If You Can't Be the Emperor's Son-In-Law, You Can Only Become a Sage.

If you can wipe out the world with one sword, why should you be a consort? Wouldn't it be nice to just change the dynasty and become the emperor? If it's not nice to be the emperor, you can just find a place to be a land tiger (I haven't read the content. After reading the introduction, I don't want to read it anymore when I see someone saying it is a dog-licking article)

I can understand your desire to write a good story, but there are some problems with your supporting role. Your Marquis of Wu'an is 24 years old and 4th grade, which is a bit uncomfortable. Since he is already such a genius, how can you express the genius of the protagonist? The key is that at this age, you can say that he is brave in fighting, but if you want to say that he is on the defensive side, I think it is not necessary. He is only 24 years old and has limited time. How can he practice martial arts and also master the art of war at the same time? What's going on? Just know it when you are born. This makes your cultivation in this world seem like a piece of cake. There is also the big-eyed Taoist. Is it considered a state religion? So, is he a sect? If he is a sect, why are there no other sects? If there are other sects, why are all the geniuses in the court? And the heroine you wrote can read Confucian scriptures at the age of one? Let's not talk about why we can talk at one year old. You can attribute it to a special physique. Just say who taught her how to read? How many months has a princess been taught how to read? Is this logical? Would you teach your one-year-old daughter to read? When you were 10 years old, you were already tall and graceful. You are a princess who grows up very fast. Do you know how old you are at 10 years old? Doesn't this show that she is stunningly beautiful? He went to the battlefield at the age of 13 and cut through thousands of armors with one sword. What's going on? Is there no one left in such a big court? What about your Marquis Wu'an? Isn't he a fourth rank? What's the matter? Your princess is already a fourth rank at the age of 13? So what can you, the princess, do if Marquis Wu An can't do it? This makes me very speechless about your power system. I can see that you were imitating Dafeng in the early stage, which can only be said to be a failure. Your writing is indeed good, but your setting is really disappointing.

It's weird that some people read this kind of dog licking article, licking is not popular anymore

A story case goes on to chapter 50, and you can imagine what the future situation will be like.

To be honest, wouldn't you be angry if you received such an unreasonable disaster? There is no vengeance or anything, and he is still in fear of his life! Why

There is a book next door called "If you don't become a son-in-law, you will know that your destiny will be holy" You two are about the same, why don't you make one "If you don't become a son-in-law, you will know that your destiny will be holy"

I feel a bit like Da Feng, but he is a lot more serious than him. I hope to do some sexy operations and write about daily life.

I'm not a sailor or anything like that. The writing is indeed okay, and it's not a bit of a dog-licking novel. It's just that the name is a bit ambiguous. You can read it.

It's pretty cool, as long as the combat power system doesn't collapse.

I thought it was Shuang Tian who was decisive in killing, only to find out that it was a conspiracy.

The trend of getting a son-in-law is very popular recently. They all follow the same routine. You travel to the past and get a son-in-law. There is a destiny system.

Li Guigong, what kind of bad name is this?

I feel like it's a bit watered down, and the plot is too draggy.

If you don't know how to write reasoning, you don't have to write it.

If you write well, you can make the investigation of the case simpler? They all read cool articles. You made the case so complicated, it doesn't feel good.

The writing is too stiff and the plot is far-fetched

The content is very good. An ordinary person saves himself with wisdom and stirs up troubles at the same time. In fact, the title and introduction are a bit dissuasive at first glance, but my love for strategy articles made me put aside my prejudice and think of Langya Bang. If you use a few words to describe it, it is also very poisonous, such as plastic surgery after a disaster, revenge, meeting a childhood sweetheart but not being able to get to know each other, etc. It is also quite bloody, but it is not like this. So I was willing to read it, and it turned out that the novel was good, worth reading, upright and courageous.

The writing is very good, but the outline is not good enough.

Why does this introduction look so familiar?

You say it, you write it

The main plot is too confusing, and I can't understand it. I'm most speechless when I put you in jail. I can just put you in jail, and torture you to death. Isn't it easy? There are so many twists and turns

I saw it very late yesterday and only left one sentence: "Well written". I will talk about it this morning. First of all, the author crazily exaggerates the heroine's character in the first chapter, and then writes that the male protagonist is the heroine's destined marriage, so that the male protagonist gets the opportunity to change his destiny from his status as the son of a farmer, who was originally going to have a dull life. Of course, great opportunities contain great risks, so it is very reasonable for the male protagonist to appear in a very critical place in prison, and it is also very reasonable to connect Wu Pusheng's case with the male protagonist's own escape from the predicament. All the above reasons mean that the male protagonist is in danger from the beginning and must use reasonable wits (investigation) to get out of the predicament. The battle of wits in online novels should not be too complicated, because readers are here for entertainment, not for hardship; nor should it be too simple, otherwise it will be suspected of insulting the readers' IQ. The author has written well so far. The second is the characterization. The male protagonist was overly sensitive after being persecuted at the beginning, which well showed the reaction of a little person after being persecuted, making the image of the male protagonist more real. Informing the male protagonist that his mother has been properly placed through the mouth of the female protagonist's servants has well created the image of the female protagonist as a kind-hearted person, making the praise of the female protagonist at the beginning more justified. Other characters also have their own characteristics, and neither the positive nor the negative characters are the same. But it cannot be said that there are no shortcomings. The first is the suffering chapter, which made me really embarrassed. For someone like me who is somewhat familiar with ancient Chinese literature, this description is really terrible. Fantasy novels about things like alchemy and weapon refining have no realistic prototypes and can be left to the author's discretion; but ancient texts, which have realistic prototypes and are almost impossible for modern people to write, can be very confusing if not handled well. In this regard, I think the author can learn from the author's approach to handling plots involving ancient prose in the two books Confucianism and Taoism and Struggle in the Red Chamber: try to embed mature and classic ancient prose into the novel to reduce the sense of drama. The second is a little problem. The male protagonist has been farming for fifteen years. Once he was in jail, the next he was good, and the rest of his time was spent investigating cases. Theoretically, he has no time to learn how to play chess, but in Chapter 49, the male protagonist played well, which is a bit unreasonable. It is recommended that the author add a patch indicating that the male protagonist liked to play chess in his previous life. In the future, when it comes to this skill, it can be attributed to the previous life, just like the classic Hawaiian Territory (laughs).

When I saw Chapter 20 entering the casino, I suddenly lost interest. The casino part is a bit like the Dragon King with a crooked mouth.

I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. The last time I read a book like this was by the master Mao Ni. Come on, author.

It looks average and the outline is very confusing. Come on.

In the animal world, the strong are respected, and all rules are designed to restrict the weak from using their strength.

I came across two books by Today's Eunuch

I've been waiting for a few days. Has the new book been released? Or should I open a new account?

I haven't seen you for a few days and I'm a eunuch. . . . .

No more, it's over, eunuch