Start a New Life from Qing Yu Nian

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Why doesn't anyone write about the eldest princess?

1 Begonia Duoduo (first choice) 2 Fan Ruoruo (optional) 3 Ye Linger (I have an idea but don't know where to start) 4 Manager (can't control it) 5 Battle with Doudou (I don't feel it) 6. The eldest princess (I dare not think about it) 7 Aunt Liu (too much) 8 Ye Qingmei (I heard that she is still a minor when she appears and can be punished.)

So far, this book is still in a streaking state, with 436 recommendation votes and 575 votes. I don't know what these numbers are, but I get upset every time I see them. Everyone, please come and check in. Let me count how many friends are watching.

I always feel that Emperor Shitian's idea is in line with the mentality of a time traveler, quietly developing his own power, and only then coming out to cause trouble when he is invincible. Is power really that important to time travellers? It's better to live a good life by yourself, especially since this power was obtained by being a dog for others. When your strength reaches the level of Grand Master, you will naturally have a position of power, which is not much better than the previous struggle. Why touch the royal power when you have no ability to protect yourself. Being a dog is not what I said. Killing Mei and performing the ceremony was a pawn for Emperor Qing. Even though he knew it was wrong, he was unwilling to do it, but because of the pressure of power, he still did it against his will.

Joker knows that this book has many flaws, but Joker is my first time writing a book, so this should be excusable, right? I spend a lot of time writing books, and I really don't have much royalties. I hope my friends will stop complaining in paragraph comments. You must know that your paragraph comments will affect many friends who want to read the book. If you really want to complain, just complain in this post. I just hope you don't curse others.

From the beginning where it was said that Fan Xian and his mother are time travellers, I couldn't stand it anymore. I wanted to know where the author got this information. Even I, who have never seen Qing Yu Nian, knew that his mother was from the military museum. As for the modern memory that Fan Xian has, it seems that Fan Xian has modern memory because of some experimental object that his mother took when she left the military museum.

I stole a comment today, please don't get me wrong.

How can such a good book not contain any idioms? I'll start with the "dilemma"

Concept art of the main character... The stranger is like jade, the young master is unparalleled

Generally speaking, it's weird if you still can't reach the target after time-traveling. You will feel that the protagonist is rubbish. In fantasy, he is immortal and invincible. After all, he is the best in the world. Or maybe there is a change of dynasty. After time-traveling, do you just want to be an official? Actually went to be a soldier? ? ? If you write like this, why don't you just relax and start enjoying it by relying on plug-ins? I think it would be more appropriate. Is setting too small a goal or having no goal really suitable for a fantasy time travel novel●)o(●

You can see from the back, but the front is redundant. The system is also redundant. There are very few opportunities for the protagonist and his subordinates to show off in various martial arts. Even the ninth grade is just on par with the saint. They have footwork, swordsmanship, internal strength and mental skills. Is this all in your hands? Even the Grandmaster didn't dare to mention it, let alone a battle. It would be easier to just give the protagonist martial arts talent and add a chance encounter with someone else to teach him martial arts. There are a lot of anniversary gifts that are flashy, but few of them are useful. It is purely a setting to make up for the word count. The childhood life in the beginning is also not well written. The protagonist has no ambitions since childhood and has no personal goals. However, it is okay to develop power under possible crises, but the power is also written in a petty manner, like a child playing house. Talking about marriage after two days without feeling anything about Fan Ruoruo is also speechless, and I wasted an opportunity to describe the emotional line of the heroine. The only thing is that the plot is well written. Although the response to the villain is naive and real, it is still not courageous enough. After all, he dares to use force, so he is just submissive. What is the matter with being timid and feeling inferior in his heart. There are many self-contradictions in the setting. At the beginning, the time travel identity is hidden, but later it is vaguely revealed, and the setting is changed and discarded. In short, the author does not have a clear positioning of the protagonist's character and goal direction. Simple, elegant, young general, villain behind the scenes, I really don't have a deep impression. What he did, why he did it, and how he did it are also very confusing. There is less emotional foreshadowing and more straightforward words. Looking at the stunned young man, the role positioning is really bad.

She has to be the heroine to celebrate more than one year😁😁😁

Fan Ruoruo Benruo

Everyone knows that the book's performance is not good, and the clown also knows that he can't make any money by writing books. He is just doing it for fun and fulfilling his dream. I have my own life pressure, and I have to work hard for my own life. I said I am not a prisoner, but you can't expect me to give up my main job and spend a lot of time coding. Please understand each other. I have never asked for subscriptions or rewards. I just use my spare time to do what I want to do, so the updates will not be stable. All I can guarantee is constant updates! Thank you all! ! !

If the protagonist becomes a grand master, maybe more people will watch it, right? There's no way, people nowadays don't read novels for pleasure, why should they also depend on what you do🐶? For example, if you have no strength, will you kneel down when you see Emperor Qing? Not everyone is Fan Xian, he is the son of Emperor Qing. Kneeling is a poisonous point. If you don't kneel, the logic will not make sense. If you appear next to Fan Xian, you are destined to fall into the trap of Emperor Qing and Chen Pingping. What do you think you should do? With Emperor Qing's character, could he still fawn over you?

I can't stand it anymore, it makes my head hurt.