for you to write a lot. When writing ghost movies, you have to focus on it. Most readers come here for ghost movies. What's behind you?

Be patient when writing, don't write after you have no patience to write anymore. As long as your writing is not particularly bad at the starting point, the last will win in the end.

Already read, discarded, I hate the thoughtless reduction of combat power.

I watched a lot for free and then subscribed again. What I wrote before is really flesh and blood. The protagonist is still a normal person who sees a beautiful girl and wants to see money and earn money, and he is also tough. After being put on the shelves, he became a virtuous monk. I'll just turn into a robot and make copies later. The protagonist is still marginalized. I hope I can write it down later. A good book is hard to find. This kind of Hong Kong drama can have no female protagonist, but if the protagonist is a eunuch, it usually won't last long.

The author of "Pulling the Street", the arrangement of Lightning Running and Thunder Fist is so handsome.

According to the way the author writes it now, I feel like poof. I really liked it at first, and I recommended it for the monthly pass. What do you write about it now? It is becoming more and more perfunctory, that is, there is no echo between the past and the present, and the characters are becoming more and more stereotyped. How many of the previous characters do you know? Forget it if you open dungeons all the way, why not open two copies at the same time? When someone else writes a copy, there is a main thread of upgrading. Where do you think of it? Stop watching

Since you want to suppress the protagonist's growth progress, gold boxes should not appear frequently. Huang felt a little confused when he saw the gold box being replaced with a silver box.

I feel like the author needs to sort out his thoughts. The writing is getting worse and worse. I am ready to abandon the book and don't want to follow up.

I specially ordered one to speak for myself. To be honest, the lottery is too poisonous. The price of gold is high, but the pig's feet have only been drawn once. Why do you believe so strongly? If you change it to silver, it happens to be disposable garbage. I don't understand why disposable garbage makes pig's feet feel good? That's not how leveling is done, right? In Chapter 80, Pig's Knuckle is still an ordinary person who basically relies on props. It's rare to have such a limited skill. Let's talk about the lottery. A normal person would choose to use gold to see if he can draw a skill that can be practiced, but why didn't pig's feet think about it? It is obvious that the golden task is almost life-threatening, and it is not easy to complete, so why do you have to forcibly reduce the level?

There are so many ghost movies, but Underworld is too irrelevant.

I haven't read the book, but the introduction says what you can learn from Leon. To be honest, Leon's ability can be said to defeat most of the power systems in Hong Kong, because he is very idealistic. Leon thought that he could resurrect people by hitting them with a folding stool, but he actually resurrected them. He thought that a hat made of paper could fly, but it turned out that it could actually fly. This kind of idealistic power combined with the mind of a time traveler can make him invincible.

The writing is pretty good. Now that Qiu Shuzhen has appeared, will it be too late for others? Author, you have to seize the treasure. Dragon Mother on the 13th of July, Michelle Reis Incredible Tuesday, Vivian Chow Ghost Karaoke, Chen Farong Caught by Ghosts, Wang Zuxian, Gao Lihong Charcoal Burning Curse, Wan Qiwen Do not let strangers enter to ask for rice. Zhu Yin The ghost stays with you all night Gigi Gigi The ghost building Zhang Min, Bai Anni, Guan Xiumei The corpse house Zhong Kui's sword My wife is not a human being Guan Zhilin Shocking Zhou Haimei Jiwu hidden beauty Li Zhi The ghost slaughterhouse Hong Xin Buddha Jumps Over the Wall Li Lizhen Yin Yang Road Cai Shaofen I Love the Immortal Zhe Zhong Chuhong Thrilling Zhong Liti The Fierce Ghost Comes Out of the Cage Wen Bixia Ghost Granny                  *⁂((✪⥎✪))⁂* ， 👀

Author, I suggest you change it. Since the protagonist is set to look like the celebrity Bai Gu, and his temperament is even more outstanding, then don't let the pig's feet in horror movies all look exactly the same. There is also a god setting, which is actually very consistent with the supernatural worldview. If the protagonist is so awesome that he has cultivated immortality to the point of heaven and earth, most people simply cannot write about the feeling of a boss who masters immortality. Since when did becoming a god start to feel LOW? Is it because everyone looks down on Douluo because their goal is to become a god? We won't talk about the power of God in Douluo. There are many different abilities of gods in Chinese mythology, and there are many excellent ones. Moreover, there are also gods of pure faith, ancient gods, and natural gods. Walking along the road of gods, I feel that this book is very suitable for the author. A little suggestion, everyone will laugh.

Alas, I haven't read it for a long time, and it turned out to be the eunuch. I still remember that this book seems to be the representative work of Hong Kong's strange style. I have already ordered half of it, and I kept it because of work. The result is this. I feel that if it is written well, it will be as good as Mengjun's "Don't Be a Boss", and it will become a classic of Hong Kong's strange style. What a pity. Let's look at other things.

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It's not enough, the author should work harder

The writing is very good at the beginning. After chapter 200, some sentences don't make sense and it's too awkward to read, but the book is still good.

In the first half, I kept praising the protagonist for how handsome he is, how he seduces girls, and how he seduces opportunities. I thought it was just a piece of pure entertainment, so I used it as white noise. But the section in Lucca Village was really interesting. Although it was still a bit stuck, the protagonist's inner thoughts were not detailed in that section, but the struggle between conscience and survival instinct was really refreshing. Yes, but it is expressed as if the protagonist gives alms to the villagers. It is not very good, and it is obviously his choice to risk his life and the villagers' persistence, but he says it is God's will. This makes me very unhappy. My destiny is up to me. Even if the world is turned upside down, we are like ants, but the will to move forward or stop is ours. It is not God's will, but ours.