My Daughter Said: This Kind of Person Is Not Worthy of Being a Parent.

It's disgusting. There are tens of thousands of viewers, but no one has any brains.

The summary of the plot is good, but the writing is terrible. If you can read it from memory, you can write dozens of chapters for me. Each audience is more brainless than the other. I will blame it later and praise it later, making it seem that the whole audience is fucking acting. Don't write what I have written. The next few chapters appear again. Wasn't it good when we put them together? Why should we separate? I finally reached 50 progress, and then I looked at it and wow, it returned to 40 progress. It was a mess.

The writing is very good and the logic is very strong. Keep up the good work.

I think Xia Ziyu is mentally ill. Even after she has grown up, she doesn't know how to put herself in someone else's shoes. It's weird. I really don't know how she became a star. I suggest Xia Ziyu see a brain doctor.

Author, why don't you check what you wrote before posting? After reading more than ten chapters, it is really unbearable. The twists and turns have been reversed so many times. The audience and the heroine have no brains. You said that the heroine is hereditary, and she has no brains. The male protagonist will show more or less kindness to her, right? Then why is she still so naive? He is not as good as his father. With the term father, everyone basically remembers something good about their father. I didn't read it later, so I don't know, but there is a saying that either the heroine received a high-level education, or she didn't receive a high-level education. If she accepted the sentiment, she should be better. If she didn't, how could she become a star? The audience is also a bunch of pigs, all following the heroine. The celebrities all have rivals and scumbags. Who wouldn't order an undercover agent to come in in this kind of situation? You said you wanted to reverse it together later to make it more enjoyable. Then don't be so vicious with what you wrote before! If you write like this, who can see behind it? Okay ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ, that's it for the description of the female protagonist. The description of the male protagonist is still very good, but I feel that the deposit can be kept, the deposit for divorce. I feel that a father can give up all dignity for his daughter. Of course, I will make a suggestion, knowing that not everyone is like this, and maybe he was angry at the time. Okay, the review is more or less finished. It's pretty good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I have only read chapters 1 to 50, all about Xia Ziyu First of all, from a time perspective, there is no logic at all, it keeps repeating. Before the age of four, there is no timeline, and it is a bit repetitive and wordy Secondly, inner activities, etc., Are too rigid and lacking in spirit.

This novel is really not that good. It's very touching when it's not brainy. But when it's brainy, it's just a bad article. So many viewers are idiots. Since it's Xia Changzheng's memory, isn't it expressed in such a clear and clear way? It doesn't even have a brain. I'm really convinced. Xia Ziyu is also a brainless person.

There is a saying that it is really disgusting to use the memory of the protagonist but bring it in from the perspective of others. For example: the male protagonist said that he has AIDS and his inner monologue should be that he is sorry. The woman's father's body has the poison left by the treatment of bone cancer and he cannot be close to you. Doesn't it mean that my father doesn't love you? What about the inner monologue? I wanted to write a long story but lowered the quality. It really outweighs the gain and loss.

First, the setting is to release memories, but many memories have disappeared. Even if his father's AIDS was made up by himself, it can be taken seriously by people watching the show Second, bone cancer has been accepted by the audience at the beginning, but in the following chapters, they question whether he has bone cancer Third, the order and logic of the book are very confusing. Next time, remember to write a mind map before constructing the novel

To be honest, the writing is not bad, but it's a bit messy.

I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding you.

First of all, the text is too repetitive and the story can't be told well, so don't write it.

It's complete garbage. The 50,000 viewers have no brains. The plot is messed up and I can't read it.

Really, I don't understand it at all, it's very confusing, and it's completely out of touch with reality. If a father can tell his daughter that he has AIDS, that's really amazing. The author should think more before writing. It's better not to write this kind of low-quality article.

There's no logic at all, it's a mess, I can't stand it anymore

It's rubbish among rubbish. It's written in a mess, confusing, and forced to be sensational. My evaluation is: go home and farm!

If you don't have a brain, you can read it, because if you have a brain, it will give you a headache (´;;`). I'm really convinced that it's so messed up and messy, you are a god, wipe it.

The logic seems confusing, the plot is confusing and repetitive. If it's just for sensationalism, then there's no need.

Really only NT can write these novels

I'm sorry To be honest, I read it without thinking, I feel sorry for you Can I use my brain a little Don't tell me that I watched it, my brain hurts from listening to it A lot of logic doesn't make sense, and I may be pursuing a lawsuit when I listen, but suddenly I am confused. It suddenly appeared and I won't pursue the complaint. It's seriously off topic, so I'll mark it at least. I feel like I'm going to be insulted if I didn't mark it at all.

Don't watch anyone who hasn't read it, except those who don't have any brains.

Does the first paragraph mention two lives and a song that Blue Star doesn't have? (I can only say that the time traveler is really miserable), the content is confusing, and the logic is confusing. Anyway, it is recommended to judge from his admission of mistakes.

The ghost settings are forced together? Don't you feel uncomfortable reading it yourself? Don't you read it yourself after you write this? It's just pure sensationalism, and it's stuffed into it. Speechless really

You can write very well, but it's a pity

Even if I get stuck in the defense, I can't read it

It started out fine, but the more I looked at it, the worse it got.

I really don't want to say this, but the writing is really bad. The storyline is a mess. Everyone in the story is a brainless thing. The content is not good, the story is not good, and the characterization is not good. Apart from the endless number of words, I really can't stand it anymore. The author really needs to read more and practice more.